| I don't care what you write......
Posted: 5/31/2008 12:14:56 PM |
for those that are somewhat slow (much like myself...hee...hee)....the only OTHER rule is that you use a line from a previous post....
and that's about all your rule readin I'm gonna do
any of the girls on your thread wanna screw?
do you have any locals I can borrow?
I've got the midwest and Canada covered
someone who could just drop by til tomorrow?
put on the crotchless French maid uniform
do my dishes
in exchange for passionate kisses
and then leave in the morning
after a goodbye blowie
goodbye blowies really turn me on
I like the ones when they roll their window down
and pleasure me with their engine running
making yummy noises and purring for me
talk about exploding
makes my d1ck hard for a week
which works out perfectly
because by then my dishes also need doing
two birds with one stoner
got any locals I can borrow, darlin?
 arf
edit: sheesh, scared me.. I didn't realize I was going to host the next frickin page.. hahaha | |
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| I don't care what you write......
Posted: 6/1/2008 10:26:10 AM | I like the dark
"so I crawl into the shadows of the candle flame"
I like the way it makes me flicker
in and out
like spirit
in the darkness I see better
all my senses more
attuned
to the mysteries of it all
in the dark, my eyes see the outlines
see your eyes, your lips
and in the dark I feel you
your breath, your fingers, your lips
and that makes it bright
and right, for when the light
comes on
you are already known
and I have become
your electricity | |
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| I don't care what you write......
Posted: 6/1/2008 1:01:45 PM | b-dawg....."I can't take you nowhere"....lol....I'll see what I can do! lol
tropical - robbed of sight in darkness...the sense of "feel" becomes stronger, eh?
smashing paper cups full of sand
fist clenched....then open
empty hand
throw the sand away
what IS time anyway?
a stained hourglass
colors luminous
light reflected
what was time before it was detected?
nothing
not a gleam, not an idea, nor a fence that bordered life
it did not exist
think of the life that we've missed
in schedules, and hours, minutes recorded
the home for our lives
now has the windows borded | |
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Render
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Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 429 | |
| I don't care what you write......
Posted: 6/1/2008 4:58:34 PM | "A stained hourglass"
Time means nothing as it moves
so slowly
Can you stop it? Speed it up?
What is time anyway? The fourth dimension?
I cannot say for you that time will come too soon
It comes in it's own measure.
Seconds, minutes, eons, it doesn't matter
Enjoy the here and now, for it is already over.
Looks like I'm back.... | |
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| I don't care what you write......
Posted: 6/2/2008 6:45:10 AM | Baseball & lightning bugs, graduations flying past, hold on to the seconds carefully, as they slip through my fingers...past
Eyes open taking in every second, glowing as they grow, baseball boy & lightningbug king...God, I love them so.
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Posted: 6/2/2008 1:27:30 PM | time
"hold on to the seconds carefully"
for time’s greedy little fingers
clutch as it goes by so fast
do you remember as children
how waiting was angst?
Endless!
it took so long, it never passed
and finally when you got there
how great to meet the end of that
long wait
oh and now if somehow one could stop it
or at least slow it down
vodka in the freezer
slo’ mo
thicker
languorous
so that all the details can be remembered
minüte to obvious, every little bit digested
and remembered, recorded to memory
in hi definition with nothing blurred or warped
by individual interpretation
wouldn’t that be grand?
Well, maybe not
Because the blurring is kind sometimes
it softens all those hard edges
that cut and brought blood to the surface
it allows the scabs to grow, halts the painful flow
so underneath we can heal and start fresh
and that takes
time... | |
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| I don't care what you write......
Posted: 6/2/2008 1:59:29 PM | wow, very nice!
The essence of time versus age
like a book from page to page
when you first pry it open
it's fresh and new
character development and setting too
but as words are left behind
as images in your mind
you begin to get the story
caught up in the page-turning action
without too much distraction
but as the last page draws near
you begin to feel the fear
don't really want to know the ending
despite how long it took
I hope your life is a really good book | |
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Posted: 6/2/2008 3:18:29 PM | EXCEPANCE OF ME
in this world of our s there to many people
who judge you cant except who you are
I'm fighting a world of deceit and dishonor
as all i want is to be me
with not a friend in the world
with out no support
I'm there for me
so how can people get to know me not judge me
no re put me down as I'm me
is it a world of dreams is it a would of hope
or is it just me
i cant comprehend this would of ours
they look at a pitcher of me and think your something your not
as all i am is me that's all i want is peace in the world
and for no one to judge me no more.......shaz  | |
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Render
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Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 434 | |
| I don't care what you write......
