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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/6/2008 6:08:29 AM | Hi,
Sweet N Sassy...
This is my first week with online dating. If you have the time please review my profile. My profile has only been up 3 days but I've got several girls emailing me already.
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Posted: 7/6/2008 10:28:42 AM | I would change your name first before I would let you review me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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Posted: 7/6/2008 10:29:24 AM | | that being CRANKY | |
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| Take a stab at me?
Posted: 7/6/2008 11:07:20 AM | Hi Suzi,
What you are doing here is wonderful, and sometimes underappreciated. I'd love to know what you think of my profile.
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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/6/2008 10:08:47 PM | nadia08,
Well for someone who is only looking for "friends", your profile is ok. If you are looking for more than friends, then your profile would need a little work. Just a little word of advice, most guys on here are looking for more than friends, like at least dating or long term. A lot of men also have a block where you can't even email them of you are only looking for friends. I would suggest to at least change your choice to "dating", unless you really only want friends.
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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/6/2008 10:16:17 PM | me-needs-hug,
You really need to get rid of your main pic. Not a good pic for your profile. looks really weird. Also get rid of the tongue pic, not a flattering pic. Both of these pics will do more harm to your profile then good. You need a nice, close up, clear smiley pic for your main pic. All you other pics are ok for here.
What you have written in your "about me" section is fine. You just need to condence it into 2 nice paragraphs. Then you need to write a nice paragraph about the lady you are searching for. Let the ladies know what kind of lady you are attracted to and what you hope she can offer you in a relationship. Once you have made these suggested changes, you will have a more desireable profile. Good luck and I hope this helps you out.
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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/6/2008 10:17:39 PM | williamsdmi,
I am unable to open your profile to review it, you may have it blocked for some reason, sorry !! unblock and come back on here.
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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/6/2008 10:26:31 PM | LOL, I'm an idiot... I mean Sweet-N-Sassy, not Suzi. Anyway, I hope you'll still check out my profile and let me know what you think... 
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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/6/2008 10:30:49 PM | lillyrose08,
Your pics are not all, very good. Your main pic should go, that kind of pic is not good for here, it will not get you a nice guy, Also it is very fuzzy. All the fuzzy pics should be removed and replaced with nice clear pics. You need a nice , clear, close up, smiley pic, (non cleavage) pic for your main pic. Maybe add a couple pics showing off your persoanlity.
Your about me section needs a lot of work. Some of what you have written is fine. NEVER write what you DON'T want, but what you DO want !! No one cares what you don't want. You need to be as positive as possible. when guys click on a profile that is like yours with all the negative stuff and don't, they just click right off and look for a more positive profile. You also need to get rid of all the stuff in your first date section. Some of that stuff you can incorporate into a new about me section. You need 1 or 2 nice paragraphs all about you, all positive, your interests, hobbies, goals and so forth. then y0u should have a nice paragraph about the man you are looking for. Let the guys know who you are and what makes you tick, then let them know what kind of man you are searching for. Spend a little time and do some work on your profile. Then you will have a more desireable one !! Hope this helps and good luck.
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Posted: 7/6/2008 10:38:53 PM | namatsIII,
Ok you need other pics, the ones you have are not good because they are very fuzzy, and not clear to see. You need to have someone take some new pics of you. For your main pic, it should be a nice, clear, close up, smiley pic. Then a couple more having fun and showing off your personality. Then at least 1 full body pic.
What you have written in your about me section is ok, but it needs to be written in a nice paragraph. They way you have it written is not good, and makes it harder to read. It doesn't not look very professional. Write it into a nice paragraph. Then write a nice paragraph about the lady you are searching for. Let the ladies know what kind of lady you are attracted to. what traits do you look for and so forth.
Once you get some better pics and make some changes in your about me section, then you will have a more desireable profile. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/6/2008 10:40:42 PM | new an this site
hey any one can help me is has nothing to do with the subject
need help i chat with xome one on this site my computer went down last him now how can i chat with him went to his profile don't see anything where it says chat or somthing anyone can help help | |
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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/6/2008 10:46:01 PM | dillion stock123,
Ok I would change your main pic to your last pic. it is the only one with a smile and is the best pic you have on here. You also need a nice clear full body pic. I would also maybe add a couple more pics with smiles and having fun and showing off your personality. Pic #2 and #3 are very serious looking.
You have made a nice small start to your about me section, but you need to add alot more. Tell the ladies all about you, your personality, interests, what you do for fun, hobbies, and what you can offer a lady in a relationship. This shouls all be done in a nice paragraph or 2. Then you need to write anice paragraph about the lady you are looking for. Spend a little time and add some more info and you will get better results. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/6/2008 10:49:28 PM | OK folks,
thats it for tonight, its 2 am. I will be back on to complete the reviews tomorrow, and I will get all of them done. Sweet dreams !!
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| Would love to help you out with your profile
Posted: 7/7/2008 8:49:34 AM | Hi there sweet-n-sassy girl.
It seems like you are one very busy woman, and I do hope you are not to overwhelmed by all of us wanting your help. We are all trying to meet that special person ... and could use a lot more people like you {wanting to help us poor souls..lol}.
As I raise my arm, wave my hand and shout oooh oooh me next... I promise to wait ever so patiently for my turn for you to pick me apart..... Thank you so much. Kim
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| I get very close to setting up a meet and then poof!
Posted: 7/7/2008 10:51:24 AM | This has happened to me everytime. Usually I start by contacting someone who has viewed my profile. I look to see if the are pretty and have smarts. Then I send out an E Mail most do not respond back but some do. Then we begin a POF E Mail conversation series. This then leads to a swap of phone numbers or direct E Mails. Once I tell them my real name and they Google me and find out I have a huge web presence (in a good way) it all ends right there.
I am looking to attract a woman who has a great deal of smarts so we can engage in some deep conversations, a woman who is somewhat attractive and values good companioship above all else.
Please look at my profile and see if you can explain to me why I am only attracting air heads. Thankyou.  | |
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