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Posted: 6/11/2008 9:55:21 PM | Hi 71vega6
Your profile was perfect!
Your about me was short and too the point! Which I totally love. You almost sounded just like myself haha...
Your first date was good too!
The only thing I think you need is more pics. You have 4 of almost the same things. Change it up a bit. Show some pics of you having fun, out on the town, maybe even some of you and your kids... that one is totally up to you...
but other than that your profile was perfect! loved it!
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Posted: 6/11/2008 9:59:16 PM | Hi heaven or las vegas
First off... you need pics!!! Pics are very important to me. Not to sound shallow but I need the phyical attration there too, without a pic its hard to work with.
I didnt understand your about me and dont know what you mean by silly and getting replies from woman that find it funny... did I miss something? maybe I did...
In your about me... I think you just need to give an idea of what your all about in one nice paragraph with out trying to hard to make someone laugh cus you might come off sounding weird...
other than that your profile was pretty good
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Posted: 6/11/2008 10:03:28 PM | hi 70ss396
Does true love exist? thats a good debate... but I dont like it for your headline you come off sounding like your giving up... ya know?
Your pics are good but you have room for more! I love pics and I think pics are very important so I think the more the better!
Your about me was perfect! short and sweet totally loved it! you sound like a fun nice guy.
other than that good profile
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Posted: 6/11/2008 10:09:38 PM | Hi spugot421
Ok so on your about me take off the I am only gonna try this for another couple days ... it sounds like your giving up... and even if you are dont tell girls that because it makes you sound a lil weird...
What you need to add are pics!!
I am sorry you went through a break up... trust me we all have been there its not fun.... but dont show your feelings of say anger, frustration, hurt or anything like that on your profile because its like saying you want someone to feel bad for you and there is no point for that. hang in there!
other than that its pretty good
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Posted: 6/12/2008 11:16:37 AM | hi katanakoden
Your profile is pretty good. Your headline is cute haha
You need more pics, pics are really important so you should have more, and different kinds, some showing what you do for fun, or night on the town, with some friends, whatever...
Your about me..... was ok. Really I think you just need to give a girl an idea of you, dont tell her the things you will do for her and stuff like that, she can figure that on her own when she gets to know you, and please take out the past relationship stuff it starts to sounds like your trying to make someone feel bad for you.
Other than that good profile
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Posted: 6/12/2008 5:31:40 PM | Thanks, lilnikki! Its always a work in progress... ;b
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Posted: 6/12/2008 6:16:02 PM | Lil Nikki, ever thought about a career in theatre- or book review writing? How about writing an advice column? You are good at this. Your responses are all individualized, and to the point.
You seem to enjoy doing this.
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Posted: 6/12/2008 11:54:20 PM | hi July Morning
I have thought about it. I like to help people out. Its better to give than recieve right?
Anyway ... your profile
Can you have some pics of you hmmm whats the word... smiling? and What is up with the one where your not showing your face? Silly there is no point. Like I tell almost ever guy on here, PICS ARE IMPORTANT! You need to have alot and different kinds, not just face, and not in the same setting. Show yourself having fun, or out with some friends... etc.
O and your headline... to be honest kinda korny... i would change it... haha sorry...
Your about me, started off good till it sounded like you were telling a story... got a lil weird ... I didnt really like it. In your about me I say just keep it short and just give a girl a good idea of you that way she can learn more about you later and you will have alot more to talk about.
Other than that... your profile was pretty good
and thank you for saying I am good at this.... that truely means alot to me.... I am glad to help... and if this could take me into a career of theater, or book reviewing, or even an advice column, that would be amazing!!
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Posted: 6/13/2008 4:24:31 AM | Hi lilnikki20, could you review my profile please?
i think my pics are quite bad..i mean there all just boring ones of me doing nothing...lol, but im pretty new here and thought somethings better than nothing for now. how important do you think it is too have pics of doing things, and with friends? (most of my friends arnt too keen about having thier pics splashed over the net lol).
iv tryed too make some effort with my profile, but is it too long?
im doing something wrong!
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Posted: 6/13/2008 10:04:21 AM | Hi Maz24
Your kinda right about the pics with friends I have never thought of that. But the pics going out are good too, like i have a pic on my profile with me at the beach, it shows I enjoy going to the beach. Anyway, your pics are really not that bad. They are all different and seem to be taken in different areas. I hate the ones where there are 4 pics of the same place but just different expression.. haha.
Your about me... take out the online dating thing in the beginning, we all are here for the same reason and we feel the same way we dont need to read it. Other than that your about me is very nice. In a way I dont think you have to put what your looking for exactly to a point... I say just give an idea of yourself to a girl and she will learn more about you in the future
other than that... your profile is good :)
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Posted: 6/13/2008 11:09:27 AM | | dont want a critique, but I think its a great service you're providing here. Guys need to know this stuff. More threads like this I say. Keep up the good work :-) | |
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Posted: 6/13/2008 2:27:52 PM | | I am open for some advise, good or bad its all good!!! | |
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Posted: 6/13/2008 3:12:15 PM | | ok can you take a look at my profile as well what do u think? thanks | |
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Posted: 6/13/2008 3:15:41 PM | new to this, need some help, what is wrong with mine?
thanks for any help
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Posted: 6/13/2008 5:49:38 PM | Nikki, I certainly agree with Browolf. It's a great thing you are doing with this thread.
That said, while I am fairly happy with my profile, I still always like feedback... hope I have enough pics of sufficient quality so you won't need to repeat yourself yet again. ;)
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Posted: 7/19/2008 10:13:08 AM | A very late thank you for reviewing my profile!:) sorry its soo late i havent been online in ages.
i appreciate your review:) | |
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Posted: 7/19/2008 11:38:52 AM | Hi Nikki
Take a look at my profile, I am new to the online dating world and I need some female perspective. Let me know what you think. Appreciate it.
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Posted: 7/22/2008 10:02:04 AM | | Well if you would not mind giving me some advice that would be awesome. I was also wondering if you would pls tell me what you think of my pics. I do not get any responses to my msgs and I literally mean none. Starting to think I am not as good looking as I thought. Your honesty would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for any advice you can give. | |
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Posted: 8/25/2008 8:39:58 AM | Please help me, I know that my profile is very strong, but as I learned through life there
are many women that don`t like oral, and I`m 57, and I want a partner that is into that, and much more, Not just in the bedroom but, traveling, cruises, having your feet in some nice sand, while kicking back a few cold one`s, and I would not want to find out that she didn`t like that then, just trying to be open.
Thank You :modhammer: :modhammer: | |
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Posted: 8/25/2008 9:37:40 AM | | Could you review my profile aswell? I'm kinda new to this so i wouldnt be surprised that i have made some mistakes in my profile lol. | |
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