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Posted: 4/1/2008 9:14:34 AM | Hi another:
I read your profile, and to be honest, it came across like a "want-ad" from the newspaper...not being harsh, mind you 
You are a very pretty lady and you have a beautiful smile...write down on a piece of paper things that you would like for people to know about you that compliments that positive personality you have and then type it onto your profile.
Also give some ideas about what you would like to do on a date, that alleviates some of the pressure off the fella...
Add some more and if you would like me to look again, I will be happy to.
Good luck and Happy fishing.
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Posted: 4/1/2008 9:17:58 AM | Lisa,
Yes I wanted your review...and thought Leib was part of your "team" I guess. Maybe we should have Leib change his name to "coattails2008"? haha
Actually his advice did make sense and I used some of his suggestions. Would love a female perspective when you get time though.
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Posted: 4/1/2008 9:21:35 AM | 's happenin' Mark :)
Your profile is good...not too chatty, but enough to keep my attention
Add a little more of what you would like to find in a girl...there is, as I have stated before, an enormous realm of female types...haha...so detail what it is you are hoping to find and see what happens 
Good luck and Happy Fishing.
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Posted: 4/1/2008 9:38:19 AM | Hi Tony
I liked your profile it was personal yet whimsical
Only there is nothing about what it is you would like to find in a woman....list a few things to close that ever widening range of female personalities 
You sound like a fun date
Good luck and Happy Fishing....
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Posted: 4/1/2008 10:12:59 AM | loved the nickname for Liebs...but I agree his insight was good, I only hope his sense of humor is too, as we are teasing him a little...lol
Now...as for your profile....I thoroughly enjoyed reading each line
The fact that you took the time to put serious thought into what you wanted to say in your profile, say much about your character. I personally prefer to "read" about a person rather than skim across a few lines that were hastily written.....maybe it's a chick thing, but if you are "putting yourself on the market" per say, CRIKEY at least have the ingredients listed....LOL
I would not change a thing...well, maybe put the picture that your daughter took at the doctor's office as your primary, it's a good one of your face
Good Luck.....I don't think your going to need it though 
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Posted: 4/1/2008 10:31:09 AM | Hi tenderlung....
I enjoyed your profile immensely....very articulate and well written.
The only thing is perhaps put in a little more information (being sure to begin a new paragraph of course  ) about the kind of girl you are in search of, or hoping to at least run into at the fruit stand at the market
I loved it...great job!
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Posted: 4/1/2008 2:59:22 PM | Thank you. I appreciate your time, and critique. Now, we better get out of here before Leib tracks us down. 
ha ha
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Posted: 4/1/2008 3:25:03 PM | Hi matthewc22,
I think your profile has great potential...just needs a little more info
You make mention of hanging out with your friends (and friends are awesome aren't they !!!) or spending time at the cottage, which instantly had me wondering where would I fit in if I were a potential date candidate LOL
I enjoyed reading about you in your second paragraph, it speaks volumes about your character
Perhaps a little more info on what you would hope find in that special someone....
Other than that - super!!!
Happy fishing.
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Posted: 4/1/2008 3:35:22 PM | Hi Hope
First thing is I saw 'red flags' from reading your FIRST sentence...I am going to guess that you are referring to a teenager and not being seen in public with them is at THEIR sole digression and not because you are some unfit mother or pedophile that has been put under a restraining order...(please tell me I am right ).
Why not scratch that line altogether.....
I suggest perhaps more detail on you interests and a few more pictures...from what I can tell in your photograph, you are attractive (love the "Jessica Rabbit" thing going on with your hair ) but it is hard to see.
and check your spelling/punctuation 
Aside from that, - "you got it goin' on" girl.
Happy Fishing!!
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Posted: 4/1/2008 3:42:28 PM | hmmmm,
Roughdiamond,
You have "intimate encounter" listed, so I am not sure what to tell you.....I'm the last person to give advise on this subject....
Your profile seems like you would be a nice catch for someone (unless you have already been caught and are just here out of boredom)....you may need someone else's input on this one.
Sorry that I couldn't be much help, but good luck to you none the less..
Lisa
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Posted: 4/1/2008 3:49:32 PM | Hi jerrybear
WOW, I guess I don't have to tell you that you bare an amazing resemblance to a cat named Waylon Jennings.....
anyhow, back to your profile...
In the entire 10 seconds that it took me to read your profile (and I believe that was being generous on the time ) I could see some good traits about you....but it left me a little disappointed because there wasn't enough detail about the handsome guy that wrote it
and nothing about what might would catch your eye....
Add some more picture, add some more insight and tell what you would like a first date to be like...and if you would still like, I would be happy to review again....
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Posted: 4/1/2008 3:59:55 PM | Hi oncebitten
I'm not sure about other ladies...but the word "separated" generally sends me running for the door (too much drama is usually attached here)...but, I like that you are honest about your marital situation, so, I think adding an addendum to your profile (such as : divorce will be final in 2 weeks!!! or she ran off with my best friend and I sure do miss him)...LOL but seriously, let the ladies out there know that they can feel at ease contacting you without having to worry about your ex stalking them or sending them hate mail...
Other than that, the profile is well written. I adored the snippet about your mom and the blind dates...LOL....gotta love those mama's, right?
Happy Fishing.
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