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Posted: 4/1/2008 6:50:59 PM | Hey Sweet,
Do you know how long it took Michaelangelo to paint the Sestine Chapel? I haven't gotten anywhere near that much time invested.  So, no stress yet.
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Posted: 4/1/2008 7:06:50 PM | TheMark85,
I think you actually have a good profile. You just need to make a couple changes. I can see exactly just why you have not been getting a lot of responces and we can fix that right now !!!!!
I really like your pic, but you need a few more of them. Take some pics that show off your terrific personality, and make 1 of them a full body shot !!! You are a cutie and you need to show the girls some more pics..!!
You definately need to put something in your :"do you smoke " section. You have "prefer not to say", and that is not good to ever put that anywhere. Answer the question if you smoke or not. Most ladies will click right past a profile that answers "perfer not to say " on anything !!!!
There are a few words in your description of you, that you should really remove, they just have a very negative feel to them. They are "kinda dorky" and "kinda evil " . These kind of statements are just to negative and most ladies will click by you when they read them. Always only make positive comments about yourself !!!!!
Also in your last sentence you wrote something like "If something happens its cool, but you are not expecting anything to happen anyway" PLEASE delete that sentence. that is EXACTLY why nothing is happening with you !!!! you have predicted your destiny !!!! that is a very very negative statement. You should write something very positive to end your profile !!!!
I think if you make these few easy changes your luck will change !!!! You seem like a really nice guy and has a lot to offer a special lady. Make your changes and reap the rewards !!!! I hope this helps you out and good luck !!!!
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Posted: 4/1/2008 7:33:19 PM | Icysparks,
Well Girl you have your work cut out for you here !!! lol..
I would change your main pic to your 4th pic which is the 2nd one from the right !! It is better for your main pic. You might want to work on getting some better pics. Maybe dress us a little and show some more of your personality in them. !!
You need to write what your profession is in that category, not what you have writte in "Got 1". Not good, don't make the guys guess. !!
I read all thru your profile and in just about every other sentence you have made a very neagtive statement about yourself. In between all those statements you have some really good things to say positive about yourself. You need to either delete it all and start over with nothing but POSITIVE things to say about yourself, or just read thru and delete anyting that sounds negative.
Below is your profile that I have copied and pasted and made changes, so read over it and see what you think !!! I think if you post what I have corrected below then you will see a big change in your responces. Do you see how different it reads from how you wrote it ??? positive huh ??? lol... hopefully this will help you out !!! Good luck and make some positive changes like I show below !!
Sweet
I'm a hopeless romantic. Guys tell me I am different than most women(in a good way of course). I have a passion for reading and music. Love the outdoors, swimming camping, fishing. Love to play pool . Curling up with a good movie, grilling out, a night out on the town. Dancing in the rain. I love thunderstorms .
I'm looking for friends to hang out with or more if it happens along the way. Looking for a guy who can carry on a conversation, and keep my mind stimulated. Laugh, joke and play around. Honesty is a big for me. Must have no drama and very few issues. Also must be willing to make time getting to know each other, even if it is just friends.
If I have peaked your curiousity then I would love to hear from you. There is so much more to me than just these few words. Hope to hear from you soon. | |
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Posted: 4/1/2008 7:48:11 PM | Ok Vic,
This is my version of your profile. I copied and pasted your entire profile and made the changes I think needed to be made. Below is the finished product. !!! I think this would be a great profile for you to post. It is direct and to the point but not boring or annoying. It is sweet and simple. I think it would work great for you !!! Let me know what you think !!!!!
Sweet
Ok, let’s get the not so fun stuff out of the way. Yes, I am seperated. I am just waiting on the divorce to be final. I have no control over that, but hopefully it won't be long !!
I’m at a good place in my life right now. I know who I am. I know what I like and don’t like. Also, I have a very good idea what I want. I want to learn to dance —will you teach me? I want to explore this great land. You too? Great!! Let’s hop in the ol’ 65 Mustang and GO!!!! Don’t worry I’m pretty good mechanic. I am lovable. I am an honest person. I live my life with integrity. I don’t lie, even if it hurts. I’d rather have the truth be known, then try to cover my tracks. I believe that chivalry is not dead. I treat others with the respect they deserve, and be forgiving when I don’t always receive it in return. I have a sense of humor. I can laugh at anything. I also see beauty in everything. I am an eternal optimist. The glass is half full and I know where the water fountain is! My faith is an integral part of who I am.
Well, of course, you’re beautiful. But your physical beauty is just reflection of your inner beauty. I want a woman who is beautiful all the way to the bone. You’re vivacious, and love living life. You’re confident, and not afraid to “stand up” to me. You’re not afraid to tell me when I’m wrong, or pick me up and dust me off when I fall down. You’re my partner, my best friend, my soul mate. You’re the one I long to come home to, the one I live and strive for. You’re my best and happiest thought. | |
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Posted: 4/1/2008 7:53:30 PM | Hi Debi,
Still not one response since I changed it. 
I appreciate your kind comments.
I told you these NY women are tough!
They just LOVE the LOSERS!
Take care and thanks again!
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Posted: 4/1/2008 7:53:56 PM | The mark,
YEAHHHHHH great changes. Good Job !!!! I love the new pics. But I would go back to the main pic you had before. The red and black outfit. That is really a GREAT pic of you !!!!! It is close up and clear and really cute !!!!! Just my opinion, but I thinnk it is a great pic of you !!!
I hope the changes will work good for you. Your profile seems like a totally new profile with just those couple changes. Good Luck and I can feel your lady is just around the corner !!!!!
