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Posted: 6/21/2008 4:47:27 PM | michael,
First off, I do hope that when you want to "put it up to the group", that you do that on your own thread, not mine, as the rules state is appropriate !!!
I do not like your pics, they are just not good enough for a profile. You need a nice, close up, smiley pic for your main pic. Then a few pics, that are clear, that show off your personality. Also at least 1 full body pic.
I really hate to see a profile that is written as your's is. Kind of lists. It is so unprofessinal, and so hard to read. Also the fact that you do not capitalize the beginning of a sentence is just poor grammar. You need to condence what you have written about yourself, into a nice paragraph. Not all of that info you have written is right to keep, some of it is over the top.
Then write a nice paragraph about the lady you are searching for.
You state that you are an "executive" with a bachelors degree ???? Your profile does not appear to be from someone with that !!! It does truly need a lot of work. Hope this helps you out and good lcuk.
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Posted: 6/21/2008 5:08:12 PM | Maybe it would be a good idea for you to look at mine. I seem to have a mixed bag of results.
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Posted: 6/21/2008 5:08:35 PM | UniqueLisa,
Ok lets start with your pic. I really don't like any of them. You are a very pretty girl, and these pics are just not very flattering for you. Most of them are fuzzy and hard to see. You need to get a friend to take some nice pics of you. You need a nice, clear, close up, smiley pic for your main pic. Then go outside and take a few pics having fun and showing off your persoanlity. Then at least 1 full body pic. Just be yourself, don't try to be someone you think the guys want. !!!
I like part of your profile and hated some of it. I did not like your list of do's and on't for the guys. You also had some spelling errors in your profile. I copied and pasted you profile and made some changes. Take a look at it and see what you think. I think it makes you a better and more desireable profile. You would just have to add a little more to the mans section. Let them know a little more about the man you are searching for. Hope this helps you out and thanks for the compliments !!
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I am fun loving, and the most unique individual you will meet. My friends would definately say i'm interesting, very talkative, and could debate about anything. I love delving into people personality, and seeing if we clash or match! I do have a tendancy to be random in conversation (my mind is constantly working). I have a good heart, and am told by many people there is something about me, hopefully they meant it in a good way lol. I am an outgoing person and love socializing, wether thats one to one, or in a group. A really ideal for me would be a countyside walk. I love walking, scenery, and could sit somewhere like that for hours. I guess I stand out as an individual , as Im not a sheep, i,m me and i,m happy with that. I'm A born again christian, but still can enjoy myself and appreciate what one has to offer. My friends and family are important to me. I make sure I see them regular. I enjoy hanging with friends and family, days out, museums, WWE (pro wrestling), and having
my relaxing days in.
My Perfect guy would be easy to get on with. Someone who could suprise me, have fun with, be able to relate to, and make me want to be with them. I do prefer a non-smoker. I admire a man that has the attitude, that he can do anything he sits his mind to. I would enjoy finding someone I can enjoy walking with.
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Posted: 6/21/2008 5:15:34 PM | Hastur,
Your profile is fine. You could use some better pics. I don't like to see a B/W pic as a main pic. Not a good idea. You need a nice, close up, clear, color, smiley pic for your main pic. Maybe a few better pics showing off your personality. Also definately a full body pic. Other than that you are doing fine. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 6/21/2008 5:21:58 PM | ColoradoMtnBy73,
I really love your pics, they are nice. Your profile is nice also, but you have left out a very important part. You should condence what you have written about yourself into 2 nice paragraphs. Then you need to write a nice paragraph about the lady you are searching for. Let the ladies know just what kind of lady you are attracted to, or are searching for. Give them an idea what you want from a lady and a relationship. Let them figure out from your words if they may be the right one for you. Once you have do that you will have a complete and very nice profile. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 6/21/2008 6:04:56 PM | Your awesome!!  | |
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Posted: 6/21/2008 6:20:49 PM | sure take a look at mine.. Tell me what you think.. I dont get it.. I get response in person.. but online not many seem interested. I am a very chatty person... Love to socialize
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Posted: 6/22/2008 12:42:16 AM | | thanks sweets! i will try to get a better pic and have made some of the changes you have recommended. i appreciate your time and your hard work :) | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 2:33:11 AM | | could you please reveiw my profile thank you charles | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 3:50:32 AM | ColoradoMtnBy73,
You are welcome and thanks for the compliment. Good luck to you, you are a great catch.
