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Posted: 10/24/2009 3:50:24 PM | my first poem (of sorts)
Posted: 10/24/2009 12 52 AM
I have never tried writting a poem before was sitting infront of pc today and just wrote the following that seems like a poem but it probably isnt
Lonliness hurt and pain
why must the days be so long and so loneley?
why must the nights be so dark and so cold
as i lay here in my bed
i think about all the things i left unsaid
why do my thoughts make me cry till it hurts
why when i need some comfort theres no one there
Is it me that turned him away
or was it another that made his day complete
I only know that i wont find another like him
the one that made me laugh
and made me cry
the one who had paitence and took the stress from my life
Then i went and blew it all away
pushed to another at the end of the day
How my heart misses the him i love so much
But has he gone to another
lonleness can be a terribe thing
especially when the phones doe not ring
If only there was a chance to win back a love
that once was | |
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Posted: 10/24/2009 7:53:25 PM | | Yes, Pearl of Wisdom, that's a poem. Poetry doesn't always have to rhyme. Just write from your heart and allow others to interpret, and enjoy, it! Thanks. | |
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Posted: 10/24/2009 8:02:55 PM | Pearl of Wisdom, I agree with fish....post away....words will come.
Answers found within words sought
Listening to lessons
That are heart taught
Quiet yourself and let it flow
Words with meaning to you
Sometimes a screen
can show
Do not worry about rhyme
Or pantameter (whatever that may be)
Let your heart speak
Just push the key
:0) ~Wind~ | |
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Posted: 10/24/2009 10:08:29 PM | the world's most dangerous beast
is vast and quick on its feet
the hippo took a midget as feast
swallowed him whole as a treat
I know why Noah left it behind
an enormous body filled with cunning
had no room on his Ark in kind
hippos made the rest go running | |
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Posted: 10/24/2009 10:56:55 PM | Do unto others as you would be done by,
what goes around comes around.
Don't let your hate leave you hung dry,
and never ever look down
Pay for your mistakes in trust,
never let fools be your guide.
always use crisco for your crust,
and you'll have a perfect pie.
( sorry...I'll get better at this) | |
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Posted: 10/25/2009 2:55:21 AM | holding hands in the park
going out after dark
together we would walk
talking laughing
not wanting it to stop
the fond happy memories
lay deep within my heart
but now when i wake up
i am hurting so much
to never feel your hand in mine again
oh how it hurts me so much
the flame that once burned
you put out in your heart
as if im just a stranger
oh how it hurts me so much
remember the wind and the rain
the gusts and the blows of the wind
through my hair
the laughter we had on a pier in the snow
i know things go wrong
but i try to do right
when you show no emotion
oh how it hurts me so much
please dont be a stranger this man in my heart
egnite once more the flame in you heart
so it wont hurt quite so much
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Posted: 10/25/2009 5:36:25 AM |
I landed softly in you
energy passing through
an invisible pulse
stirring your soul
nothing to hold onto
so nothing to let go
just a feeling deep within
whispering freedom
written two days ago on
LAST LINE REPEATED...using 8 lines | |
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Posted: 10/25/2009 6:05:48 PM | infancy ..
falling again farther to the front
splitting the time between now and then
staring again at the things blinding me
souless orbs guiding me backward
the things from then haunting me now
rushing at me in the dark, blurring my vision anew
when do you begin again, when you have finally fallen..???
starting over is easy, you just have to figure out
how to take that very first step
Hash 2009
hay girl ...wtf over ... how the heck r ya ...??? | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 5:24:30 AM | Jamesless, poetry man, Weee, pearl, windswept, fishouttaH2O: thank you for stoppin' through...pearl, writing from your heart can help you heal, and others as well...so, write on, and don't worry about what anyone else thinks.....
Sorry to make it so short...but I've got the flu and my brain hurts...(don't freak out on me, you can't catch it over the Internet!)...
