Zee
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Joined: 4/11/2004
Msg: 51 | |
| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/5/2004 1:56:19 AM | you know the best thing about a tongue ? it has a way of turning something into nothing, from the moment it touches soft lips, it takes a life of its own, it shows no mercy when its on a mission.
so are your a good teacher - or do you think you will have to be shown how to use what is a good gift *g* | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 52 | |
| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/5/2004 8:22:13 AM | tongues like dancing have a rhythm of their own. let's explore what symphony's our
tongue's can create working together as one. | |
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Zee
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Joined: 4/11/2004
Msg: 53 | |
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| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/5/2004 3:37:33 PM | It seems that you are very grateful about your life and that you've reach a point in your life where one day you opened your eyes and realized that there is more to living then what you've lived. Good reading.....I enjoyed reading it.
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| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/5/2004 7:31:04 PM | This one came out of almost nowhere tonight. I'm not sure how it directly illustrates joy, but sometimes feeling loss and realizing an end isn't an end can be joyous itself.
I dunno. I also thought it was time to make a meaningful contribution to Chuck's thread.
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Joy is still present though this is our parting.
One more walk along the river;
One more time across the bridge;
One more hour together.
She hates bridges, but she follows me
Her hand in mine, a small bird caged
By my fingers, pulse hammering in its breast.
We talk of plans, we talk of the future.
This is the demarcation point;
This is where we go in different directions;
This is where I remind myself she is music;
This is where I tell myself the symphony
Must be heard by letting go of each note.
As difficult as that may be
And she goes out there, on her own two feet
To face her future;
To face her life;
To meet people.
I’m all at once filled with joy and dread.
No emotion is clean through.
As much as I want to hang on to her
I have to let go.
Then, at once, I know she’ll do fine.
We met, too, on this crazy funhouse floor
Purely accidental, purely by chance
How can I deny her the adventure?
How can I take away her joy?
How can I deny my own will
To see her do well in this life?
And here is that pleasure of casting
Fear to the wind, dread to the earth
And my love to her.
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Zee
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Joined: 4/11/2004
Msg: 56 | |
| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/6/2004 3:16:21 AM | | Goat - sweeeeeeeeet bitter sweet - thats what yah call true love being able to let go - strong person that person - stronger than most | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 57 | |
| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/6/2004 10:54:40 PM | | i agree zee..goatsmell your truly a genuine dude | |
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| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/7/2004 8:05:30 AM | Yeah, she's a good friend and I'll miss her. She's also tragically (and quite a bit) younger than I am and cursed with devastating beauty. No one takes her seriously because of it, except for me.
I feel much better about it now though. | |
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Zee
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Joined: 4/11/2004
Msg: 59 | |
| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/7/2004 7:19:03 PM | | wow goat, sorry to hear that, BIG HUG, glad you are better about it .... | |
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| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/7/2004 7:23:54 PM | GoatSmell....
.....you are ables to aim to my heart !…
you have arrows that breaks my heart….
go on.....Master
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 61 | |
| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/8/2004 7:09:38 PM | | outdoorguru, you were right in your assetment of my poem. melina i miss you , you should drop by more often | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 62 | |
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| Re: the joy of life
Posted: 7/11/2004 3:05:59 AM | can I steal little joy from you today.....Chuck?
miss it...
sure is just a moment......
love | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 64 | |
| MELINA
Posted: 7/11/2004 6:38:41 AM | her beauty is captivating and untouched
by the hands of time
her youth springs eternal, she gets better
with age like a fine italian wine
her words gently spoken with grace and purity
are like that of an angel, creating music
from the heavens that lift my soul
way above the clouds and all their glory
her heart is like that of a childs
innocent and full of life
immune to the toils of man
and his heartbreak and strife
dedicated to melina---chuck
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| Re: MELINA
Posted: 7/11/2004 7:55:46 AM |
Oh! Chuck....
Let me say to you...
Thank you for being there.
Thank you for your kind words.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Thank you for all the happiness you bring by just being you.
Thank you for thread: joy of life
Thank you for all your wonderful words all around the forums.
Thank you for being so sweet.
Thank you for not being aware of how great you are.
Thank you for keeping the good work.
Thank you for loving your life the way you do.
Thank you because I needed you for enlighten my day.... .
Melina | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 66 | |
| Re: MELINA
Posted: 7/11/2004 8:51:42 AM | | thank you for being the beautiful person you are and inspiring me to write this poem for you | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 67 | |
| THE FORTRESS
Posted: 7/13/2004 1:48:35 PM | he built his fortress out of
mix of mortar made up of
greed and a distain for life
it walls strenghen by his
stone cold heart and the
folly of fool's gold for its might
living inside his fortress its
interior void of windows
to see the outside world
and its beauty and light
he created a solitary universe
illuminated by darkness not
able to see lurking in the
shadows the ruler of the
night
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 68 | |
| Re: THE FORTRESS
Posted: 7/13/2004 8:08:25 PM | | i got a few emails about my last poem "the fortress " some of you wanted to know its message. the message is through greed and the pursuit of self importance you unconsiously build a " fortress " where you can't see out and know one can see anything inside, eventually being consumed by your own sins. | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 69 | |
| MEMORIES
Posted: 7/17/2004 8:08:33 PM | this passion that burns inside me
is longing for your touch
everynight i see your face
in my dreams your smile still
reminds that i loved you so much
i wake up from my dreams
covered in sweat
thought i heard you
whisper but your not
there to my regret
that night i lost you
you left the house and smiled
you said don't worry
baby i'll be back in awhile
the next morning i woke up
you were nowhere in sight
i found out from your mother
you had passed driving home
in the middle of the night
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 70 | |
| I'LL BE YOUR EVERYTHING
Posted: 7/22/2004 8:53:35 AM | when your heart is aching
i'll be the pill to ease its pain
when your tears are heavy
i'll be your umbrella to shield
you from the rain
when you feel lost,dark and alone
i'll be your light to brighten
the path that leads to
the comfort of your home
when your tired and hanging
by a thread
i'll be the rope that lifts you
up and the pillow for
your bed
i
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 71 | |
| Re: the joy of death
Posted: 7/22/2004 10:19:09 AM | | misery loves company kerry... . .try the city morgue because your pretty much dead | |
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 72 | |
| pity him
Posted: 7/23/2004 1:19:43 PM | pity he who finds fault in beauty
for that man is blind and shallow
he sees no color in rainbows
he hears no joy in angel's voices
he breathes but he is not living
he is dying the slow death of
hate and self destruction
he rejoices in pain and
pleasures in grief
he looks for thorns in roses
but pity him because he
never learned that beauty
is ownly visible to those
who look for it
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xchuck
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Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 73 | |
| Re: pity him
Posted: 7/30/2004 7:14:49 PM | | hey melina....where are you? | |
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| Re: pity him
Posted: 8/3/2004 5:24:01 PM | um, can someone tell me how to post a new thread??
(sorry chuck, i'm not melina, just looking for some assistance and this was the first thread i pulled up :)
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| Re: pity him
Posted: 8/3/2004 5:26:46 PM | Chuck's not around right now (the light next to his photo is red, I see). But, there should be a button on the top right hand side of the forum that says "Post New Thread". If it ain're there, you should contanct Admin and get it rectified.
That's the fast answer.... | |
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