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Posted: 6/22/2008 3:54:24 AM | iluvwindydays,
You are very welcome, and good luck with the profile and your search. The ladies in stuart don't know what they are missing, they need to wake up and pay attention !!
Sweet :) | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 9:56:32 AM | Hi Sweet,
Just wanted to compliment you on helping others with their profile. That is very kind and generous of you.
Keep up the great work,
Warm regards. | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 1:56:15 PM | | Thankyou, that really helped me, need to get them pics done will do them voer the week have fun with them, and show who i really i am, them others were tacky, thankyou for your help x | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 2:01:48 PM | Hey Sweet (and anyone else),
You seem pretty good at offering advice, so I thought I would ask for some feedback on mine. I posted in the general part of profile reviews, and got a few helpful suggestions. Just seeing if there is anything else that could be improved upon. I know one thing I need is more pictures, but unfortunately all the ones I have are older and from when I had longer hair. I need to hit up my family and friends for some pics.
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Posted: 6/22/2008 3:49:19 PM | hockeyfan54321,
Ok I really don't like your pics. The only one I would keep on here is pic #6. A few of your pics show up sideways, so that definaltey makes it hard to see them. Some are to far away, and others are just not very flattering of you. You appear to be a nice looking guy, but these pics do not show that off for you. You need a nice, close up, clear smiley pic , without a dog, for your main pic. Then a few more pics showing off your persaonality. Then at least 1 full body shot taken closer up.
Your about me section is pretty good. There is some stuff that I would not leave in there. Also it should not be double spaced. It should be a nice paragraph. Also there are a lot of spelling errors. Also you have not written anything about the lady you are searching for. I have copied and pasted your profile and made some changes. Corrected the spelling errors. Now you would need to write a nice little paragraph about the lady you are searching for. Let the ladies know just what kind of lady you are attracted to. Don't make them guess. Let them read and see if they may be the lady for you. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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I'm very easy going, down to earth, love to laugh, and always joking around. I can guarantee to make you smile, even on your worst day. I'm shy at first, but once I get to know you, i'm very sociable :). I'm Living a very stress free life, and loving it. I'm pretty stable in life, I own my house, vehicle, and have a hot tub. I live a pretty simple life, basically work , eat , sleep, play hockey, hang out with friends, Play Poker, and try to spend as much time outside as possible. My parents live out of town, so I visit every other sunday. I'm am a real cuddlly, and effectionate person. I love laying down watching movies, having dinners, and walks down beach ( as long as its not hockey night lol) . | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 4:03:58 PM | djizzo,
Ok your main pic is to old, it is over a year old. You need a more recent pic. For your main pic, it should be a nice, clear, close up, smiley pic. Then you need a few more having fun and showing off your personality. Then at least 1 full body pic. Our pics on here are so important because it is mostly what we have to sell ourselves, so they must be the best they can be.
Your about me section was not good. Parts were demanding, parts were negative, and you just didn't tell the ladies about yourself. You need to delete all and start over. Don't tell the ladies what you DONT want , but rather what you DO want. Write a nice little paragraph about you. Start out with telling them about what you do for fun, your hobbies, interests, goals and what you can offer a relationship. Dont tell them you only want to be friends. You have selected "long term", so talk about that !! Let the ladies know just what makes you tick in that paragraph.
Then write a nice little paragraph about the lady you are searching for. ALL POSITIVE.. Dont tell them all the things you dont want them to be, but what you hope they are. What they do for fun, interests, goals and so forth. Put a little work into it and give it a shot. Once you have made some changes, come back on here and let me take a look, and I can tweak it up for you !! I hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
Also you may want to change what you have in your first date section. Most ladies may not want to agree to a big dinner and all on your first meeting. You may want to put something a little less serious for the first meeting. | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 4:11:11 PM | | I am new here and would be most greatfull for a review. not sure i could handle the credics so if you could be so kind as to take the time to read mine. Thanks in advance. | |
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