Hash! What it do, boo ? ;) Other than this sickness I'm finer than a frog hair split 2 ways....Colo-friggin-rado? Definately not the guy next door, now....call me...we need to catch up...soo much has changed here, too
these chills
feels
like Braille
in Hell.
electrolyte
overdose
I wanna feel well
my mind says one thing
my body says another
it's times like these
I really want my mother | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 5:37:00 AM | It's times like these
That I turn to God
I put my trust in Him
When things are bad
When people mock and sneer
I feel 'God is here'
And it alleviates all fear
Bad past memories haunt
Their ethereal voices taunt
But still God's grace removes all trace
Of their hope of a sense of disgrace
For due to God I am whole
And there's peace within my soul | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 7:02:31 AM | sweetly i dream
of here and now
not forever
gratitude
runs thru
me
again
knowing
even in pain
sickness, poverty
life flows like river
and happiness
will fade away
and i'll embraced
pain, sickness
poverty knowing
life flows like river
(take care ash...plenty of vit c and fluids if it's a terrible cold...and if it's the flu keep hydrated...rest and be well...love you) | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:00:55 AM | Another resurrected poem...(Someday I will come up with new stuff...)
This one was actually published. Can you believe it? I read it now and think...wow, there must have been a desperate need for really bad poetry... 
(at the edge)
at the edge of the pier
I lean across the railing
and look out
at the edge of the Universe.
the jagged rocks
and the white foam
from the infinite unknown
at the edge of the Universe.
(you can't touch me because you can't see me)
solitude.
seclusion.
(I like being alone)
so I step outside the railing
and I climb up on the rocks
and
watch the Universe twist and churn below.
frothing white salt caresses my body
in white foaming stars.
(you can't touch me but you can see me)
I am a planet.
(and I like being alone)
walking on the beach
you say
one step further
I am at the edge and I want to go further.
so I step off the rocks, outside the pier.
so we step into the water, out of the dry sand-
i am drowning i am drowning and you are touching me i am drowning you try to save me because i am drowning (I like being alone) i dive under in white foaming stars and you can't see me because i have drowned and you are smiling and you can't see me because i have drowned and you are smiling and you can't touch me because i've drowned
-so I climb back on the rocks
and I step back on the dry sand
but
I am wet and sticky
and
I don't like being alone
but I don't want to go back into the Universe anymore.
How emo is that[/]... | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 10:14:45 AM | I think this is a great write and quite wonderful that you got this published....
it made me think of an old song ...by Nick Cave redone by Ute Lemper...Little Water Song
<div class="quote"> am drowning i am drowning and you are touching me i am drowning you try to save me because i am drowning (I like being alone) i dive under in white foaming stars and you can't see me because i have drowned and you are smiling and you can't see me because i have drowned and you are smiling and you can't touch me because i've drowned
as the reader, I really felt like I was drowning...the constant flow of words and the repetition.....I say
write some more!
Please! | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:39:38 PM |
I think this is a great write and quite wonderful that you got this published....
Awww...thank you so much, ~Tropical~!
You have made my day... | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 9:23:59 PM | a man of timeless wisdom
met a girl with infinite heart
and when they touched
clouds gathered and gushed
and a celebration did start
a dance in the rain
washed away all pain
and a flicker became a fire
but the man had learned
how not to get burned
by trivial wanton desire
her heart was soft as she looked aloft
past the wrinkle in his brow
could it endure something so unsure
to weave a future from the now
a stitch a thread aren't a pillowy bed
but a bed is made from such
is a bond an alliance or is a bond a chain
too hard to tell from a touch | |
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Posted: 10/26/2009 9:56:33 PM | Hi Ash:
Here is one for you: never mere ash, always a Fire.
Sleek strong in confidence
Mired secure if common sense
Shined in steel bell o' brass
Restrained not, idiot encompass
Stalwart standing mainline steamed
Nurtured free expression dreamed
Fueled with compassion tender
Strength within angels sent Her
Steel shined in spirit grind
Sleek along the rails refined
Headlamp proud shining beacon
Life struggles from never weaken
Locomotion carried train
Sweet strong, whistle refrain
Always in tune, and on time
'Ash' fired in respected rhyme
Trackside admired stop signal red
Green advance confidence spread
Fired from the soul boiler steamed
Fueled in experience not schemed
Mighty sung is the confident call
Locomotive beauty shining enthrall
Passioned boiler soul glowing bright
Trained not repressed, freedom delight!
Hugs.
Sincere.
TBK | |
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Posted: 11/10/2009 6:12:25 PM | I'll second that opinion 'Tropical'.....that write takes you with it...thx, wildflower...Iceaxe, it's a pleasure to see you 'round these parts...s,been far too long...(you too Rose!!! thx!)
