| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/3/2008 5:34:14 PM | hey Ash glad you're 'feeling it' love is a wonderful thing!
i've not been on this forum much as of late but will try and make more frequent appearances.... | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/3/2008 5:46:44 PM | Blame Where within lies the blame What happened to the fire in our flame Is it true your heart has frozen Toward the one you’d once chosen
How is it possible, how can this be Why will you turn your back on thee What have they done that is so unforgivable That has made you so seemingly miserable
Surely there is something to bring healing For these feelings that you now are feeling Be open and talk with them, regarding your feelings of doubt Make sure you truly understand what its all about
Don’t make hasty decisions in matters of the heart SometBlame Where within lies the blame What happened to the fire in our flame Is it true your heart has frozen Toward the one you’d once chosen
How is it possible, how can this be Why will you turn your back on thee What have they done that is so unforgivable That has made you so seemingly miserable
Surely there is something to bring healing For these feelings that you now are feeling Be open and talk with them, regarding your feelings of doubt Make sure you truly understand what its all about
Don’t make hasty decisions in matters of the heart Sometimes misinterpretations drive good people apart Communication is key, please discuss it with thee Its soooo important, don’t just “let it be”
I beg of you, be open, honest, candid and all Soon you you’ll feel peace, happiness, and the pieces will fall Into the place in the puzzle where they belong And the two of you will be united in song
It may be decided you each have your own verse At least you’ll know its with honesty and no curse Its important to speak openly with one another In the beginning, the middle, and end with our lovers -samra | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/3/2008 5:56:01 PM |
no more false starts No more false starts I’ve waited to long Waiting for my heart To burst into song
Now its finally happened A love that will endure My patience paid off in a precious jewel As finally now, along came you
You made a splash in my life Like a pebble in the water The ripples are a symbol of growing love And ours will be, for both of us, so much better
We all have a past which colours our views I refuse to repeat past performances As true love is what I’ve found in you Friend, lover, confident…just the right balance
Thank you for coming along Awakening my heart to song Yours I’ll be for now and forever As long as you’ll have me, it will be my pleasure!! -samra | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/3/2008 8:23:24 PM |
Is it true your heart has frozen toward the one you'd once chosen chip away the ice...recover your heart how was it before? where did this start? if that doesn't work, you can know that you tried to recover the love that had long since died glass full of love turned to empty cup say good-bye and walk away.......head up | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/3/2008 9:07:28 PM | "glass full of love turned to empty cup say good-bye and walk away.......head up" "have love will travel"
cup overfilling, drink up water's spilling
smiles growing and glow is showing
tables set, and guests invited yet didn't come, feels spited
carry on withput, seed yhe grail til tomorrow comes with pounded nail
would you collect the blood that'll fall smile now with me and after it all
you know I am, always near my voice just listen you'll hear
well travel sounds nice, let us begin throwing rocks at your window, you say when | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/3/2008 9:27:30 PM | "would you collect the blood that'll fall" in a cracked chalice and set it upon the mantle of innocence where the flames of curiosity reduce it to a consumme de purity | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/3/2008 9:36:53 PM |
well travel sounds nice, let us begin grab your bags come on jump in
we'll ride up that mtn and back down round the bend down the dirt road to where we can put our feet in
take a nap in the shade then climb the trails to the falls sweetly serenaded water rushing and bird calls
cool mountain air causing chills on my skin but this mountain girl can't resist jumping in
the plunge being taken breath held....eyes closed coming up for air, there we are nose to nose | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/3/2008 10:05:54 PM | Nice writing Lunar, n Ash
over my shoulder the water crashing down and background illuminated in greens sun shining down from behind the trees warm air breeze, and clear water
"the plunge being taken breath held....eyes closed coming up for air, there we are nose to nose"
two heads above water eyes locked together hands pull closer then you turn to swim away
swimming after you i chase caught and pulled close, two heads above water breathing as one