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Posted: 4/1/2008 7:59:12 PM | Greg,
You hang in there. Love pops around when you least expect it and are not looking for it !!!!! I will pray for you that God will send you a very special lady. !!! There is a winner for you right around the corner I can tell.
Ya know, you should put a different main pic up. When you put a new pic up then it looks like you are a new user and they all start looking at your profile all over again. maybe someone that looked at it before will now look at it in a whole new light. If you have a nice clear recent good pic of you, put it up !!!! It works for me !!! lol... chat wiht you later. Im gonna get some zzzzz'sss.
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Posted: 4/2/2008 4:24:13 AM | Vic,
You are to funny. Yes me love you may use what I ahve written, that is what I hoped you would do. lol...I am very happy to help you out. I hope it works out for you and you fnd that special lady for you. !! Good luck and let me know how it works !!!
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Posted: 4/2/2008 4:26:36 AM | Greg,
Make sure when you put the new main pic on it has a nice big beautiful smile !!! Ladies love a great smile. I have to say that one of the great people on thread reminded me to tell you this, (thanks norm)... ((((((SMILE))))))
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Posted: 4/2/2008 4:28:52 AM | Nikki,
You are so very welcome, I am so glad to help you out. You seem like such a really sweet girl and I hope you find a wonderful guy for your own !!!! Good luck and let me know how it all works out !!!!
Sweet | |
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Posted: 4/2/2008 6:45:00 AM | Ouch, didnt know it was that bad....lol
Until you read it and made the comments you did. I went back over it and you were right. Sometimes it takes different eyes and thoughts to see. I appreciate your help. I will get to getting some more pics put up real soon.
Thank you soooo much and Ill let you know how it goes. | |
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Posted: 4/2/2008 7:01:24 AM | Good Morning Debi,
Hope you got a good night's sleep! Not that you need any "beauty" rest!
I updated the main pic as you suggested as well as made a few other "tweaks".
Let me know what you think.
Thank you so much for you kindness and encouragement! 
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Posted: 4/2/2008 7:30:47 AM | Hi there
I've been here for about two months now, and I've changed my profile a few times in an effort to be more appealing, but still I'm lucky if the messages I send out get responses. Thank you for your time.
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Posted: 4/2/2008 2:41:16 PM | Icysparks,
sweetie you are so welcome. That is what this thread is all about, having another set of eyes see what you don't. I am very glad to help you and I will be looking forward to seeing the new pics and profile !! have a great evening.
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Posted: 4/2/2008 2:45:46 PM | greg,
I love the new pic, it is much happier looking. I also like the other changes you made. The all look like winners !! Hope they bring you lots of new luck. You are so very welcome and thank you for also being so kind. I appreciate kind people. Email me anytime. Keep me up with how you are doing also !!!
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Posted: 4/2/2008 3:14:18 PM | spaceace,
I think you have written some good stuff about yourself and what you are looking for. Now I would take your last sentence about the lady you are searching for and break it off from that paragraph. Then continue to write a little more about what kind of lady you are searching for and what should she be able to offer a relationship with you. Then you would have 2 nice paragraphs.
I would also remove all of your pics but the one titled "Formal times". For now I would use that as your main pic. You have a terrific smile in that pic. I don't like to see pics that have people's faces blacked out !!! just doesn't look right especially as your main pic. The halloween pic is just not the right pic for your profile especially if you are one of the people in it, which I think you are !! lol.. I would get you some more pics showing off your personality. One of them should be a full body pic. Go outside and have some fun and take some fun pics.
I think if you make these changes, especially the pics, your luck will change !!! You have a great start to a great profile. You are a cute guy so you need to get some good pics to show that off !!!! Good luck and I hope this helps you out !!
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Posted: 4/2/2008 3:36:06 PM | Hash55
First off I see there is a lot of words not spelled correctly. In your headline "looking for a friend" you have friend misspelled. You need to correct that. Ladies seem to notice every word that is not spelled correctly.
Also you definately need to get you some pics. A profile that has no pics will be clicked by much more often then when it has a pic. So work on that as soon as possible. make sure one of your pics is a full body shot. Make your main pic a close up and with a big smile !!!
You need to write 1 nice paragraph all about you and what you enjoy and what you are looking for in a relationship. Now if you are only searching a "friend" then make that clear in your profile. If you are searching for more, than at least change your profile to say you are looking for "dating", or "long Term". I will give you a hint """most ladies on here are NOT looking for friends, they are looking for "long term" .
You also need to write a nice paragraph all about the type of lady you are searching for, if it is more than a friend. What kind of lady should she be, and what kind of things she should enjoy and so forth.
Below I copied and pasted what you wrote in your profile and I have made the proper spelling corrections. I also changed the way you wrote it a little. If you like it you may use it in your profile. You need to add a little more about yourself and about the lady you are searching for. Like what kind of sports you enjoy, and what kind of movies do you like. Make it more informative, and a little humor is also good. In the lady's section tell her just what you are looking for !!!
Let me know when you are done, if you makes any changes. I would love to see the finsihed product. Hope this helps you out and Good Luck !!!!
Sweet
I am A fun loving, easy going and charitable man. I have a wide ranging sense of humor . I like to travel. I enjoy music and play a variety of sports. I enjoy quiet nights in watching a good movie. I am A reasonable communicator.
I'm looking for a like minded lady, who is honest and kind. Someone that enjoys, if not the same things as i do, Than similar would be nice. | |
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