Blueglove....I'm glad that you find peace...AND that you decided to stop by..
And TNT, I thanked you on your thread....and in re-reading that, I thank you again....*hugs*....writes such as those serve as awesome reminders for those days when u need it....
Had to at least acknowledge that I'd read those....I usually try to accompany any responses and such with a poem.....but...well...some days the words just aren't there...and I kept waiting...and they never came...oh well...I suppose sometimes silence is nice too right?...
I guess I'm gonna go with the original 'idea' of the thread and try and 'steal' a line and see what I can come up with...
(I absolutlely don't mean that to be condescending, I'm just reverting back to plan 'A'...but plan 'B' suits me just fine too)
ash | |
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Posted: 11/10/2009 7:10:53 PM | Pardon me....I got lost...(the following is a fine illustration of why it's a damn good thing I don't care what I write either )
Black..
were the eyes of a deer that I bumped into
to share a moment of silence..
well....actually....a few
on a mountain top
where all the world would stop.
where all the whirrled would stop.
and hold me in it's breath
bearing witness to the death
of previous ways
and lazy days
with eyes wide open
lungs expanding...no longer choking...
On the taste of change.
Isn't it strange?
To think of what that deer has been through...
To think we are running, and hiding, and eating too...
And there's a fish out there that changes sex when it's mate dies..
And is then followed by the harem,
although it was previously one of the wives....
Swimming
Upstream
Living in
The In-Between
when what I would really rather do
is get lost in the view
of the black
and the endless
eyes of the friendless
dear | |
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Posted: 11/10/2009 10:23:09 PM | For three weeks in October you terrorized us all
Gas station, school yard, bus stop, mall...
Not one was safe in your three state spree
Until you were captured up the street from me.
Seven years later, after ten lives lost
Yours makes eleven the final deadly cost.
You showed no remorse say those
Bearing witness to the death...
Refusing to offer apologies
With even your dying breath.
With that revelation, a final thought comes to mind
It's straight to hell for you, Sniper...
Now you're paid in kind. | |
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Posted: 11/11/2009 9:08:09 AM | the world is a better place
with that SOB dead and gone.
scum of the human race
finally where he belongs. | |
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Posted: 11/11/2009 11:53:22 AM | Thank you
i try hard not to be the bad guy
but loneliness has captured my heart
and every word i express to you
feels like the rapture has sparked
the evil ones left behind
the innocents raised above
im not bad for the evil i do
but because of my expressions of love
i want to hold you, embrace you
know your inner most thoughts
but it seems that i disgust you
so even to heaven im lost
the smallest phrases i utter
makes you shudder from utter distaste
perhaps i should shuffle off this mortal coil
and leave you no more disgrace
for there's no opera that held such a phantom
no cathedral that held such a beast
as the one so in love with you
pray Lord let this madness cease
call me, posthaste, back to the essence
burn my ashes to nonexistence
let my soul linger in limbo
none would know the difference
you never had a design flaw
even Satan's a masterpiece
so i know this is the plan for me
but please Lord, just let me leave
you wont give undue pressure
i've heard that a thousand times
pressure i don't mind
i don't even mind the dying
its just so hard to see and focus
through all the tears im crying
and i know you know my mission
and your visions much greater than mine
but i don't want to exist like this
your world is too unkind...
Then a shadow fell across the earth, and the clouds begin to drift apart.
The sun shone ever brighter as a VOICE began to speak:
MY SON, I AM THE DESIGNER OF ALL THINGS AND YOUR DESIGN TO ME IS FAMILIAR
I NEVER DESIGNED YOU A SOUL MATE I WAS A BIT APATHETIC
BUT YOU HAVE SURPASSED MY GREATEST EXPECTATIONS FOR YOU
AND NOW I HAVE GROWN SYMPATHETIC
I WILL TURN TOWARDS YOU THE HEART OF THE ONE YOU MOST DESIRE.
NOW SLEEP MY FAIR CHILD AWAY FOR NOW...
then the sun dimmed, the shadow retreated, and the clouds merged
i awaken from my slumber lying next to you
and i can only wonder the things that we will do
my tears are gone forever
your smile has awakened anew
and i stare into the Heaven's
and whisper...
Thank You | |
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I loved that!!!!!!!Touched my heart!!!!!!!!