Posted: 6/2/2008 6:43:33 PM | Slumped over the steering wheel
"i cant comprehend this world of ours"
leaking fluids, radiator, transmission, ink, blood
Took the wall at top speed
figured it was me or the concrete
Who won? I laugh out loud
and the pain makes me laugh even harder
crazy mother fcuker
Stress fractures the mind like the bones
some people are too stupid to live
Darwin award gets handed out too often
remember you could be next
Surprised the death toll in Hollywood
hasn't topped the charts
Can we get an Amen?
Right on.
The darkness slides over me so sweetly
as the ambulance pulls up with lights screaming
Darwin hasn't claimed me yet
that kooky **stard
Simply put
I grow tired of the insanity
Looks like I'll have to try harder
next time | |
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Posted: 6/2/2008 7:49:41 PM | "The darkness slides over me so sweetly
as the ambulance pulls up with lights screaming"
I open my eyes,
and stare straight ahead
focus in on a man with a halo
who looks at me
and then down at his book
seems waiting to speak to me
as my body floats nearer
tapping his white feather quill
he looks down again
do you know why your here
"i was lost, and needed directions"
yeah, that just may be
we've been watching you
on our widescreen
seems like you know what you want, but not how to get there
so we brought you to us
by express
so what's your malfunction my man
well you see all those people?
yeah they don't seem real to me.
some look like monsters
when the light hits a certain way
and some don't seem to do anything
except repeat themselves day after day
"well what's wrong with that"
free thinking my man, robots
freak me out, understand?
"well, were sending you back for another show, don't trip out just go with the flow"
this story line sucks man
and I'm not sure of the way,
send in the clowns and I'll give up the stage
"no can do, got other gigs goin on.
better get goin, another half an hour til your on"
bullshyt, enough is enough
make some changes
cause I'm goin effin nuts
I'm talking to myself and typin
out this crazy azzshyt
better put me on an island,
or someplace out in the snow
i'll beat down a bear and
smoke a peace pipe with the eskimoes
alright I'm out, do something soon
befor I end up in an institution
with the rest of the loons | |
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Posted: 6/2/2008 7:59:41 PM | 
Damn!
Thats a sweet write Eyes......
Cool thread goin on here, Tropical, another awesome, insightful write....
Good stuff people!
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Posted: 6/2/2008 9:04:43 PM | no doubt....good stuff all around, ya'll (by the way...forgot my "helmet" cam the other night truth..lol)
....good to see you up and kickin' over there Render!....
eyes...tropical.....those are both killer writes!....and iceaxe....luvin' the "energy" that you put off!!....juju...as always, luvin your smile....and bomshell - welcome..feel free to "be you" here anytime
at the alter of cool
I prayed to the God of "things"
watching, awaiting deliveries
arriving on angel's wings
these earthly gifts arrived
luminous.....pleasing the senses
except the 6th one, oblivious to fun
in tune more with real defenses
seeking jewels that sparkle
less seen or fealt with the eyes
more fealt with the soul...turned warm from cold
stripping angelic devils of disguise | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 12:49:18 PM | "do you remember as children
how waiting was angst?
Endless!"
will any of our words
reach open ears
how many times
can you stand up against the world
while your partner remains unsure
been to war with people I knew less about
taking a step off the cliff of certainty
and into the air
take hands, place your bets,
and stand together til we fall
ya know I love ya
and you know my mind
so we're in, or we're out
no more false starts
no more looking back
or returning to those empty eyes
now its you and me and the world
and a whole lot of friends | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 12:50:16 PM | lyrical pursuit is a strong attracton
lyrical pursuit is a strong attracton
i begin to give you my entire heart
not just a fraction
ive had the jade surrounding
my heart for long
and yet its been pounding
waiting for a loving song
and here you are now
promising love unto me
wholeheartedly, honestly
and unconditionally
i am ready to reciprocate
your love and affection
i too love you so deeply
its like a contagious infection
let time find out for us
where this will lead
theres no rush to find out
we'll get there at our own speed
as long as you can be who you are
and love faithfully just me
then at the end of the rainbow
together we'll be
we won't want for much
as long as we're together
just each others loving touch
will bind us forever
together we can take on the world
any challenge and hurdle
our deep passionate love
will allow us to soar like the majestic eagle
i'll love you for now
and to the end of time
i'm so euphorically happy
that you are now mine
-samra | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 12:52:41 PM | You wright sutch hevy poams are they about you?