arms wrapped together feet paddling underneath lost in your lips hands search on their own | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/4/2008 2:03:09 AM | If I could cast away my armor and lay bare my jaded heart Strip down to weary soul "and set it upon the mantle of innocence" Could I rise, refreshed and step forth naked, blinking in a strange new light, to walk a road I've never seen? | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/4/2008 5:34:07 AM | you know I am, always near my voice just listen you'll hear
you know I am, always near my voice just listen and you will hear
although i am gone, now part of the rainbow in your mind and your heart, my love still flows
i loved you unconditionally, and gave you the tools now its up to you, to find the real jewel
a diamond in the rough, to love you as i your true love to put the sparkle in your eye
i'm watching from above and hoping you again find love -samra | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/4/2008 12:34:20 PM | IF EVER
DEAR ASH I AM, I (D’POET), SAIL THROUGH THE ATLANTIC IN QUEST OF YOU WITH WRITTEN SONNET. AS MY POEMS ARE ONLY A REFLECTION OF MY HEART AND SO WHEN YOU ARE MINE, I SHALL CROSS THE ROMANTIC PART. MY POEMS AND WORDS TO YOU COULD BE A WASTE OF TIME, BUT MY FEELING SHALL NEVER BE THE BODERLINE. DEAR ANGEL, HERE I’M, IN THE DEAD OF THE WEE HOURS THINKING IF YOU’LL EVER BE MINE LIKE FLOATING FLOWERS. BUT IF NOT, THEN I SHALL STILL REMAIN A TRUE AND NOBLE PAMPHLETEER DEAR ANGEL, MY FANTACIES COMES WITH A SMILE, WISHING WE BOTH HELD HANDS IN THE NEXT LINE. MAYBE THIS IS JUST A DREAM, BUT MY WORDS ARE REAL, THIS IS NO LOVE FILM. JUST LAST NIGHT I DREAMT OF US ON A MOVING BOAT TO CHINA, AND YOU KISSED ME WITH AN ENDLESS DESIRE. I SMILED BACK AT YOU WITHOUT A KISS. FOR I KNEW IT WAS JUST A DREAM. YOU ARE THE BOOK IN MY LIBRARY, WHEREON I SEARCH FOR. AND IF EVER BY HAPPENSTANCE WE FIND EACHOTHER TOGETHER AS ONE, IT’S BEAUTIFUL. IF NOT, IT CAN’T BE HELPED. (AS YOU ARE THE MISTRESS OF YOUR MIND). I DREAM TO WAKE UP BY YOUE SIDE.‘HOW I WISH’.
D’POET | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/4/2008 12:46:23 PM | A DENOUNCED LETTER TO HIV AIDS
It first came as a first aid box Relieving pains out of the creatures of the earth. But now, it has become the opposite, Dropping the first and last words to stand-alone. Becoming a more brutal and faster way of slaying my people I wake up to fight this indomitable malady, but become unseen. Spreading silently and slowly with a soundless pass. Before you are aware of its silent steps, It is deep inside you. The virus, killing innocent souls that should last longer. I write to fight this indomitable virus, Yet stinging before the greatest storm Great scientist fight for the slightest cure, As the rainy days long for a dry season. Schooling my internal hunch for a reason. Giving me the strength to war against the virus. But in the heart of my people, I see nothing but fear. Yet it is foolish to fear that one thing, in this great world. It is not a question of wisdom and foolishness, it is just fear. Until the end of days, my battling weapon shall continue to war against HIV aids.
D POET | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/4/2008 3:48:11 PM | the towel slips open and slides off your hips I reach out but not in time my hands around your waist your skin feels soft, and the heat starts to rise on my breath on your lips you look in my eyes together we stand in the fire in a moment of "innocence where the flames of curiosity reduce it to a consumme de purity" purity of thought, and of mind fire burns inside and outside our circle | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/4/2008 9:52:11 PM | D Poet
It is not a question of wisdom and foolishness, it is just fear
this line struck a nerve....well said my friend....the whole write conveys the picture well...my heart goes out to you on your "side of the world"... | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/5/2008 6:46:45 AM | (Thank you very much Ash...I just write poetry for the satisfaction it gives me, and to record my inner-most feelings. Greetings to you all)
A LOST CHILDHOOD
Ashes of a childhood Still flows within my heart everyday. In the solitude of the night embrace Closely I whisper with pain. Whispering to myself, once and again Believing the strength of today, Is a sign for a better tomorrow My thoughts comes from the golden wings, that mend a broken heart I wake up wanting to know I’m on the right part, But the cry of a child is forever. Until the heavens is here, So will my heart have no fear. For the end of days is near My dreadful pouring tears is interminable like the red river, Always wet without a sign of coming to a freeze. I see my future, but feel my past I hold the tears, but it comes at last. I try to smile, but it comes so fast, Hoping to defy the agony of a lost childhood. Only with the heart of a saint, Shall I over come my past.
