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Posted: 6/14/2008 10:54:04 PM | | updates, i followed the rules lm101 gave me, so what do you guys think now? | |
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Posted: 6/15/2008 12:24:14 AM | I think that in the space of what... almost a month... that you have managed to change nine tenths of bugger all and still have just the one vaguely recognizeable photo. Youhave succeeded in changing almost nothing and ignoring virtually all advice given.
You are a woman and by the looks of it you have breasts, so it is not really a major issues. Just realise that the quality of contacts is a function of the quality of your profile- so whilst you will get plenty, they will be of the kind that are talking to you because you have breasts, not because they think you are awesome.
Good luck with it though! | |
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Posted: 6/15/2008 12:38:21 AM | Sweetie, I think you're still missing the point. Go back and read what OFCB and Maggie (aka lm101) had to say, go back and READ the profile tips thread, spend more time thinking about who you are and what kind of person you are looking for, and write some of that out for us to see.
<div class="quote">Hey everyone, my name is sara. I am 20 years old, and i live in midland. I work as a houskeeper in a nursing home, and i am on a volunteer fire department. I also am going to school to become a paramedic. I do smoke, and i know i need to quit. I love to play softball, camp, fish, watch movies, have cookouts and bonfires. Every bit of this is already spelled out in your stats. DELETE
<div class="quote"> i really dont like shopping(Crazy, i know)i just hate watching my money disapear so quick, i work hard for the money i make to just throw it away.Don't we all, hon? Still doesn't tell anyone anything about WHO you are. DELETE
<div class="quote">My friends and family would describe me as easy going, cheerful, and energetic. My aunt used to not give me choclate because it would make me act drunk, have you read any of the other profile reviews? Your friends (esp those in your age bracket) will tell you what you want to hear -- if someone's looking at you as dating potential, they want to know who YOU say you are. I know this is the hard part, TRUST ME. I'm still working on mine, a week later!
<div class="quote"> i am just a hyper girl who loves life. i am free spirited, and i still love to play in the rain. trite, possibly, but now you're getting lukewarm. Work more with this sort of thing.
<div class="quote">The type of guy i am looking for is one who gets me, understands my views on life.That, my dear, is why we're all here, but in order for him to 'get' you, he has to know what those views are. Work those in here (using the three paragraph format LM gave you) and he'll know if he 'gets' you and he'll want to know more.
Keep at it, you're getting warmer. And do add some more pics, preferably without unidentified biceps in the background. | |
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