| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/23/2008 6:38:52 PM | | yes, I am new to online dating and I wish for you to look at my profile alabama teddy bear. thanks teddy | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/23/2008 6:48:51 PM | | can you take a shot at mine ?? I know my pics are bad and I am trying to get others. I don't take a good pic.. | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/23/2008 6:57:47 PM | sweet n sassy girl 4u, your pictures look good to me but I problably not an expert. I would like someone look at mine give some advice what I need to improve mine to be able to meet more people. teddy | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/23/2008 7:09:07 PM | Teddy,
ok I am also not a professional but this is my feeling when I read your profile. It seemed to me that you were making excuses and apoloigizing for your life and yourself personally. It just felt kind of negative to me like you said "I am ONLY 5'6" and average body but Im working on that .. and your education " Im not a coach so instead i work in a hospital. You should write it in a more positive way like what a great job you have in the hospital and maybe , I have just begun a exercise program to get myself in better shape and stay healthy. Also there were some grammer problems in there, like some words left out of some sentences. I hope this helped you, like I said I am not a professional. Just my opinion. Also you need more pics of yourself to show the different parts of your personality. have a great evening. debi | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/23/2008 7:21:47 PM | | debi, thank you and I am going to rewrite my profile. I will be taking more pictures soon. Thank you again. Teddy | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/24/2008 6:24:41 AM | Teddy,
I see you made changes to your profile and I like it. Much Better, much more positive. I also have made serious changes to mine so I hope it works. This is such a great forum and I am so thankful for it. Sometimes its that outside influence that makes a difference. I appreciate everyone that hepled me out. God Bless, Debi | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/24/2008 1:02:14 PM | Thank you very much! I've made some changes to my profile, hopefully for the better.
Take care! | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/24/2008 2:10:01 PM | hi happy nature think I need some serious help with mine so must be doing something quite wrong somwhere can you help point me as to where please or should I just scrap the lot. and start again from scratch.
Regards | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/24/2008 6:03:15 PM | Hi there,
I think I really need some help. It will only hurt for a minute! LOL Someone else's opinion will give me some perspective.
Thanks
Ricardo | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/24/2008 6:57:12 PM | After reading information you have shared and adivse to others in the forum ( you need help, don't you ). Would you help me with mine. I value you suggestion and your opinion. You seem to have a credible knowledge on how to organize and improve what we have overlooked or have not said. Along with good insite of what people are looking for. You must be very organize at home and at work. I give you kodos for being a great advisor. Can you help me?
Thank you
dschlegel153 | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/24/2008 8:08:46 PM | | Thank you Happynature, I will work on being the aggressive one, although that is not one of my better traits....:) | |
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Posted: 3/24/2008 11:06:22 PM | can you please review my profile and tell me where i can improve?
i am looking to meet a young lady in the age range of 22-30 preferably. i believe that people should have similar interests, and for me personality typing is hard to put into words. there are also so many types that might fit me; i just want to meet a healthy and attractive woman that has a good head on her shoulders.
so far, i've managed to meet two women i've talked to on PoF, one was just not my type, and the other was one that hid what her body type was by a misleading info on her profile and a misleading picture.
can you tell me why i'm having problems getting off the computer and to a real life meeting with a decent girl that would fit me? guys and girls do it all the time in bars; i'm lost here.  | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 9:48:59 AM | hey..can you check over my profile and let me know what you think?
thanks in advance | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 2:46:09 PM | | Hi happynature please take a look if you have time as sure I'm getting something quite wrong here thanks in advance | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 3:42:00 PM | songwriter28,
Aside from the blurry photo you are using as your primary image, there really isn't anything 'wrong' per se with you profile.
There just isn't anything 'WOW' about it. Nothing to set it apart for the 4 million others here.
I strongly recommend you have a friend take some more photos of you and like your attempt with the primary, make it a close up with a big smile...but make sure we can see you.
Do you actually send e-mail out to women you are interested in? Or do you just sit back waiting for some hottie to come knocking on your door?
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 3:47:23 PM | Taer1j,
Nicely done…VERY nicely done.