i hope not the is a butiful place to live stop smell the roses from time to time you never know what you may find
keep up the good work......shaz  | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 3:30:54 PM | Mysterious Smiling Girl, with Jemstones set for eyes,
Such perfect Jade this man has never known.
For me your sly dark smile still mystifies
Which path you'll choose, as yet, remains unknown
But lessons learned in past, now wasted time
Have taught me well and I won't fall in haste
For when the victim dies more great the crime
As it would be my heart, and love, to waste
So Sweet, let time find out for you
What things for us might wait
As yet the time I've spent to think this through
Still shows to me half-closed, half-opened gait.
Mysterious Smiling Girl, your beauty fills my mind
But Beauty's for the sighted, and love is for the blind. | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 3:34:35 PM | | In the last post I swapped an "us" for a "you" in the first line of the third quatrain - but...I put it back in the second line - threw my meter out the window though...it would have been pretty close to a perfect iambic pentameter otherwise - almost | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 4:04:29 PM | the past we remember such sorrow
the path has lead us on this journey of life as despair
were all haunted from this
the path we walk is our on
the path we lead to is up to us as
the journey may never change unless your willing to change it
now the path we lead is a better one as i let go of the past
it is know i walk a different path
a new one were there is only happiness
it my be a hard one as this is the path i shall follow
as the past had such sorrow
i now ready for my new journey as its the one for me
know we live in harmony and not intersperse
......shaz | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 4:43:59 PM | my turn :)
have you ever held
my hand as I was crying
ever looked into my eyes
and, therefore, knew I wasn't lying
ever witnessed the smile
that I wear regardless of the day
ever helped me helping others
seldom turning one away
have you sat and smoked a stogey or two
on the porch with coffee in hand
while I pruned the flowers, greeted the neighbors,
and prepared to recycle my cans
have you ever layed on my living room floor
and played cards 't il the sun came up
me and you chilling, as you do the dealing,
I offer to refill your cup
ever called me from a bar, at 2.am. drunk as piss and needing a ride?
Knowing I'd come git you, 'cause I wouldn't shit you
and because of others I've known who have died
ever danced with me, so happy and free
on a parking deck many stories high
drinking red wine, and still keeping time,
only to slow down, giggle, and sigh....
...and sigh again...
because life is good
so is the music
I'm happy with the hand
but I didn't choose it
...now back to the regularly scheduled program... | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 4:50:41 PM | and Mr. Mojo...loved the write,babe.....please come back again!
and Samra.....thanks for comin by, hon....i'm feelin' that write as of lately... | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 4:52:50 PM | I WISH MORE PEOPLE WERE LIKE YOU IN THIS WORLD OF OURS THIS WOULD BE A BETTER PLACE IN WITCH WE LIVE
ITS TRUE WHAT YOU SAY YOUR BESSED WITH THAT SMILE YOUR BLESSED WITH YOUR LIFE YOUR BLESSED
AS YOU ARE YOU
DONT PREDEND TO BE NOTHING YOUR NOT AS THAT IS NOT YOU
GOOD LUCK....SHAZ  | |
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Posted: 6/3/2008 5:09:45 PM | | Good Luck to you as well dear.....thank you so much for your kind words, and the smile that you wear as well...yeah....it's a tough world for kind folks, as I'm sure you know.....keep smilin' too babe.....don't be a stranger round here... | |
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Joined: 2/11/2008
Msg: 449 | |
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| I don't care what you write......
Posted: 6/3/2008 5:28:25 PM | you read my thoughts mmmmmy ....
Many colours, many clouds
yet without just one...we don't sing as loud!
I was just thinking about how absolutely beautiful the colors of the pond are.....how absolutely friggin awesome it is that we all, from ALL OVER THE WORLD, share hugs, laughter, and tears everyday....and understanding..... | |
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