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Posted: 7/7/2008 10:11:40 PM | msmiller8848,
Ok you need a little work here. First off you need some pics. The pic you are using shold not be used. It is to fuzzy and not clear to see. For your main pic, you need a nice, clear, close up smiley pic. Then a couple more having fun and showing off your persoanlity. The at least 1 full body pic, taken closer up not far away.
You also need to add some more interests to your "interests" section. You should have 10 to 15 of them listed. Think about the guys when add more of them, add some the guys may be interested in.
You need more info in your "about me " section. You need a nice paragraph about yourself. Your interests, what you do for fun, your hobbies, goals, and what you can offer a relationship. Then a nice paragraph about the man you are searching for. What type of man are you attracted to, his goals, interests, and what he can offer you in a relationship.
Once you have gotten some nice pics, and made the suggested changes, then you will have a more desireable profile. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/7/2008 10:16:59 PM | Leah 1986,
I think your profile is just fine. My only suggestion is that you definately need to add at least 1 full body pic, taken closer up, not far away. Other than that your profile is just fine. Good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/7/2008 10:27:41 PM | I would love to get in on this, I am having terrible luck finding someone. I get looks but no message. I would appreciate every ones point of view to help sweet and sassy out a little.
Thank you for your help.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:05:10 AM | thank you i will fix it and hope it works
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Posted: 7/8/2008 1:16:26 PM | | Okay, I can take it. Be brutal. No really, tell me anything that might be improved. Love all sorts of feedback. And I like the comments you made about others' profiles. | |
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Posted: 7/8/2008 4:08:37 PM | suzi360,
You need some more pics. For your main pic it should only be you in the pic. it should be a nice, clear, close up smiley pic. Then you need a couple more having fun and showing off your personality. then at least 1 full body pic, taken closer up not far away. There are instructions for the photos.
Your about me section is a little sparce. You need at least 1 nice paragraph all about you. Then a nice paragraph about the man you are seeking. Let the guys know just who you are and what makes you tick. Also do the same for the man you are looking for. Let the guys know what kind of man you are attracted to and what you look for in a partner.
Once you have added some more pics and added to your about me section, then you will have a more desireable profile. Good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 4:17:57 PM | Buzzly,
Ok I really did no6t enjoy your profile. It starts like you are reading a fairy tale, (bad idea), and then at the end of gets kind of negative and sarcastic. I would suggest to delete it all and start all over.
Humor is a great thing, but no fairy tales for the ladies. LOL..Write at least 2 nice paragraphs all about you. You personality, what you do for fun, your hobbies, and what you can offer a lady in a relationship. Then you will need a nice paragraph about the lady you are seeking. ALL POSITIVE stuff. We don't care to read all the bad stuff, and what you don't want. Or any bad past experiences, Just good positive stuff. Also none of what all of us ladies are sick of. Just what you hope to find in a partner.
Also all of your pics are just head shots, we need more of you in the pic. You definately need at least 1 full body pic, taken closer up, not far away.
Once you have shortened your profiel and took the fairy tale away, and made it more positive, then you will have a more desireable profile. We are grown ups now !!! LOL
Also the first date section is also way to long, shorten it to something simple and sweet !!
Good luck in your search and with your profile
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Posted: 7/8/2008 4:29:18 PM | j r p,
I think you have apretty good start to your profile. You could use a couple more pics. Maybe ones of you having fun and showing off your personality. Maybe 1 more full body pic.
Your about me section is pretty good. I would remove the sentence about you moving here "2" years ago for a job and are just now getting off your but and doing it !! Bad negative sentence. Ladies may see you as being a procrastinator or just plain lazy. Delete the sentence.
You should change your selection from friends" to at least "dating", you will get more responces by doing so. most ladies on here are looking for more than friends, and some of them even have a block to email them if you are only looking for friends.
I would also suggest to add a little more info about the lady you are seeking. Maybe take out the friend line, and add some more of her personality traits and stuff you look for in a lady.
other than that you have a nice profile. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 4:47:10 PM | Justme again,
Ok lets start with your pics. I truly do not like any of them. Most of them are not clear, and you actually look sad, depressed, or angry in all of them. You need to get a friend to take some nice pics of you. It will be worth it in the long run. Pics are very important on here, and they must be your best.
You need a nice clear, close up, SMILEY pic for your main pic. Then a few more pics having fun and showing off you smile and personality. Then a definate is at least 1 full body pic, taken closer up, not far away. New pics will help you out a lot I am sure.
Your about me section has some good stuff in it, but also some angry and negative stuff. We don't wnat anything like that in our profiles. They should all be very up beat and positive. I have copied and pasted your profile and made the changes I think it needs to make it a more desireable profile. Now you would just need to add more to the mans section. Make it positive and up beat. Let the guys know just what kind of man you are looking for, his goals, hobbies, and what he can offer you in a relationship. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search. I think this will make you a much better profile then the one you presently have.
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I love laughing and cuddling. I love animals, children and family. I also enjoy watching great movies. I love Reading a good book, Museums, art shows, and flea markets. I love broadway shows, off broadway shows and shopping. I enjoy browsing garage sales. I am a jeans and tee shirt kinda girl, but I sure do shine up nice. I love
stormy weather, snuggling with my hunny, watching an old old movie and napping in between, a perfect Sunday !!!!! I work hard, not afraid to get dirt under the nails. I love playing practical jokes, teasing the one I love, and showing them I care in any way I can.
