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Posted: 3/11/2008 11:06:08 PM | ^^ MSG 74 ^^
"Moaning Lisa was born,
breathing life from a vision"
her beauty heals mental lesions
translucent rose with ner a thorn
purity from perversion
illustrious romantic submersion
into a new realm, fiery aspersion
stepping forth naked,
raw
and ready for New Dawn's excursion
leaving a trail of petals in her path
she beckons this tattered one
offering new light free of wrath
blissful, this new life i shall not shun. | |
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Posted: 3/11/2008 11:39:09 PM | Oh computer my whore of choice
Goth. thou speak with clicking voice
does thine eyes sheen with glow
upon my soul in megabytes hold
as thou drive spins to beckon the slide
into the void life does glide
such wisdom unfolds upon a ever vast realm
with nimble fingers dancing at the helm
but sigh at the shutdown exclaimed damn
a bit I taste as you claim the ram
think im in a mood again  | |
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VTme
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Joined: 2/17/2008
Msg: 78 | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 7:47:42 AM | into the void life does glide
thanks to all for inviting me on your ride
take a left here, a right there
Ash will tell you to get gas where
but a quick trip this part must be
for I hear my boss calling me!
JiMO | |
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Render
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Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 79 | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 8:30:21 AM | #69
"Their wisdom forgotten but never mute"
we learn upon the learning upon the teaching
Plato, Homer, Pythagoras
the beginnings of a journey to the stars
they cannot have known how historic they really were
Lives affecting lives affecting lives
our past intrinsic to our future
our present shall ring down through the years
this responibility so great
we must strive, not to waste it, but to nurture it
Thanks Lunar! Really appreciate the feedback! Some of you are extremely hard to follow, but terribly inspirational, to the point where I can't help myself but to try! Thanks also to Ash, for creating this thread which lends itself to artists feeding each other's creativity. | |
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Render
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Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 80 | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 8:36:31 AM | #74
Sweating profusely
he sits at his desk
"his inked scalpel"
failing to make the final cut
that will complete his surgery upon his table
Why won't the wound close?
Why can't he save this dying work?
His failure looms before him
and then inspiration hits
he saves another from the brink of never-been
I HAD TO USE THAT LINE MANDRAKE!!!!!! | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 9:44:06 AM | | Lunar....Render....awesome writes fellas! I really enjoyed both your styles, and wordsmithing. It is truly nice to play off others, bouncing lines around and creating a totally different direction! | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 10:02:04 AM | This one is several days old but, it seems to fit the theme here too. (Hope you don't mind). Mandrake, I loved the visual of an "ink scalpel".
Untitled
I covered that scar when we met
thinking myself flawed,
you wrote about a sculpted legacy,
marbled travertine, texture
and so I drew you near
Arching the lowered brow that
dragged your weight across the floor,
painting out the tethers that
garroted the brazen mane
We’ll tell them not to look with disgust
if your ink stained hands and my
blue veined teeth tear each other’s skin
it’s merely the final consummation | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 12:19:22 PM | I covered the scar when we met
with my lips
my curiosity
my eyes
my own scars
my stories
my legacy
my footsteps
my grateful lying
my genuine chagrin
my faithful letting go
covered the scar
covered it with color and
my palm in prayer
covered it with cellophane
window pain
showered it with winter rain
stripped away the ragged edge
reviewed it with whispers
squinted at it on your cheek
mirrored it with my own
history cut into flesh to wind
through smiles and words
and soothing times
with memories bitten
back bitten more
than any moment could
ever chew
you
and your scars so like mine
etched by the madman
undaunted by midnight stew
garrulous when my screams harmonized
violence with silence and
the past I see in
those scars you cover
cover well my own
lifetime's song | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 6:24:08 PM | Message 84 'you'
You
Did I meet you today, not in my dreams...but here, on earth,
strange as this seems...In this chair, facing this screen...
Did I meet a man holding some keys?
Keys -
Opening... Questioning... Asking me things...
Why do you, why can't you...talk to me, please!
Tell me your secrets, your heart's desire,
what does it take to set you on fire?
To tell you those things, I'd have to believe
that you are the man - the one I need.
That you see more than a pair of breasts
and lips that make you think of sex.
To tell you those things, I'd have to believe,
that it is me you really see.
Insecure, uncertain...afraid to trust, always putting up
the "nice girl" front. Needing to believe that
I can find someone who wants what's in my mind.
Seeing that I am running scared, holding me close
as I try to share, the fears, the love, the hopes,
the seeds, of what I wish was the future for me.
