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Posted: 6/6/2008 1:23:16 PM | People of POF. Please review my profile and offer me some pointers as to how can I improve it. What do I need to change, what to add or delete. Thank you all in advance.
I've never been very creative in doing things like this hence why I am asking for help.  | |
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Posted: 6/6/2008 3:08:30 PM | Hi Diplok, you do need quite a bit of hepl with your profile. There is not anything there of substance, although some is usable. I suggest going to "profile writing tips" at the top of the page on this forum. Follow the guidelines, then post back to this thread and we will help you tweek it.
Best wishes
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Posted: 6/6/2008 4:32:56 PM | Headline.... Yuck. The dreaded "looking for" and a suggestion that you are not a full person. Baaaaaad.
Photos. You need 5-6, at least one full body shot. Anyone who is a few extra or more than a few needs to give other side an honest view what they look like. You also need face closeup, smiling and happy, as your main pic.
Interests. You need more (at least half a dozen more) and make them less generic. Interests is one of the hooks that people use when they decide to send intro messages. A good message can be generated by something specific in the interests, but you have to give them something to make comment on.
You have the right idea with two paragraphs. You need a bit more on your personality, though and make it into its own paragraph. Also, first date discussions generally go into first date, not about me.
First date is OK, but it drags. Punch it up and make it more fun. Some enthusiasm for the process. And pick a scenario, not just a vague description of what scenario could be. | |
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Posted: 6/6/2008 8:57:53 PM | | How about some pictures of you smiling? Happiness is more attractive than misery. And you have pretty eyes-- don't cover them with sunglasses. | |
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Posted: 6/6/2008 9:44:48 PM | | Thank you all for the advice. I changed my headline and I added a couple more pics, I will add more pics later on and I will work on the rest of my profile. Thank you. | |
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Posted: 10/14/2008 8:22:13 AM | | I would love another profile review. Thank you all | |
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Posted: 10/14/2008 5:50:15 PM | | I changed my profile abit. Can someone give me pointers on what I need. | |
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