I show affection in public, like hand holding, small butterfly kisses, a soft caress or touch, and a whisper in the ear. I have a very close family, my sisters, mom and my children are the most important part of my life. How I ended up with such a great clan is beyond me... lol. The year 2008 has been a strange and challanging year for me. I am keeping my fingers crossed that it will only get better. I am trying to get back into school for another change in my life. So I think starting fresh, new career, new place to lay my head down, new outlook, Is a good thing. I am kinda shy guys, so If you are intereted, please send me a note. I will answer you back. I just find it hard to make the first step. So please be kind, gentle and patient.
I am just looking for some one to take away my quiet nites, and long weekends. I am seeking a guy who will be open and honest. | |
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Posted: 7/8/2008 4:57:17 PM | mustang lenewf,
Ok you need some more pics. You need a better main pic. It should be a close up, front face, smiley pic. Then maybe a couple more pics showing off your persoanlity. Then at least 1 full body pic taken closer up, not far away.
Your about me section and your first date section are not very good. You have some negative stuff in there, and it makes you sound like a person who will want to fix everyone and change them. I would delete all you have written and start all over. You need at least 1 or 2 nice paragraph all about you. Your hobbies, what you do for fun, your personality, and what you can offer a relationship. All of this MUST be positive, nothing sarcastic or nagative.
Then you need a nice paragraph about the lady you are seeking. Her personality, goals, what she can offer you in a relationship, and so forth. Make sure this is all positive, I can't stress tha enough. No sacrasim at all !!
Also remove your interest "whatever", that is so, not good. Also "sleeping", makes you sound lazy. Add a few more interests that are fun. Think about the ladies when adding them. Make them some things that the ladies might be interested in also.
Once you have made the suggested changes, I think you will have a more desireable profile. Good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:07:17 PM | Raymond89,
Ok I think you have a pretty good profile, it just needs a few tweaks. You need a better main pic. You need a nice, close up, smiley pic for the mian pic. All you pics are fine, just none of them good enough for a main pic.
Your abut me section is fine. You have left out the most important part of it though. Now you need to write a nice paragraph about the lady you are seeking. Let the ladys know in that paragraph that you are seeking an intellegent lady with lots of smarts. Anything esle you look for in a lady should be in that paragraph.
Also add a few more interests. Add some that the ladies might be interested in or find fun !! Other than that you are doing fine. Some of your about me section tinges on being a little stuck on yourself. I am speaking of the section about your webpage. Nothing wrong with being confident, but this comes off a little bragging. Read through it and maybe make a few wording changes. Good luck in our search.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:14:04 PM | Christopher076,
Ok i pretty much like your profile, it just need a few tweaks.
Your about me section should be done in paragraphs. You need to condence your section into 2 nice paragraphs. It makes it easier to read and looks more professional. Then you would need a nice paragraph about the lady you are searching for. You have written a little of that, so you would need to place that as your last paragraph and add some more to it.
You need to add some more interests to your "interests" section. You should have 10 to 15 of them. Think about the ladies when adding them, add some that the ladies might be interested in doing.
Other than that, you have a pretty good profile. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:18:25 PM | *Mo*,
Your profile is fine for someone who is just looking for prople to hang out with. if you decide to change that to dating or long term, then your profile would need a little work.
I don't know how tall you are, but you have written that you are under 5 feet tall. If this is incorrect, then you should change that. Good luck.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:22:16 PM | wind in the trail,
Well you do not owe me anything, but I hope you find your special lady you are seeking.
I think your profile is fine, but I would suggest adding some more pics. Your main pic should be a nice, clear, close up, smiley pic. Maybe add a few more pics having fun and shoing off your smile and personality. Other than that you are doing fine. good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:25:04 PM | Adventure Tech,
Thanks for your review of Raymnonds profile. I would suggest if you would like to do profile reviews that you start your own thread as the rules state. This is my thread and I do the reviews on here. Have a lovely evening.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:30:24 PM | sco1015,
I would suggest that you do some more work on your about me section. You should have at least 1 nice paragraph all about you. Your interests, what you do for fun, your goals, and what you can offer a lady in a relationship. Then you need a nice paragarph about the lady you are seeking. Slide a little humor in there and make it all fun and interesting. Spend a little time and make it worth your while.
Other than that you are ok. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:37:54 PM | d17lisa,
You need some more pics here. You need a couple more having fun and showing off your personality. Then you definately need at least 1 full body pic, taken closer up, not far away. Pics are very important on here, and you have to have more pics for the guys to see. They also want to see all of you, not just your face. Men are visual creatures and will only repsond to most profiles with more pics.
Your about me section is done in all cpas.In the cyber workd that is yelling, so the caps need to go. Your about me section is way to short. You need at least 1 nice paragraph about yourself. Let the guys know enough about you to see if you have anything in common. Your interests, goals, what you do for fun, and what you can offer a relationship.
Then write a nice paragraph all about the man you are seeking. Same type of info as you. What kind of man are you attracted to, his hobbies, what he can offer you in a relationship, and so forth.
Once you have added some pics, and tweaked your about me section, then you will have a much nicer profile. Hope this helps you out and good luck in your search.
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:39:42 PM | ataroa,
You are welcome and good luck !!
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Posted: 7/8/2008 5:46:03 PM | taxibrad,
Ok you should use your 2nd pic for your main pic instead of the one you are using. Also maybe add a couple more pics of yourself. Maybe some clean shaven ??? If so then use one of them as your main pic. Ladies like a nice shaven face and a big smile !!
You need to delete your first sentence of your about me section. Not a good idea to admit that you are a cheater in your profile !!
You then need to combine the next 3 sentences about you into a nice paragraph. Then combine what you have written about the lady into a nice paragraph. The paragraphs just look better, and make it easier to read. Other than that you have a nice profile. Good job !!
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