Dare I believe, dare I trust, that in your eyes
is more than lust, that against your chest I can cry
and let out demons I hold inside. That you will stay
and hold on to me ...together finding our mutual dreams.
Did I meet you today, not in my dreams...but here on earth,
strange as it seems? Sitting in front of this computer screen?
BrwnBeauty
~I love all the poetry that has been shared...it is INSPIRING and thank you all for these smiles..and thoughts...wonderful!!! | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 6:39:24 PM | Message #80
it was all over
nothing left to do
close the door
shut the window
turn out the lights
there was...nothing left
no emotion
no love
no hurt
no pain...
nothing...
execpt for
the memories
the texture and taste of his skin
bright eyes filled with tears of laughter
why
why won't the wound close?
how could this be
still no pain
just a wounded soul wondering
BrwnBeauty | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 10:16:35 PM | | I search for words to justify the beauty that graces these pages......thank you ALL for your the "presents" in your presence....msg #73 expresses our existance in this moment quite well (well said Autumn Fantasy).....I simply hope that this message finds you all having a day that mirrors the beauty of your souls..... | |
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Posted: 3/12/2008 10:25:00 PM | "its all over
nothing
left to do"
but give in
to that
which ive missed
for so long
shes not a barbie
or a genius
but alive do i feel
encaptured in joy
does her smile make me miss
all that once once
all i thought lost
only to find it in
what i forgot i sought.
drunk as F*CK but damn that woman made me smile tonight like I didnt know how to
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Posted: 3/12/2008 10:28:40 PM | wake up, lez play word games
semantics of the deranged
porpoise **** tired of limp and lame
shootin estranged buffalo out on the range
can u play star role in this de`crepid jesters game
or just a barkless mongrel scratchin mange
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Posted: 3/13/2008 12:13:11 AM | | scuse my ramblings, no offense intended, was improper and unbefitting of such a fine thread. my bad Ash, just actin a fool and showin my a$$. ma said be good at somethin only thing i found thus far is bein good at bein bad, and thats no fame to claim even for the mundane. | |
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Render
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Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 91 | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 6:10:03 AM | #88
I have achieved
the unexplainable
Exhaltation
Rapture
the undeniable bliss
"encaptured in joy"
my body tingles as my soul is set free
The rhythm
pounding through my veins
in this altered state
I dare not look back
for fear that I may return
and never know this feeling
ever again
God's in His Heaven, and all is right with the world ***
*** I must credit my mother with this line. One day as a teenager, the sun was shining in Los Angeles, the smell of jasmine was in the air, a cool ocean breeze was blowing in, the housework was done, and the weekend laid open to me. I sat back, and this feeling came over me, euphoria. My mom asked me what was up, and I tried my best to explain it, but couldn't come up with the right words. This is what she told me. Thank you Lunar, for that trip down memory lane. | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 6:28:05 AM | Message #88
in this altered state
i dare not look back
once begun
each motion takes me closer
to the goal...
bliss
a rhythm
set by two
slippery, savory
delicious
each motion, takes me closer
~Lunar...loved your 'word play ~ felt the drink...the buzz, glad you had a great time...your words made me grin | |
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mmmmmy
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Joined: 2/11/2008
Msg: 93 | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 6:30:42 AM | #91
Waltzing through dark corriders
dreams awakening
my own horror
Never lifting my eyes from feet
soul feels heart with each beat
Light at the end of the tunnel
eyes see;
yet within my dream
can it finally be?
Floating through each winding climb
stairway to heaven
once be mine!
"my body tingles as my soul is set free"
Each want and need
All I can be
Nice place here Ash, very very nice! | |
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Render
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Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 94 | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 6:59:40 AM | ^^^^
mmmmmy! good to see you again!
countless steps lead up this
"Stairway to Heaven"
I climb, and the scenery changes before my eyes
People I've known, places I've been
recalling the past
while looking forward into a blurry picture of the future
I move on at a steady pace
my feet keeping up with the pulse of Time
Many doors lead off the stairway
but the landings are out of reach to me
I will know which one is mine
when there are no more stairs left to climb
(I ran out of time before I could edit my last post. My mother told me on the phone after I wrote it, that she believes she was quoting Rudyard Kipling. Thanks Mom!) | |
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mmmmmy
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Joined: 2/11/2008
Msg: 95 | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 7:08:08 AM | Thank ya Render! Loving this place! Your Ma is a very wise woman!
One of my favorites by Rudyard Kipling, my father introduced me to it many years ago!
