| Haiku #3 [CLOSED Thread]
Posted: 6/20/2008 10:47:29 AM | would like to start something new here I searched for it but could not find anything with a haiku game. This game works like first line last line but must be in the form of a haiku. If there is one and I just didn't see it let me know so that we can delete this and I will post on there. For those of you who don't know the rules of first line last line, you have to make your haiku starting with the last line of the haiku above you, and for those of you who don't know what a Haiku is. It consists of five syllables in the first line, seven syllables in the second line, and then back to five syllables in the last line, and I believe it doesn't rhyme either. If I am wrong please correct me and I will post the correct version of a haiku. This doesn't have to be perfect so If we miss a few syllables here or there or add extra ones, I am more concerned with having fun and trying to see what you can come up with from the other persons line above you.
Haiku #2 is laid to rest this day! It was wonderful while it lasted, we made 146 pages. That's 2 pages more than Haiku #1. Congratulations people! Well done.   Here we go! | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 10:49:32 AM | This is from Montana on Haiku #2
and have no regrets.........
still working on this big feat.......
growing yet to come.....
thanks manny!! | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 10:53:25 AM | growing yet to come...
as we share the joys of life
and the sorrows too
hello there Lucky! | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 10:55:55 AM | ((Hi Ash honey loving the new pictures everyone has up! TGIF!))
and the sorrows too
depending on each other
to comfort our hearts
 ((Welcome all!)) | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 11:20:30 AM | to comfort our hearts....
... seek to touch one another.....
connecting the dots........ | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 11:46:40 AM | (( Hi Montana))
connecting the dots .....
giving voice to our thoughts
we are not alone | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 12:13:15 PM | we are not alone
the path clear in starlight shines
hold my hand heart yours | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 12:23:00 PM | hold my hand in yours
its cold sometimes and needs warmth
thank you, thats better
Hello lovely ladies. Wow number three already? Thats awesome! | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 1:25:16 PM | thank you, that's better
now, lower and to the left
now I can smile
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Posted: 6/20/2008 1:41:52 PM | ((Welcome sock puppeteer ... Hi Tropicalgirl)) Storm's coming I'm gone. Wish me luck! Love ya. DANG!!! HI JUJUBEE!!! Sorry honey I didn't forget you really! Love the new picture. Later girls and guys
now I can smile
knowing you travel with me
on this old dirt road | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 1:55:53 PM | on this old dirt road
i've traveled many a mile
while family tales ring | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 2:02:52 PM | while family tales ring
reminding us of old times
some things will never change | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 2:05:10 PM | some things will never change
the need for comfort is one
Love, is another | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 2:42:17 PM | love is another
no, the only way to live
a life with meaning | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 3:06:01 PM | a life with meaning
caught in a bad traffic jam
oh light..... please change now! | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 3:30:26 PM | oh light please change now
nature’s audacious palette
hidden behind clouds | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 3:41:00 PM | hidden behind clouds
my merciless ignorance
emptiness foaming | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 3:41:20 PM | hidden behind clouds
seeking out my floating dreams
amidst cotton wisps
howdy expat, swan, all
emptiness foaming
frothing mouth of nothingness
starving for amore' | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 3:51:14 PM | starving for amore'
craving the sweetest of love
wanting to be filled...
(hi ho....) | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 3:51:14 PM | starving for amore
in the end nothing remains
pointless my longing
hi ya right back...those haikus were spot on A!!!! | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 3:59:23 PM | pointless my longing
for the closure I needed
cauterize the wound
thank ya Swanny bearhugs | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 4:01:39 PM | cauterize the wound
the open sea of my pain
surrender to it
wow, A..... you are hot smoking hot today!!!!!! | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 4:03:22 PM | | awwwww, mush smush mushing right back, biggy sticky ones, i'm eating popsickle here A!!!! | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 4:03:57 PM | cauterize the wound
or enjoy the misery
pain is optional
(think i'll go knit a sweater.....) | |
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Posted: 6/20/2008 4:05:37 PM | surrender to it
embrace primal surge of Id
wild hedonism
didnt mean to skip ya Rose. how ya doin hun
pain is optional
chosen perspective is key
flipside of Life's Coins
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