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Posted: 6/22/2008 4:20:19 PM | bayleaf101,
Ok lets start with your interests. You need to select more of them. You only have a few, and need at least 10 of them. Think about the ladies when you select more of them. Pick some that you think the ladies may enjoy with you. When you type in the interests, place a comma after them, and they will turn blue as they should show up on your profile. Just looks better.
You need to answer the question "do you want children". Dont leave "prefer not to say ", very bad idea.
You definately need some pics. You need a recent, close up, clear, smiley pic for your main pic. Then a few more having fun and showing off your personality. Also a close up, clear full body pic. ALL these pics need to be very recent.
Some of what you have in your about me section is ok, but some of it is not good at all. I have copied and pasted your profile and made some changes. Take a look and see what you think below. PLEASE never write what you have written as you final statement. I feel your pain and most of us do, just don't write it on your profile. It comes off really nasty, and will turn a lot of ladies right off. There are a ton of really rude people on here, so welcome to online dating, just try and cope with it. What is left below is all I think is good from what you presently have written. You need to add to it, and then write a nice prargraph all about the lady you are searching for. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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I am calm ,but have my moments. I am also kind ,affectionate and tactile. I enjoy Golf, Rugby watching ,and participation indoors only. I enjoy watching Football. As they say, you only live once, and as I’ve started the second half of my century . I enjoy dancing, and meals out. I have been told I can dance quite well, that’s a sight to see :). | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 4:35:24 PM | SmoothBreezin47,
Thank you so much for the compliments. I appreciate it. This has become much more than I ever expected it to be, but I am still having fun with it. I enjoyed your profile, you sound like a wonderful man. Wish I could find someone like you !!! God bless and I hope he blesses you real soon with that special lady he made just for you !!!
Have a lovely evening ,
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Posted: 6/22/2008 4:46:11 PM | UniqueLisa,
You are very welcome, and I am glad I could help you out. Nice sweet pics are always the best to have. Trying to be to sexy, or someone you are not, is never a good idea. Nice pics will get you a nice guy !!! I wish you all the luck in the world, I hope you find your prince. Come back on here with your new pics, I would love to see them !!
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Posted: 6/22/2008 5:11:49 PM | holigolightly,
I like your profile. I also like your pics. But if they do not reflect what you presently look like, then I would change them. I would try soon to get some recent pics of you. I would use either your 2nd or 3rd pic as your main pic for now though. They are nice close up smiley pic, and would be best for a main pic. Other than that you have a nice profile. Good luck in your search !!
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Posted: 6/22/2008 5:30:06 PM | echo117,
Ok, you need a bit of work here. The pics are terrible. They all need to go. 2 of them are very dark and hard to see, then in 1, you are half dressed, and taking the pic yourself, bad idea on both things, and the last one has no head to the body. lol... You need to get someone to take some nice pics of you. First off you need a nice, close up, clear, smiley pic, "without a hat on", for your main pic. Then a few more pics taken outside maybe, having fun and showing off your personality. Then a nice, DRESSED, closer up full body pic. It is really tacky to have these half dressed pics some guys put on here. Most ladies dont find them very appealing. Have to leave something to the imagination !! LOL
Your about me section has some real good stuff in it, and also some real bad stuff in it. You NEVER want to tell the ladies what you DON'T want, but what you DO want. It just comes off a little nasty and negative, and most ladies will click right off your profile when they see it .
I have copied and pasted your profile and made the changes I think it needs to be a more desireable profile. Take a look at it below. If you like it then use it. It should be written in a paragraph form as I have done with it. It just makes it easier to read and more professional. Now all you would need to do is add a little more to the ladies part. Make sure it is all positive, nothing negative. Only write all the things you DO look for in a lady and a relationship., Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
Sweet :)
I am a spur of the moment guy, that loves to have fun. I know who I am and where I'm going. I love to read, go to the movies, horseback ride, and love to ride motorcycles. I like to swim, jet ski, and go boating. I Love to travel, and the 3 best places I've wanted to see is, London England, Bear Lake UT, and Idaho. I also love to go to theme parks, Disney and Universal. Ok, I still have a childish side to me LOL. I even like video games. I try to workout 2 days a week and it's not that much fun. Like the old saying goes, "Misery Loves Company." I do have, and like my quiet times. I'm a die hard romantic. I Love to cuddle, hold hands, walk on the beach or just have a beer, watching the sunset with someone special.