If
If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you;
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
But make allowance for their doubting too;
If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or being lied about, don't deal in lies,
Or being hated, don't give way to hating,
And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise:
If you can dream -- and not make dreams your master;
If you can think -- and not make thoughts your aim;
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two imposters just the same;
If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
And stoop and build 'em up with worn-out tools;
If you can make one heap of all your winnings
And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
And lose, and start again at your beginnings
And never breathe a word about your loss;
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone,
And so hold on when there is nothing in you
Except the Will which says to them: "Hold on!"
If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
Or walk with kings -- nor lose the common touch,
If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you,
If all men count with you, but none too much;
If you can fill the unforgiving minute
With sixty seconds' worth of distance run --
Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
And -- which is more -- you'll be a Man, my son! | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 8:38:22 AM | | ...Good to have you back around mmmmmy ....it's always good to see you.....this last write is one of my fav's of yours....most awesome..........Mr. Luney: bahahaha, nothing like the touch of a woman, and a good strong shot (or 5..lol) to get the juices flowing...nice writes, even if you were drunk!! ...Got nothin' but love for ya man!!....The only requirement here: an open mind......and my openminded a$$ finds your drunka$$ to be quite amusing, and your feelings refreshing........Render....U know its always good to have you man....love the writes, as always......BrwnBeauty Good to see you too girl! Missed u too!...and your writes are as awesome as ever........I'd write today (maybe later), but I'm handing out resume's like a crazy foo over here...(stopped in to get a few things, and head out to a job fair)......wish me luck!! Much luv - Ash | |
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Render
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Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 97 | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 9:03:23 AM | Very inspiring mmmmmy. Reminds me of that Skynyrd song, Simple Man.
When will I be a man, Daddy?
When you no longer care what others think about you.
When you are comfortable with yourself
Then you will have begun the journey towards manhood
Becoming a man is not meeting a series of goals
But in deciding who you are, and being true to that
There is no ritual involved
There is no great revelation
Just because you reach a magical age
Or lay with a woman for the first time
Doesn't make you a man.
But instead, reaching the understanding that comes with these achievements
When you give of yourself
not for the things you can gain
but for the simple act of kindness
This is being a man
When you are willing to lay down your life
but not your principles
Knowing that your principles are worth more than your life
Then you will be a man
When you see the thoughts running through your children's minds
and know what they will do next
When you see them for the precious, fragile things they are
A man, you will have become
When will I be a man, Daddy?
When you no longer have to ask that question, my son. | |
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mmmmmy
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Joined: 2/11/2008
Msg: 98 | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 9:34:29 AM | "When you see the thoughts running through your children's minds"
Hoping to disquise all the ugliness left behind
remember, this is how you learned
Not always the pretty picture your parents hoped
yet you learned and coped
Maybe in some ugly warrented ways
You grew!
Let them know of your thoughts
feelings , you tend to forget about today
not because you forgot
just because you choose to hide
inside the pain it caused
and why.
Let each young one know of all your pain
your sorrow
love songs unsung
left to die upon the rope
things you had to give up
What you are today
for what you did
what you learned
only your dismay;
precious lessons
learned with your life
Let them stand for something
more than what you feel them now
like what you hate about all you have done
Past discretions, heart malfunctions
lessons learned well
make us what we are
now;
Delicately wafted unto another song
one a little more bluesey...
sadder yet strong
true!
The Song after all the Storm
It is the one
we bestow!
Make it count
It's the only one we know! | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 11:18:05 AM | Message #98
There are so many things I want to share
with you
What a difference loving you has
made in my life....
Every morning I get this astounding pleasure
of awaking you...
and once again - I'm blessed.
Watching you laugh, full out
hearing you sigh deep heartfelt
teenage angst...
Sharing with you the highs and oh
so many lows of my youth -
wondering if you hear and understand
that although they were not the best
of times, they shaped my life and
gave me the courage to be...
your mom.
I am reminded it is my privilege
It is the one
thing...above all others
that I count as pure...
You my son...bring me joy.
~thank you mmmmmy for the inspiration.... | |
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mmmmmy
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Joined: 2/11/2008
Msg: 100 | |
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Posted: 3/13/2008 11:29:27 AM | #92
"Each motion, takes me closer"
Though my heart is feeling colder
like the curtain that is drawn
after a long play
played ...too long!
I lost a piece of me and you
think I left it in your arms
I wandered lonely like a child
now I am here
alone
sorry~!
Let me be the pain
I am
All the breath
I breathe within'
like a gentle wind
flowing
softly over all your
glowing soul you left me'
hell, unchain me
I am only one soul
shining
Please be kind
know I am
sliding
simple abstract rythms
unrail me
while my
soul decieves me
Let us size it up
become
You are my
road
I am not lying! | |
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