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Posted: 3/30/2008 3:17:46 PM | | I have been failing miserably at this online dating so I figure a profile review can only help point me in the right direction. Can you help? | |
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| You need help, don't you?
Posted: 3/30/2008 3:36:22 PM | | I definitely could use some help, if you would give me a few tips I would greatly appriceatate it. | |
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Posted: 3/31/2008 4:56:33 PM | Parkour613,
You have a really great profile.
Wonderful photos with nice captions. Very interesting list of interests and a well thought out, well written 'about me' section.
I think we've got a winner here!
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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Posted: 3/31/2008 5:00:44 PM | alabama teddy bear,
You have done a good job with your profile.
The only thing I would change would be the first paragraph of the 'about me' section. I strongly recommend that you don't reveal your true first name in your profile. Save that for the personal e-mails you share with someone you are interested in.
Next, don't be redundant by giving a description of yourself. It's already been delivered above your photos AND your photos tell the rest.
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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Posted: 3/31/2008 5:06:30 PM | SWEET - N- SASSY GIRL 4U,
Hmmm...my first thought after reading your profile is that you get a lot of e-mail and/or IMs from men who make sexual comments or want to meet you 'right away'. Am I right? If not, I would be very surprised.
You are a very lovely woman and that alone will attract men to your profile. But once there, I feel that their thoughts immediately turn sexual due to the text you've written. It is heavily laden with sexual inuendo and offers of 'what's to come'.
Is that how you want it to read? If not, might want to tone it down a bit. A BIG bit.
Good Luck!
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Posted: 4/3/2008 4:19:50 AM |
Thank you very much! I've made some changes to my profile, hopefully for the better.
Take care!
Welcome!! | |
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Posted: 4/3/2008 4:20:42 AM | excite666,
Can't access your profile. You must have it hidden.
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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Posted: 4/3/2008 4:27:05 AM | ricardobready,
One photo? Just one? You aren't even smiling in it.
Then you write
t MeI am an easy going single guy with salt'n pepper hair, hazel eyes and a great smile. quote] A - don't tell us what you look like, we have a picture, we can see. B - why 'tell us' you have a great smile? Why not show us? C - you aren't single!! I have been separated for a long time. Well...what does that mean? Are you going to continue to be separated for an even longer time? All a woman wants to know about that is WHEN WILL YOU BE AVAILABLE? Because quite frankly, you aren't and that is going to keep the chikas away. Good Luck! Happynature | |
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Posted: 4/3/2008 4:34:11 AM | dschlegel5823,
You are a good looking guy with great photos. You have a close up, a body shot and an action shot. Well done!
So, since I have photos of you, why are you describing what you look like?
Blond Blue eyes 6' 243 lbs all Man.
You mention God in your header and in your 'about me' section. I assume that you've done this because it is VERY important in your life. Be careful here...you may scare away someone who might otherwise be a perfect match for you because they think you are a bible thumper. If you are looking for another bible thumper then disregard.
You did a nice job explaining what you do for a living. Kudos by the way for doing what you do (for our planet).
Would strongly recommend you do a spell check on your entire profile. Lots of misspelled words. 
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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Posted: 4/3/2008 7:25:55 AM | | Constructive criticism is always worth considering. You're welcome to give my profile a frank review. | |
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Posted: 4/3/2008 9:17:13 AM | Hi
If you have time, I would love an honest review of my profile. Thanks so much!! | |
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Posted: 4/3/2008 1:04:02 PM | | hello, ive been on this dating sight 4 some time and have changed my pro a few times could u take a look and give some imput thanks | |
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Posted: 4/4/2008 4:53:54 PM | Lance58,
You are very cute and have a nice diversified arrangement of photos. Still need one more. Want to see a close up of your face with a big toothy grin and no hat.
The only other thing I would ask you to do is retype your entire ‘about me’ section in word (cut & paste) and do a spell check. You’ve got some grammar errors and spelling errors that don’t look too good. The last thing you want is for some woman to see that hot bod and assume you’re a dumb jock.
Good Luck!
Happynature | |
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Posted: 4/4/2008 9:07:45 PM | | thnx for the review when I get my errands done this sunday I'll be sure to update | |
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Posted: 4/5/2008 12:00:33 AM | ROB1025 - Boys, boys, boys will be boys.
I just have to say - Isn't it mainly kids who flip that silly hand gesture? I know you were trying to be funny, but if you're serious about getting a date, puleese take it down. It's not that funny. Then the mud bogging picture. Then the picture of you in front of your computer screen with a picture of a truck on it. Are you looking for a girl who likes trucks and lovin you comin home caked in mud from bogging? Or maybe you are looking for a girl who likes to get caked with mud. Or maybe a girl who has to jump into and out of a truck? Don't know because - The All Caps. Change that right away. I didn't even read all your profile because of that. Well, I tried to read some, but it's very hard on the eyes. | |
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Posted: 5/11/2008 5:00:50 PM | | I would love to have you look at my profile too. I find it too short and maybe a little dull. Thanks! | |
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Posted: 5/11/2008 5:07:36 PM | Hello??? Is anybody paying attention???
Happy nature left this thread over a month ago.
Go to the profile review forum, start your own thread to ask for a review. | |
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Posted: 5/12/2008 9:32:52 AM | Hi happy,
Could you please review mine, I know it's a tad harsh but i truely want the one just looking for sex to stay away. I use to be real nice in mine, but I still get the weirdos and or game players
please help
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Posted: 5/13/2008 4:58:13 AM | Help in capital letters. I did some revisions last night to reduce the length and break it apart. Could do you help me with some refinement. It would much appreciate. I am really new at this and trying to learn fast.
Thanks
Jim | |
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