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 Render

Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 176
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/10/2008 5:08:16 PM
Subterfuge is my game
make you think one thing
but the ulterior motive
is too well hidden

You think you know me
but I guarantee
you only know the me
I let you see

shadows and covert operations
plague the background of my kisses
seeking your ______ (fill in the blank)
while I woo your heart

You're not even a number to me
I call you "Dear" and "Sweetie"
so I won't have to remember your name
and when I get what I came for, I'll leave you wondering
 Visualdistortion

Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 177
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/14/2008 7:50:57 PM
I never claimed to be normal

Vagina friendly non-sense
Proceed with caution

My vagina is my home
My vagina is like my heart
No current use for it but i keep it around just in case

Hello Kitty
Where are your morals?
Please remove your morals from my vagina, thank you
My vagina wrote a check that your whorish heart couldnt cash

Disclaimer
Used by permission from Kim
Of course i would be Kim
I use myself all the time

All the silliness aside i do love my vagina
And
My vagina loves me
 *mandrake*

Joined: 9/19/2006
Msg: 178
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/14/2008 7:55:17 PM
Ahhhh Visual!....never a dull moment! That was really cute.
 Render

Joined: 4/18/2007
Msg: 179
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/15/2008 4:46:55 PM
I love that line, "I use myself all the time"

Very good stuff there Kim.

As far as whorish hearts go, I've never met a heart that could be bought, but I have met a couple that couldn't stay true. Would those qualify as sluttish hearts?

Check ya later.
 Visualdistortion

Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 180
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 9:52:22 AM
With arms wide open
You invite me into your arms
Warm and safe next to you
Laying in bed all day
I never wanna leave
The safe heaven of your body
Bare flesh
Naked skin
Eyes that twinkle
Lips that are soft next to mine
Lay close to me falls from my lips
For you are my rock
For you are my sun

.........When it begins to rain
 iaanybodyoutthere

Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 181
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 4:14:51 PM
The cold washes with my sorrow to the terra

I turn my back to the sun

and dream of hurricans
 lunarlunacy

Joined: 1/14/2008
Msg: 182
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 4:19:38 PM
so much spoken in so select words. amazing write ^^
 iaanybodyoutthere

Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 183
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 4:25:05 PM
thanks brother. I had to leave something for visual
 iaanybodyoutthere

Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 184
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 4:25:32 PM
They stole my shine
Jackals with Thoroughbred thighs
Scent trailing ,platinum ice fingered beauty queens
I fell weak from the edge of the pack



Cut off,stuck in contemplation,herb induced head cloud syndrome



Diazipam nodding a 5 day shadow

The onslaught of a Tripoli tragedy smashed the statue to tread stones


Beauty became void
Left to remain on the door step of a herb shrine
Backstreet grime redemption
Halos make such great holla hoops
Shimmers disappeared from paved roads


The enertia contained was straining against fatal observed love
Life's downtrodden death needs to mind -less waiting

Soon enough the hands will clap on a gatekeepers eastern mountain time change




Momentary cells for a momentary journey
So close to wax


For now,,,,,,,
I'll take one order of smashed peas while I vision journey some hairy retro porno


Stay drunk men!,
to drunk to die


Amazed by the amber room,rotating satellite pics of a night lit mother earth
Mattering less than Napoleons' hidden hand

I think I will keep my place among the deformities and northern neon lights
Drunk as a mule skinner


I pretend to have this certain connection with nature
wood grain to ass
I hope ken-Chin finds a cure for cancer
I'll pass

Stick me with the pitchforks........between the starvation and nuclear fallout
Let my bar stool be ground zero
While I wail along with waits drunk piano


I said moon jumping without boots



Drunk at 30,I'll toast to that
Blurring vision,all the big glasses look like bug shields

Forgetting Hitler,never knowing Vlad's burning dinning halls

Smiling,medicated, I half ass fake the concept of loving this shit
Drunk as shit,money in hand chasing your hand sculpted tits


Excuse tar bender? I was not born,so your accusations were correct
but,more a matter of friction and wayward molecules bringing headboards into stop sign symbolism



MY parents were whores
The motherland a red light district
I teethed on rigs
Stretched my bones upward on the Salton sea



Here I sit
Pen,man,booze
One nasty case of sea legs


CNN makes me count-twitch


**** yes!
To booze
Tongue so slurred I removed the tip

Some would call it a dull mind
Thursday night happy hour quite soul
Drunk,grave hopping Bronte's pleas
Hungover
Bukowski rules my everyday
Searching for sparrows
Ignoring planes



