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Posted: 4/27/2008 3:27:42 PM | In message 32, the OP says:
Hopefully I helped some of you boys out
if I didnt really I just gave you a girls opinion on your profile and thats all I could offer
I am tired, I didnt know it was gonna be such hard work lookin at your profiles and really think about what was goin through my mind and what other girls might be thinking...
I say short and sweet way too much... but its true guys short and sweet is key! well good night!
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Posted: 4/28/2008 12:19:23 PM | O.K. Let's get down to the nitty-gritty.
Remember, there is NO perfect profile, and thinking in a wide spectrum is a good way to look at everything.
If you have a few tips to fine tune my profile, pleeez let me know, okay?
Thanks muchly
Ken - (Previously known as: White Knight 4 U; & Bright Knight 4 U)
My main issue is why do I not get any replies, or any 'good' replies, nor any First messages from the ladies.
All I get is many, many 'looked at my profile'. Are they waiting for me to write 1st., or am I that icky? Sometimes I wonder what the 'trick ' is, or is this 'normal for the menfolk? | |
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Posted: 4/28/2008 3:03:11 PM | Dear Ken, aka Bright Knight, etc.
Please take a moment to read the post right above yours, message 53. That should answer all your questions.
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Posted: 5/13/2008 5:18:22 PM | Hey nikki, Thats a great help you are doing out here :)
Well, why dont you say something about mine ????
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Posted: 5/13/2008 7:51:01 PM | NAGA, here's what she has to say about your profile:
In message 32, the OP says:
Hopefully I helped some of you boys out
if I didnt really I just gave you a girls opinion on your profile and thats all I could offer
I am tired, I didnt know it was gonna be such hard work lookin at your profiles and really think about what was goin through my mind and what other girls might be thinking...
I say short and sweet way too much... but its true guys short and sweet is key! well good night!
In other words, this train has left the station. No mas reviews.
Geez, don't you guys even read ONE POST before yours??? | |
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Posted: 5/13/2008 7:59:10 PM | | So, Nikki, could you please revi.... Ouch! That smarts! *Running away from artist formerly known as Shirley* | |
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Posted: 5/14/2008 7:17:29 AM | | Hey, uh, is this thing on? *tap, tap, thud* I'd, uh, like a profile review please.... | |
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Posted: 5/14/2008 9:50:21 AM | You guys are such b*stards. 
 ATTENTION! THIS THREAD IS CLOSED!!!! NO MORE REVIEWS!! GO AWAY!!!  | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 8:37:45 PM | I am so sorry I did not come back to this. I got so busy...
I am willing to start all over now.. I am not going to go back to the old ones because I think some of you might have forgotten and it would be not point, so if you want me to review your profile ask after this post. Thanks! | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 9:56:58 PM | Its so hard to sum up one's self in just a few sentences. Can you let me know what you think?
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Posted: 6/4/2008 12:07:40 AM | Hi there,
I would appreciate some critiquing of my profile, thanks! Do you think I have the right picture, subject line, etc?
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Posted: 6/4/2008 3:17:49 AM | | Hi lilnikki20, thought I would ask if you would consider checking my profile as well. Thanks | |
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Posted: 6/4/2008 6:54:58 AM | Hi,
My profile is a bit silly, but I do get replies from women that find it funny. Could you see if it's too much, or any part I could change.
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Posted: 6/11/2008 7:14:36 PM | Hey i am Chris went through a break up that fed me up-- i work ten hour days so this is my chance read it and tel where i can add to it | |
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Posted: 6/11/2008 9:22:24 PM | hi g3tb3nt4me
I like your head line... very nice
Your pics are perfect! Lots of different things that show your personality. The only thing I didnt really like is how long your about me is.... to me personally and some other girls will agree we dont like to see so much... we can learn more about you in person. I dont really like the "about me" then the "what im looking for" kinda thing. I think if you shorten it up a lil bit and say that your open for what ever is thrown at you... girls will come running... :)
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Posted: 6/11/2008 9:31:55 PM | hi eagleclass
Your pics are great... it really shows how much you like the outdoors and how you like to "explore" as said in your headline.
I will be honest I dont like the beginning of your about me.... saying how you might look like someone else. Even if people have said you looked like tom hanks or whoever it comes off a lil c o c k y ... It kinda just rubbed me the wrong way and I didnt really like it. The rest was ok... I say in the about me just keep it simple, dont give your whole self up... just keep it sweet and the girl can learn more about you in the future. ya know?
I liked your first date the un date... takes the whole pressure off of a real date... very nice although some girls might not like that... so I would try just rewording it a bit like... "for a first date I would like to keep it simple and casual ..... blah blah blah... get what im sayin?
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Posted: 6/11/2008 9:43:19 PM | o geez..... passion8kisr
ok uhm... so I went to your profile....
Well first off... your pics... YOU NEED MORE! haha Pics are very important people! Show pics of you going out, or what you do for fun... not 2 pics of you in the same setting. Pics of you with your friends. People got to see pics.
OK so your about me....
I am gonna be honest I looked at it and scrolled down to view the length of it and started to wonder when it was going to end. Thats not good! Because the you know the first thing that comes to my mind is? Uh I really dont want to read all this... move on! And im sorry I didnt read it. I skimmed a lil bit. Never write a novel on your about me! girls just want an idea of you... not your whole life story!!! so really break it down into one nice lil paragraph... it will help out alot ok?
and your first date... didnt really go into a first date you started talkin about the second which made me feel confused... just write what you think would be a good first date nothin more... dont have to go into great detail...
sorry for the harsh critque.. hope I helped a lil
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Posted: 6/11/2008 9:50:32 PM | Hi Jacobus101
I have to ask... what is up with all these novel writing about me's? Girls dont wanna read all that. Everytime I see a really long about me ... I go wow that guy has too much time on his hands and I move on! Keep it short cut it down to one nice short paragragh, dont give yourself away just give the girl a nice idea of who you are. Your pics are good they show that your a sweet nice guy.... a true gentlemen. Your first date is good too.... but just say what you would wanna do... dont say I would like this but if your not into that we can do this... ya know?
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