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Posted: 6/25/2008 4:23:28 PM | Tibs 36,
Ok lets start with your pics. They are fine but you are missing the most important pic of all. You need a nice closer up full body pic. That is a must on here.
Your about me section is a little negative and angry sounding. I actually felt like I was being scolded when I was reading it. Your profile should be POSITIVE only. Nothing negative. Don't tell the guys what you dont want but what you Do want. Don't tell us what you don't like to do, but what you do like to do for fun. And your final statement at the bottom, is very bad, and all in caps, so you are yelling at the guys now !!!
You need to read through your profile and delete anything that is negative. Anything that says what you don't want of what you don't like to do. Erase all the name calling, and definately delete your final statement at the bottom. We all feel your pain, and agree with you, but yelling it, or even writing it in your profile, will only work against you. The men will see this as a very angry thing and will click right by you.
Your profile should be written in at least 2 paragraphs. One for you and one for them man you are searching for. So once you have deleted all the undesireable things, then you need to make it into the 2 paragraphs, and add a little more, positive things to both of them.
You really should change your selection for "friends", to at least "dating". Most men will not even allow you to email them if you have selected "friends" as your choice. Most men on here are looking for more than that. You will get better responces if you have at least dating.
Welcome to online dating, where all manners are checked at the door !!!! and left right there. We all go thru the same thing. !! It happens to all of us, all the nasty rude stuff is common on here. Just ignore it and move forward, and be thankful that they didnt like you !!! who would want them !!!
Well I hope this helps you out and good luck in your search and on your profile.
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Posted: 6/25/2008 4:34:05 PM | pickme76,
Ok lets start with your pic. It is not a good pic. It is not very clear, and taken at a lower level, and it actually looks like you are angry in it. You need someone to take some nice pics of you. Your main pic should be a nice, clear, close up "smiley" pic. Then maybe a few having fun and showing off your personality. Go outside and have some fun with the pics. Also you definately need at least 1 full body pic, taken closer up. Pics are very important on here, so they must be your best.
You need to add a few more interests to your "interests" section. Think about the ladies when adding them. Pick some that maybe the ladies might find fun and enjoyable.
Come on now, you can do better than you have done on that "about me " section. I have faith in you. You need 1 nice paragraph all about you and 1 nice paragraph all about the lady you are searching for. Tell the ladies all about you. Your likes, what you do for fun, your goals, and just what makes you tick. What you can offer her in a relationship. Adding a little humor is always good. Then do the same in the ladies section. Tell the ladies what you look for in a partner. Her interests, goals, what she should be able to offer you in a relationship, and so forth.
Once you get some nice pics, and add a little more interests, and more in your about me section, then you will have a more desireable profile. I hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 6/26/2008 2:04:47 PM | rahootoronto,
I like your pics except, I would delete your last pic. The one with someones face scratched out. Not a good pic for here.
Your about me section is ok, but you need not say how old you are or how tall you are because that is already stated in your personal information at the top of your profile. I would tweak the info you have so far, and condence it into a nice paragraph. Then you need to write a nice paragraph about the lady you are searching for. So far you have not said much of anything about the lady. Let the ladies know what you look for in a partner, If you don't tell them, they are not mind readers. Your about me section needs to be your best, because it is all we have on here except for our pics.
Other than that you are doing fine on your profile. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 6/26/2008 2:10:10 PM | BHCubed,
Your pics are ok, except you need a better pic for your main pic. You need a nice, close up, clear, smiley pic for your main pic. I would keep the pics you have but you need a new pic for the main one.
You need to spend a little time and make your "about me" section a little more interesting and informative. You should have a nice paragraph all about you, and then a nice paragraph about the lady you are searching for. You have a good start on your section, but it all needs some work.
Also you need to add a few more interests to your "interests" section. When you add some more, think about the ladies, and what they may be interested in. Maybe a few girley things !!
Other than that you are doing ok. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 6/26/2008 2:17:14 PM | mikeashtab,
Your pics are ok, but you do need a better main pic. A nice, more clear, smiley close up would be best. Maybe a few more pics that are closer up and showing off your personality. Also at least 1 full body shot that is take closer up, and not bogged down with a snow suit !!