I drink
I drink
I drink
I drink

Never think cause I never was
Therefor???????
How can I be this wonderful celebration of man

2 more please

I can still feel my pleas
 Yokoh

Joined: 5/8/2008
Msg: 185
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 4:32:46 PM

Beauty became void
Left to remain on the door step of a herb shrine
Backstreet grime redemption
Halos make such great holla hoops


The whole poem was a great read. Thanks!
 lunarlunacy

Joined: 1/14/2008
Msg: 186
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Posted: 6/19/2008 7:08:35 PM
Isanybodyoutthere, I kept going back and rereading your celebration of man thus heres my humble spin off from one of your wicked lines


Domination toys for the masses

"Halos make such great holla hoops"
and bent crucifiction stakes.. marvelous jacks
Hopscotch grids fingerpainted in menses of the virgin
Cats cradle stringed from pharohs wrappings
Old Maid played with a tarot deck
marbles with the eyes of seers and crones.
and jumprope thats a daisy chain of tied zealot tongues.

unfinished....
 Visualdistortion

Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 187
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 7:42:38 PM
The cold washes with my sorrow to the terra

I turn my back to the sun

and dream of hurricans



The ocean can be the most beautiful thing
It can also be the deadliest
Such as life
You either learn to sink
Or you learn to swim
Do you wanna fight or do you want to give in?

On that note welcome back and thanks for posting in my thread. Its good to read your words again. Stay awhile it wont hurt you
 ChrisR20

Joined: 6/12/2008
Msg: 188
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 7:50:32 PM
from a while ago...


Growing up all alone
with no real place to call my home
playful and funny is all i show
but hurt and pain is all i know
abused, Kc and jojo all my life
trusted many people but it was all a lie
this miserable shit im in is called my life
sometimes i just want to fall and cry
bright skies turned blatantly grey
with hopes and dreams fading away
can end it all with the edge of a blade
but this is my destined fate
i made a mistake, but it doesnt seem real to me
trust and love is what everyone steals from me
sorry but hurt and pain doesnt appeal to me
memories from the past are still in me
they all come back when it happens again
i live a lie just wrapped up in sin
i cover my secrets with half of a grin
you were family way more than a friend
you pushed me to a point where i want to end
and hoping for the day i wont be back again
you caused a horrible pain across my chest
im now scared of life and look forward to death
 Visualdistortion

Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 189
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Posted: 6/19/2008 8:13:58 PM
Illusions, delusions and conclusions.....welcome to my world and my thread. Thank you for posting and feel free to post as much as you like.

Clockwork
Tick tock
Choices steer the boat into the river
The river then proceeds to carve its way through
Through the future of the grains of sand
Sometimes we have a tendency to flow, over flow
Through the glass we are looking
Our future not melted yet
Not fully solid
Possibly a flower petal to see us through
Like a never ending spiral staircase
Never expect to read the world in a single atom
Each day starts a new chapter

.....Till one day you finally reach the end
 reinventingom

Joined: 2/12/2008
Msg: 190
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 9:23:42 PM
^ I likes it, dw. a nice change.
a dry passage, a hint of scent, end thoughts...
 iaanybodyoutthere

Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 191
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/20/2008 10:16:55 AM
That will be a good day
 lberserkerl

Joined: 11/21/2006
Msg: 192
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Posted: 6/20/2008 10:49:28 AM
You're so beautiful but you'd never notice me
I sit and wait for you day by day
Just a word from your lips to my ears to a instant thought of romance
Love's fading dream as you dilly dally with your cellphone
Inside I die a lil each day
Drinking my strong aromic coffee as the stains pour out from my cigarettes
I strive to find some kinda crazy saying in hopes to get a laugh from you
You still gesture with your phone
Must be thinking I'm some sort of oddball for gazing upon your femininity
I'd love to just walk up to you say hi
That would be all too easy for me I suppose so I smoke another one and hide my pride
Pride falsely used as I wake up alone another momment of failure
If you could see my heart you would know I'm true
What's a poor fella left to do
 eyestothesky

Joined: 1/12/2008
Msg: 193
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/20/2008 11:21:18 AM
just wanted to tell you i liked, and do like, this one, and will probably read again, and like it then


With arms wide open
You invite me into your arms
Warm and safe next to you
Laying in bed all day
I never wanna leave
The safe heaven of your body
Bare flesh
Naked skin
Eyes that twinkle
Lips that are soft next to mine
Lay close to me falls from my lips
For you are my rock
For you are my sun