You have excellent photos but since you are showcasing so many different looks, it would be helpful to have some dates (years?) notated on the captions. Not sure which is you – right now! That would be of interest to a woman who is...well, interested in you.
Love, love, love what you wrote about yourself. You are obviously intelligent and creative. I’m sure your fair maiden is out there…you are quite the catch.
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 3:48:28 PM | Happynature, I asked for a review but you must have missed me can you review me now please.
Thanks.
I didn't miss you...I do the reviews sequentially. Scroll back to page 11, you'll find it. | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 3:57:04 PM | | Could you please review mine. I think I asked for one a last week, but it may have got lost in the shuffle. Thanks. | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 4:01:00 PM | Butchydog,
You have a great profile. I love your header and you are a very attractive man. Just need MORE photos. Need at least one full body shot. Want to see the goods, man.
Are you really a Rodeo Clown? Cuz if not…put down your real occupation or at least industry you work in.
You did a wonderful job writing your profile. I really enjoyed reading it. I especially liked how you filled the ‘first date’ section. And I must tell you, I’m quite intrigued
When I saw that your brother was in a real hurry, I let him in line ahead of me. When your neighbor's son became ill, but his parents were too proud to ask for help, I did. When your mother had her surgery, I shared a small part of myself with her, (even though she does not know me). When you asked me to always love you, I did and always will. Do you know me yet? WHAT IS THE ANSWER!!
oh...one more UNpolitically correct statement. While I understand you are from African, you are also caucasian. If a girl does a search for caucasian men, you will not show up on her search because you are - African. Might want to consider that as an interesting (initial) note in your 'about me' section. JMHO.
Good Luck!
Happynature
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 4:09:57 PM | tremdous smile,
Why would you start out your profile by making yourself seem ordinary? Saying that you are just like everyone else?
What can I say about myself that you haven't already heard from other women such as "I'm honest, caring, trustworthy...."
First of all, not all women say that. Secondly, don’t lump yourself with all the others. Separate yourself from the herd. Distinguish yourself somehow. You have a TREMENDOUS smile  and wonderful photos. There is something unique about you. Something worth getting to know. Tells us about it.
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 4:27:21 PM | Serendipitist,
You have a fabulous screenname and even better header.
But your primary photo is WAY too blurry and what is with the two photos of you doing the Pamela Anderson cleavage pose??? Way too slutty a pose for someone who looks like such a good girl…and I’m sure you are.
The photo of you with the roses makes you look like you’re nine years old. Consider removing it entirely.
Profession – employee? Really? That’s all you got? Lame my friend, really lame.
Then I get to the interest list…or should I say catalogue? After scrolling down for over a minute…I lost interest and scooched down to the About me section.
There I saw that you wrote the serendipitist version of War and Peace. Quite frankly, I didn’t read it. I don’t have that kinda time. Imagine that is what the fellas out there are thinking too.
Give it a thought.
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 6:07:52 PM | | i just changed my profile completely, but i would still appreciate if you could review my profile please Happynature. please be brutally honest!! i can take it. | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/25/2008 8:04:14 PM | Thanks for the review! 
[QUOTE=happynature]Aside from the blurry photo you are using as your primary image, there really isn't anything 'wrong' per se with you profile.
There just isn't anything 'WOW' about it. Nothing to set it apart for the 4 million others here. [/QUOTE]
I wasn't sure how to make it better without going into too much detail. I'm a semi-professional writer, and I can be extremely verbose. I know I wouldn't want to see someone's life story on their profile, so I'm a little stuck there.
[QUOTE=happynature]I strongly recommend you have a friend take some more photos of you and like your attempt with the primary, make it a close up with a big smile...but make sure we can see you. [/QUOTE]
I've already asked a friend of mine to get some newer, better photos of me this weekend.
[QUOTE=happynature]Do you actually send e-mail out to women you are interested in? Or do you just sit back waiting for some hottie to come knocking on your door?[/QUOTE]
I've been sending out quite a few messages. Only heard back from one person so far. Have to keep fishing, I suppose. | |
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