| Short New Year Poem Posted: 8/2/2008 11:57:48 PM | Ambitious Libra, Thanks for dropping some lines... Sad as they may seem...but then maybe I did not get the poem...
Heart Devoured
the sky is blue the sky is black sometimes the eyes can only see through shattered lens of one's history | |
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| Short New Year Poem Posted: 8/3/2008 12:10:48 AM | jolted from sleep
deams the weirdest as if waken from a drunk
heart pounding furiously
checked moon phases (it's a new moon)
must be the indian food | |
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| Short New Year Poem Posted: 8/3/2008 12:12:04 AM | Bear with me "river"
Passing you by as we drive down the road Wondering what is in your heart, when our eyes meet.
If i could have just one more day with you and one more time for you to hold, me in your arm's i'd feel like i have died and went to heaven.
No words will ever express how much i still deeply love you and how hard it was to watch you walk back to your ride, when our paths crossed once again like they seem to be doing alot lately.
It's been over 3yrs now and i thought i had moved on and that the feelings have left me but the truth is the feelings are stronger than they have ever been and they keep growing, stronger for you and i still love you if i could only have those momments back i'd NEVER had walked out the door i should have stayed and work things out between us no matter who was in the way of us.
I'll Love You J.W.P Always N Forever | |
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| Short New Year Poem Posted: 8/3/2008 12:26:11 AM | no problem floating down the river i have to say i like ur poem, its very good | |
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| Short New Year Poem Posted: 8/3/2008 6:57:46 AM | 'sometimes the eyes can only see through shattered lens of one's history' riv...that is simply beautiful~
edit up there on my last post..i was awaken from a DREAM...not waken from a deam!!! ~your neighborhood typo queen!~ | |
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| Short New Year Poem Posted: 8/4/2008 1:15:37 AM | Hello Rose....Always good Rose when you stop by...Even if you can't spel(haha). It's your thoughts that count with me. Ambitous Libra...Stop in a drop a poem off anytime...thanks Heather...Beautiful...Beautiful...Poem and Person...Thanks for baring your soul however painful it must feel...Someday kid your heart will be restored...I wish I had a poem but I don't but heres some lyrics to a song by Patsy Cline that expresses how you feel...If you have never heard the song, please get it and listen...everything you feel is in the song. Stop by again and bring another poem...ok?
..................I Fall To Pieces...............
I fall to pieces, every time I see you again. I fall to pieces. How can I just be your friend?
You want me to act like we never kissed. You want me to forget, pretend that we've never met. And I've tried and I've tried, but I haven't yet. You walk by and I fall to pieces.
I fall to pieces, Each time some one speaks your name. I fall to pieces. Time only adds to the flame.
You tell me to find someone else to love, Someone who'll love me too, like you used to do. But each time I go out with some one new, You walk by and I fall to pieces.
You walk by and I fall to pieces. | |
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| Sharing and Caring Posted: 8/4/2008 1:23:24 AM | I walked her path which led to my road side by side we strolled
I talked of pain that only she knows step by step we go
I balked at truth she cared like a friend beat by beat we lend | |
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| Sharing and Caring Posted: 8/4/2008 5:15:39 AM | ((Morning Riv. ))
Stretch awake days plans rise to conscience mind anticipation first steps of new mark the calendar step in time. | |
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| Sharing and Caring Posted: 8/4/2008 7:23:07 PM | Lucky!!! Hello there!!! Thanks for stopping by...Seems like you slept well...
Well another short simple mans poem:
blueberries are a real treat plump and juicy; real sweet the first one I ever tasted came from her lips; nothing wasted
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| Short New Year Poem Posted: 8/5/2008 8:10:13 PM | I'm Sorry I Do Not Have Much Time To Be In, The Thread/s Until My Son Is Asleep!
Hey river thanks about the poem i have alot more someday if you feel like reading more of my writtings just drop me a message and i'll send some your way, but here is one i would like to share on your thread.