I am searching for the woman I want to spend the rest of my life with! To fall in love for the first time. To know what it's like to love, and be loved completely. | |
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Posted: 6/23/2008 7:13:18 AM | longlostlove,
Ok you definately need some pics. For your main pic, you need a nice, clear, close up smiley pic. Then a few more pics having fun and showing off your persoanlity. Then at least a full body pic taken closer up not far away. The pic you are presently using is not a good pic for here. Good pics are a must have on here. You need to get those new pics ASAP, don't explain on here about them, just load them !!!
You need to add more interests to your "interests" section. You should have at least 10 or 15. When you add some, think of the ladies and what they might be interested in.
Your about me section is not good. It is not written very well and seems to be almost 1 long sentence. What you should have in at least 2 nice paragraphs. One about you and 1 about the lady you are searching for. I have copied and pasted your profile and split up what you have written so far about each. I wrote it into sentences. Now you need to add more to each section. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
sweet :)
I am a snuggler, spoiler and lover. I am tender and gentle. I'm pretty laid back, easy going, understanding, and a compassionate man. I love to give back rubs after the day is over, or for just no reason at all. I am very romantic. The woman in my life always comes first. I am completely honest, faithful and caring.
I am l ooking for a real woman. I know your out there somewhere. Someone I can trust, spoil, andcount on. All those things that real love is all about. | |
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Posted: 6/23/2008 1:42:50 PM | thank you sweet will act on it and ask your advice again once again thanks
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Posted: 6/23/2008 2:53:40 PM | bayleaf101,
you are welcome, sounds like a plan to me.
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Posted: 6/23/2008 3:39:05 PM | Rickie1wolf,
Ok lets start with your pics. They are terrible. You never want to have a pic of you eating for your main pic. What are you thinking !!LOL.. The other pics are just not goo, bad light, sideways pic, and to fuzzy. You nned to get soemone to take some nice pics of you in a nice naturel light, preferably outside. You need a nice close up, clear, smiley pic, for your main pic. then a couple mor4e pics showing off your personality and having fun. Then at least 1 full body pic. These pics need to be recent, like today, not 1 year old, to old for here. The ladies want to know what you look like today, especially with that 35 pound loss.
You also definately need to change you age requirements. Now come on ,18 and older ??/ ""18"" ?? , please, now you sound like a dirty old man that is a petifile !!! Lets make the age a wee bit older, as to not make the nice ladies think bad thoughts !! LOL..
I do not like the way you have written your profile, it is very unprofessional. There is a lot of repeated stuff in it, like you age and hair and all the personal stuff you answered in the profile above. You should never use caps, that is yelling in the cyber world. Your profile has some good stuff in it and also some bad stuff, that comes off negative. Your profile should be done in nice paragraphs. This just makes it easier to read and looks more desireable and professional. At least 1 or 2 for you, and 1 for her. Also your profile lookes more like an application, with the lists of things.. A lot of your profile sounds as if you would love yourself much more than you could ever love a lady. Just the way it is written, it makes you sound very full of yourself, and basically makes you sound like your stuff does not stink. I have copied and pasted your profile and made a lot of changes. Take a look at it below and see what you think. If you like it then use it. I think it would make you a much nicer profile and more pleasing to the ladies. Right now yours is just a jumbled mess. lol
Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search !
Sweet :)
If feeling close to your man is what you want, then you might want to find out about me. I am strong, and will always be there for you. If you desire deep intimacy, passion, and satisfaction, then meet me. I am a warm and sensual man, and have been told I am a good kisser. I am witty, and can be “sharp witted” but mostly (and usually…lol) a gentleman. I still do though, have alittle bad boy left in me. I am fun to be with and funny. I am loyal and a good listener. In enjoy writing. Also a nice walk with good conversation. I enjoy a good wine and good food. Although, a nice BBQ is good to.
"We choose our joys and sorrows long before we experience them." Kahlil Gibran
I am seeking someone who is somewhat in shape physically, and emotionally.
A lady that is sensual, and has a sense of humor. A lady that is definately fun to be with. A lady who is energetic, but yet can be laid back. A lady that enjoys being close to her man, and is very intimate. | |
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Posted: 6/23/2008 4:50:58 PM | redneckwrench,
wow you are hot !!!!! Ok I like your pics, but I would get rid of #4 and #5. Neither of them are very flattering of you. #4 is not a good look on your face, and #5 is taken in a bad light and taken from a bad angle. You do though need at least 1 full body shot.