Your about me section is ok, but you need to condence it into 1 or 2 paragraphs. You need not say how old you are, because it is in your personal information at the top of your profile. Then you need to add more to the ladies section. Give them a little more information about the lady you are searching for. Put a little of your personality in there and tell them what you admire in a partner, and so forth.
You need to add a few more interests to your "interests " section. When you add them think about the ladies, and add some that the ladies might be interested in. Other than that you are doing fine. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 6/26/2008 2:33:25 PM | lance58,
Ok don't give up just yet. Just a little tweaking and you will have a much nicer profile. First off get rid of your 1st pic and your last pic. Neither of them are very flattering of you, and the first one is taken in a bad light and hard to see. Most ladies truly do not like to see men half dressed in their pics on here. You need a nice close up, clear, "smiley", pic with clothes on !! LOL for your main pic. Maybe add a couple more showing off your personality and having fun with a big smile on your face. Ladies love a smile, hate frowns.
You need to add a few more interests to your "interests" section. Maybe add a few girley things the ladies may be interested in, so far you mostly have guy things in there.
You need to write something in your "first date" section, even if it is just something short and sweet, like meet for a drink and conversation.
Your "about me" section is ok, but a little spread out. You also dont have anything about the lady you are searching for. Also it is a very bad idea to write what you have written telling them to ask you questions, kind of sounds demanding. YOU need to put enough info in your profile to spark an interest from them. Once they contact you, then the questions start, but don't make them do all the work, they will just pass you by instead. I have copied and pasted your profile and made some changes and did a little tweaking. Now you just need to add some more info on the lady you are searching for. What kind of lady are you attracted to, her goals, interests, what she does for fun, her personality, what she can offer a relationship. Stuff like that. Put your persoanlity in it, and make it fun and interesting. This should be done in a nice paragraph. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
Sweet :)
I go to school fulltime, and part time personal trainer. I am going to school to work as a fulltime trainer. I like to do everything from taking long walks and holding hands, to going to the bars and dancing. I treat women with respect and am worth looking into.
I love to laugh, and I have a great sense of humor. I know how to treat a woman right, I like to make them feel like a queen. I have a sensitive side, and am not afraid to be romantic.
Im looking for a woman who is straight forward and loves to live life to the fullest. I am ready to show a woman a great date and make her laugh and enjoy herself and take it from there. If this sounds good message me.
I am ready to show a woman a great date and make her laugh and enjoy herself and take it from there. If this sounds good message me. | |
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Posted: 6/27/2008 7:02:23 PM | vindicare22,
Ok I like your pics, but I would add a few more pics in "Normal" clothing, not costumes. Maybe also at least 1 full body pic, in normal clothes.
I like what you have written in your "about me" section. You just need to condence it into a nice paragraph. The you need to write a nice little paragraph about the lady you are searching for. Give the ladies a little info on what kind of lady you are attracted to, and what you want from her in a relationship, and so forth.
You also need to add a few more interests to your "interests" section. Think about the ladies when you add them. Make them things the ladies may be interested in.
Other than that you are doing fine. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 6/29/2008 4:28:49 PM | firemachine69,
Well all I can say is you are just looking for friends, and most ladies on here are NOT. !! They are looking for at least dating and long term. Most ladies will not even email you if you are just looking for friends. Some of them you can't even email them if you have selected "friends".
If you decide that you may be looking for more than friends, then you will need some work on your profile. So think about it and then let me know if that is the case. But with just looking for friends, you will probably not got any or many replys. Sorry but this is a "DATING" site, not a friend pick up place !! LOL
Good luck
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Posted: 6/30/2008 10:45:40 PM | I sincerely appreciate that. That intertwines I guess with my casual dating thread, and you pointing out 'friends' being able to be de-selected by girls in their searches... Lightbulb goes off in head!
I will change that, please, some more selective advice for the profile as well would be greatly appreciated! | |
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Posted: 6/30/2008 10:56:42 PM | Sweet and Sassy would you mind reviewing mine? I sure do like your style!
I wonder if there's something in my profile that may be turning the guys away?
Thanks so much! I really appreciate what you do here!!! | |
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