D POET. | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/5/2008 7:31:54 AM |
Closely I whisper with pain huddled in our corner once again I hear fear mesmerized by the eyes of shaky hands until the switch flips pain pinned grasping for air choking on childhood flailing then limp smothered....I could take no more so I killed him then drove to the shore | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/5/2008 7:53:55 AM |
the cry of a child is forever echoing off of surrounding faces and places growing louder, bouncing, crashing the reverberating chaos ears deafened to the sound hearing left at home the child will hear nothing until he hears the voice he needs to: his own | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/5/2008 8:04:28 AM |
the child will hear nothing mom tries her best to shield her the child should know nothing of the burdens moms choices have yielded her the child will hear nothing but laughter and happiness the child will hear nothing not knowing her moms life is a mess the child will hear nothing as mom sucks it up and doesn't not let on the child will know nothing that in the morning mom may be gone the child will hear nothing so all memories will be happy the child will hear nothing and will learn later from her pappy the child will hear nothing but loving things from her mom the child will hear nothing as mom wants the best for her after she's gone the child will hear nothing -samra | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/5/2008 8:10:32 AM | Angel I am your angel Here to guide you in what you do
To steer you away From hurt and harm each and everyday I am there only in spirit Listen close, my breath you can feel it
I am your angel Here to guide you in what you do
When you feel meek The warm soft wind kisses your cheek Its me from the rainbow Always with you wherever you go
I am your angel Here to guide you in what you do
Take what I taught you Be happy and don’t be blue I have faith in your choices Just listen closely to your inner voices
Be wise and learn from my lessons I will be always watching above from heaven Know I’m in your heart always Live, laugh, and love deeply everyday
I am your angel Here to guide you in what you do I am your angel For eternity from above Know I love you -samra | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/5/2008 12:02:21 PM | HEART OF A SAINT
Impaired words from the heart of a saint, Unbreakable like the shadows of a paint Pleasures that evaporate to the sky Programmed words that are bound to die. Promises that make them cry But the heart of a saint shall never lie Their broken promises, becomes his flawless words. Burning out the wasted scents of the false prophets Like the angel on the seventh step Giving revelations to the weak Revealing their internal errors, as they squeak out of their formidable terrors. Closely he whispers to you, With determination Like the sweet birds from the honey tree. Buried saints, deep beneath the earth, Unseen like every Ghustle death. But to be awaken by the silence of the world. From this silence I see failure, From this failure I see weakness, From this weakness I see knowledge, From this knowledge, I see great saints. Only from these saints shall we find our saints.
D POET | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/5/2008 3:09:55 PM | they say failure and defeat make you stronger well if that is the case then I am the strongest bugger of all the whacked out buggy-crazed b1tches i am the queen of all those with glitches but that's ok, i'm not totally lost here because no matter how much i fall I manage to re-engineer re-fashion, re-plot another course for my life and right now this place isn't really what's right writing silly rhymes, searching for fine phrases are just a diversion, another of my mazes i too often get lost in and there i will wallow and never take action to stop drowning in shallow self doubt and fear and memories so painful i've got to find employment much more gainful utilizing my talents and growing some wings and escaping the painful apron strings i've tied myself to, but the buck stops here and i am going to conquer this crippling fear. | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/5/2008 11:28:58 PM |
re-fashion, re-plot another course for my life and right now this place isn't really what's right writing silly rhymes, searching for fine phrases are just a diversion, another of my mazes i too often get lost in and there i will wallow and never take action to stop drowning in shallow self doubt and fear and memories so painful i've got to find employment much more gainful
I just love you woman!! | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/6/2008 3:33:36 AM | REVOLUTION POEM Arise my people For the day of attainment has come. Behold a new dawn, avec a new world My black mother woke up with a beautiful s on her face. For her guffaws have restored back, My lost hope and strength unto my veins. As my sleepless night, has become a restful snooze. My African cry has been taken by the unseen breeze of AER. Tomorrow’s dream is no more, But my revolution poem is come. I suddenly find myself on the greatest mountain, Viewing the world from a clear view. Arise my people, For the great victory is here. My heart knows no fear, For the end of days is near. I was once drenched away by the unending pieces of my despaired fantasies. But my black mother’s laurels have brought me eternal day repose. Arise my people, For the day of attainment is come. Do not be troubled about your weary past As the longing dawn has come at last.
D POET | |
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| I don't care what you write...... Posted: 6/6/2008 3:43:21 AM | how sad to think our mother did lie in despair and aching want our Africa our mother always her rythyms beating in our veins her songs unending always in praise, hope , belief this continent where all things sheen shimmer and surface to air breathing, exhaling beauty | |
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