Baby On The Way!
She's all alone fearing nobody acturly care's anymore about her or the baby all she hear's from everybody around, is how she does not know what she's getting into with haveing a baby.
The father away for a very long time without any other contact other than writting one another back and forth, forced to try to move on with her life for her and the baby's sake.
She's trying so hard to remember all the good time's they once share before he got locked up and all, the promise's that was made before the burden came along.
Deep down inside she know's that he will be home soon so she try's to keep her faith and not worry so much about him being locked up, and not being able to see him or even kiss him goodnight.
Thing's arent what they use to be anymore she has not slept since the night he had to go away leaving her and their unborn child for, god know's how long it may take.
She try's to not worry or think about all the bad time's they have been through and what all has happend since the day he's been in that hell hole but, at night time it get's harder for her to just forget it and move on with her life.
People keep telling her how she need's to move on with her life and worry about her and the baby and she try's so hard to ignore what she's being told, because she know's everything will be okay when he's out and he's back home.
She wonder's how thing's will be when their baby is born and if he never get's to arrive back home until ten or fifteen year's, later and how their child will react when he or she does not get to meet their daddy until they are 10 or 15 year's old.
She still remember's the night it all took place when she begged him not to leave the house that night and the word's he told her and how he will, be back in 30 minute's and that he loves her and kisses her goodbye.
Now she's left all alone with nobody who actually care's about how she is feeling or what she's going through and how this will affect, their unborn child and how it feel's like he will never return home.
By: ~Heather Feazel~ 2-7-06 | |
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| Born Beyond the Bars... Posted: 8/5/2008 9:21:38 PM | Heather....Wow!!! Now thats a poem!!! It moved me...I hope its not real...
Born Beyond the Bars
I'm in this cell, starin at the walls tryin to hear my baby's calls I vision the slap on my baby's rear seein mamma's face shed a tear
I'm laying in this hospital bed with my baby sleeping near my head She feels my heartbeat on my breast but daddy's gone there'll be no rest
Thanks Heather...keep them coming. | |
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| Mom...Let him Go Posted: 8/5/2008 9:36:24 PM | my brother Chuck died in april my dad the Irishman cried and cried my mom the German held it inside
And now she's real sick again
i hate to see her this way i just wish she would let go of her son if she keeps holding on to him she will soon be up there with him
And my dad will be crying and crying again | |
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| Born Beyond the Bars... Posted: 8/5/2008 9:55:55 PM | | Thanks for the comment on the poem floating down" let me make sure of something, is this an thread where you go from the last line of the above poem or where you post some of yours? | |
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| Born Beyond the Bars... Posted: 8/5/2008 10:12:17 PM | riv
we can worry and worry and worry but all we can really do is love
(love you...rosie) | |
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| Born Beyond the Bars... Posted: 8/6/2008 3:02:50 AM | And Rosie,
I love you too. Beat by beat you always lend. Too busy today to write a poem but a poem is coming your way. Take care of granny, sweetheart, we (brothers and sisters) are looking after mom and dad...it's so hard...They will be married 60 years in Nov. We have a huge party planned...Limmo's, Band, Resteraunt, Photographers... The whole shot. | |
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| Born Beyond the Bars... Posted: 8/6/2008 7:40:09 AM | his kissed the morning with his brilliance illuminating the clouds sweetly she blushed and sang his praise...
(beautiful walk this morning!!) | |
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| Born Beyond the Bars... Posted: 8/6/2008 9:53:44 PM | Here is another poem of mines hope yall like.
~Lover's Quarel~
Here it goes again another cold night another, couple fighting i wonder what happend to their love that was so strong in the start.
I Close my eye's and start to prey please don't let another great couple's realtionship go down the pipes, i hear her yelling from across the hall and see him begging her not to leave.
I wonder what happend to them they was so inlove nothing could ever come between them now all you hear from them, is fighting and hatefull words about eachother.