.........When it begins to rain


scattered thoughts
like puzzle pieces
fit together like flower petals
white, and purple
litter the ground
try and retrace a thought
that has no beginning and no end
i look away and see the beach, and the moon
and see the towels lying there
while standing on another shore
lead with the heart, and with your heart be true
give everything you have
everything
 iaanybodyoutthere

Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 194
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/21/2008 1:32:39 PM
Give me art or give me death
Give me oranges,greens,stone cold lines
Give me Autumn,December frost my vision
Give me Sass Christan
Bring impressionism back to the conscious impression
I'm little boy blue without Ryden
Give me a moment to swing from the chandelier
Give me art or give me death


Let the stars be the backdrop
Let me be a Thespian for the sea
Spouting a parody of love while claiming to be a man named mud
Leaving much deserved ado's to the lapping waves
Let me be leaves being crushed to texture the pigments
Let prayers be centered around magenta sunsets

Give me art
Stain the walls with it
Monochromatic the air
Give me art,or for god's sake give me death

Maybe a human will one day paint a monument to the ants
One that hums of the dead inspired
Narrating the fissures in the cloud rifts

Properly shading the edges of a crumbling society
Give me art and it's journey
I wish to be eaten by time
Slowly worn to the seams
Popping at the buttons
Smiling amongst a pile of wrinkles and Merlot
Writing postcards to those moments yet to come.......................

Give me part in the connective element
Give me art
 lunarlunacy

Joined: 1/14/2008
Msg: 195
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Posted: 6/21/2008 2:27:39 PM
i dont think your "part in the connective element" of art has to be given to you Isanybodyouthere, I think you just created. Kudos ! Narrating fissures in the cloud rifts - indeed!
 Visualdistortion

Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 196
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Posted: 6/22/2008 9:44:06 AM
Just wanted to say thanks to everyone who has and still posts in here. I may not comment on everyones thoughts/poetry but i do read them and its appreciated

Depression is comforting
Love is disturbing
Mistakes are forgiven
But never forgotten
Have you ever polluted yourself so much that you f*cked up reality?
Pollution, justification, garbage of the brain
Take out the trash
Pushing further, wild and untamed
Such a violation of what you used to be
Dance before me
Flames of the heart
Honor your heart
Follow what it tells you
Dont deny emotions

...But how can you when

All you have done is make mistakes
When its your biggest fear
Emotions
Shall it seal my fate?
Or be the death of me?
 Visualdistortion

Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 197
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Posted: 6/22/2008 7:33:19 PM
Cheap as a whore
Emotions come dime a dozen
Emptiness existence
Take the ax to your heart
Closed behind prison walls
Say those sweet things to me
Let me hang on the last bit of hope
Dangling for life
Dont let me fall
Or let go of the rope you bound
So my fate can be sealed into the ground
 truthisee

Joined: 12/25/2005
Msg: 198
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/22/2008 7:49:29 PM
Nice Visual....can't help myself.


Enigma.


Die with me.
Micky and Mallory and a blood that tells forever
I will teach the name of freedom
if you teach me the every part of your whole.

Hang for me
know me by betrayal and lust
I will sweat from your pores
and lead you to the window.

Let us bleed
in denial and lost servitude
let the black straps flex
tonight there Is no safety.

Red light
smoke fills the room in sighs
one chair, tonight
I will teach you to fly.



..T..
 Visualdistortion

Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 199
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Posted: 6/23/2008 9:08:53 AM
Nice piece T fully enjoyed it. Feel free to post as you wish here

Broken dreams
Broken heart
Broken glass
Shattered into pieces
Tremble like a solider
Deep into your trenches

Drink away painful memories
Hide insecurities
This path i walk on seemingly alone
Sponge bathe me in holy water
Maybe i will see the light

Cannot breathe, cannot escape
Prison, this small cell i am in
Until you enter my flesh
Until you walk in my shoes
You will never understand
I shall cut the noose
And fall where i may
 Visualdistortion

Joined: 1/13/2008
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Posted: 6/23/2008 11:57:26 AM
Dont like raw silly x rated material? Then dont read this kthanks . I call this Silly c*ck, tricks are for Halloween, nun-sense really

Dont worry it wont hurt long
Nuckingfuts
Cream of corn
Cream of c*ck
Fruit roll up
Or
Roll up your c*ck
Get the hell out of my vision
Barb wire in my mouth
Here darling let me suck you off
Such a pr*ck!
Such sarcasm you pound out of your mouth
Even so
I would save my orgasm just for you
F*cking brillant
Save a kiss for me?
Kiss me or go to hell
Here here let me wash your mouth out
With bleach
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