You also need to add more interests in your "interests" section. You should have 10 or 15 of them. When you enter them in, if you put a comma after each one they will show up blue in your profile, the way they should be. Keep the ladies in mind when you make your selections. Pick a few the ladies may be interested in.
Your about me section should be a nice paragraph all about you and a paragraph all about the lady you are searching for. That way it looks nice, and reads better, then you are not jumping back and forth from about you to about her. That gets a little confusing. I would delete your last paragraph about honesty. I feel your pain and so do a ton of us on here. I have had some very bad and disapointing dates due to that dishonesty. but welcome to online dating, where honesty has been flushed down the toilet. Good luck. But what you have written will only work against you, and come off to some ladies as being a little short tempered and nasty. We don't want that now do we ?? LOL.
You need to split up your part and her part and make them 2 paragraphs. Then be creative and add a little more to each section. Add a little of your personlaity and some humor. The ladies love that !! Let the ladies know just who you are and what makes you tick. Also let them know the kind of lady you are attracted to. Don't make them guess. All we have on here are our pics and our words, so they both need to be our best !!. I hope this helps you out and good luck in your search !!
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Posted: 6/23/2008 5:10:54 PM | Hi Sassy-
Please foregive me, I borrowed a couple of lines from your profile.
I tweaked my profile a couple of weeks ago and started getting a little better response.
After reading some of these forums I decided to do a total overhaul.
I'd love to get your opinion.
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Posted: 6/25/2008 3:30:50 PM | 12356fem,
I generally like your profile. You need to bring it all together into 2 nice paragraphs. The paragraphs just look more professional, and actually make it easier to read. Do a nice paragraphs with all your info and then one for them man you are searching for. Maybe add just a little more to the mans part, (but no more borrowing from me )!!! Just kidding. No actually I take that as a compliment that someone uses my stuff !!!
I like your pics but would maybe add a couple more having fun and showing off your personality. Maybe make them a little closer up than your others. You are a ver nice looking lady and need to show that off more in some nice, clear pic. !!
Other than that, I like your profile. I hope this helps you out and good luck in your search !!
God Bless
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Posted: 6/25/2008 3:45:50 PM | super-mike
Ok I like your pics, but you need a better one for your main pic. Have someone take a nice clear, close up, smiley pic for your main pic. Make sure it is nice and clear to see. Then one you are using is not very clear to see.
You need to add a few more interests to your "interests" section. Think about the ladies when you are add some new ones. Maybe a few "girley" things would be good, something the ladies might enjoy.
Your about me section is ok, but it could be better. Make it a little more interesting about yourself, and your personality and interests, Also add a little more to the ladies part. Don't sound so not interested, like you will take anybody, don't matter, whatever !!! Make the ladies think, wow I want to be with this guy and I am the perfect one for him !!! You have to see yourself on here, and all we have are our pics and words, so they need to be your best. Humor is always good.
Also maybe re-do your first date section. it is a little off, with the killer sentence. Ladies feel a little more comfortable with a non commital , less formal meeting for the first meeting. Maybe change what you have.
I hope this helps you out and good luck in your search !!
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Posted: 6/25/2008 4:05:50 PM | disco b,
Ok I did take a peek at your posts from your own profile review that you presently have. I must say that I agree with all of your responders. Your profile just needs a little pick me up. It is just kind of boring. You need to tell us more about yourself, you really haven't told us much. Make it kind of funny and let your personality that you say you have, shine thru.
Also tell the guys a little more about what you are searching for in a man, what you admire, what turns you on and so forth. Juice it up a little. All we have on here is our pics and words, so they both have to be our best.
Also on your pics, you definaltey need other ones. You stated on your thread that they are very old ! BAD idea on here. That will not be good for you. they must me recent,like in the past 6 months or less.
You need to take the time and get someone to take some nice clear pics of you. Make the playing feild fair for the guys. You need a nice, clear, color, close up smiley pic for your main pic. Then a few more showing off your personality. Then at least 1 closer up full body pic.
Once you have tweaked your profile a bit and made it more interesting and get some new pics, you will have a much more desireable profile. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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