She tell's him she never meant to fall inlove with him and if she could live that day all over again, she would have never even tooken the chance a tear start's to roll down his face and he try's to be strong and not to cry.
He begs of her just one last chance to proove his love to her and show her how much she truly means to him, but she ignores all his word's and all his feeling's and just walk's away.
I start to wonder even more about the couple and how could they go from being the happiest couple in the world from not being able to look at one another she start's yelling even more louder, that she wishes he would just go away and leave her alone that she was happier without him in her life.
He walk's down the hall still crying inside and outside and thought's keep running through his mind of how could we have ended like this, my one and only true love now you see me on my hand's and knees begging you just one more chance and you just look at me and walk away.
A few day's passes by and she's all alone in the appartment and she hear's there song on the radio and she start's to wonder how in the world could she have gave up the one true, person who has made her happy every sense the first time she laid eye's on him.
She see's him walking down the street with this frown upon his face and she feel's even more guilty and she walk's over there to, see if he's okay and if they could talk he just look's into her eye's and tell's her no just leave me alone please you broke my heart once and if i let you back in you'r just do it all over again.
Now she's the one laying down on her bed everynight with tear's comming out of her eye's and wondering why did she throw away the best year, of her life and the only person who could make her truly happy.
He used to think that he would never get over her and that there would be no one else like her to walk into his life here it is a year later down the road, and he's married to the girl who love's him back as much love he used to have for the one who broke his heart.
He look's out the window and see's the girl who he used to love walking down the road with another guy and she look's so unhappy, and so confused but he start's to smile because he now know's what it feels like to be truly happy and to be truly loved.
He ask his self over and over how could that have happend to two people who was once so inlove and so perfect for one another and in one moment turn around and be separated.
Heather Feazel 7-29-04 | |
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| Looking for Love... Posted: 8/7/2008 3:18:57 PM | Thanks Heather,
Heres a short one:
the stories of finding love would all have a happy ending if the love we searched for was found in the beginning | |
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| Short Poem Posted: 8/7/2008 4:31:24 PM | Sweet little birdie, Pearched on the sill. A new sun is rising, It seems like time is standing still.
She is whistling softly, As she nibbles on crumbs of bread, I said "why did she get so close", As the window closes and smashes her head. | |
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| Short Poem Posted: 8/7/2008 5:09:55 PM | poor birdie tweet tweet | |
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| Short Poem Posted: 8/8/2008 3:32:57 AM | I carved a poem on a tree reread scratched head Damn!!! That's sappy | |
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| Short Poem Posted: 8/8/2008 9:35:12 PM | Words
Words etched in tree bark, Tell a story of life and love. Pictures on paper, Paint many words. The eye and mind of the beholder, Portrays the message on the tree bark, Translates the pictures on the paper, Words become pictures, Pictures become words. The tale is told. | |
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| Short Poem Posted: 8/9/2008 1:50:42 AM | clever riv really clever!!!
interesting writes here
what a range
from silly shorts to heartfelt rambles to touching images
eclectic i must say eclectic!
(it's 2am here...when i'm rested i'll post something more worthy....just wanted to stop in for a minute and say hey!) | |
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| Short Poem Posted: 8/9/2008 6:55:17 AM | Leavin Las Vegas
I have a job with decent skills, I have my beer and I have my pills, I lose sometimes and I take my spills, But if my bills are paid I'm going to have my thrills!
Gold bracelets, diamonds, money and furs, Beautiful women running all around here. Last night and everynight is still just a blur, I don't know how I will ever leave here! | |
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| Short Poem Posted: 8/9/2008 7:06:13 AM | This one's on me
Get up and dance, let's party all night long, This one's on me, I've written way too many songs, We are having so much fun, that is why I'm here with you, This is foot stompin music, we ain't got time for the blue's!
I will not try to spend too much time, Writing this song with my words that don't rhyme, These words come too easy, it's scary and true, This one's on me, and it's all about you. | |
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