| Can somebody take a look?
Posted: 6/22/2008 5:44:17 AM | I have had a quite a few women look, but only one message so far, I replied, but she didn't bother. Mind you, she was probably too far away anyway.
I know that I am not very attractive, but can some ladies have a look at my profile and report back. | |
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| Can somebody take a look?
Posted: 6/22/2008 6:33:39 AM | Hello there
1. Get more pictures. At least one with a smile on your face. And some of you doing something. You are allowed up to 8. (And do look like you are enjoying life. Geez, you could be attractive if you smiled.)
2. headline - wishy-washy. Say something positive. Please! You are "fishing" here!
3. Interests - not bad, more would be better. Think "connecting with lady of similar interests", what would you like to do together with her?
4. Verbage - go to profile writing tips at top of page, and work with that. Read some of the other profiles in this forum posted in the last few days. Get a sense of what people actually see.
Think about the negatives in your profile, would you find this attractive in a lady?
I see you are an engineer. To me this means you have a relatively high IQ. It's not coming thru' in your profile. You probably have a lot to offer, and just need to think about who you would like, and chat her up a bit in the profile. I also see you have a sense of humour. Let us see more of that in what you have to say about you and about her.
Do read the tips! It will give you a structure.
twwr | |
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| Can somebody take a look?
Posted: 6/23/2008 2:57:55 PM | OK, I was wrong.
You're downright goodlooking when you smile!
Much, much better main picture. | |
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| Can somebody take a look?
Posted: 6/23/2008 3:20:40 PM | Thanks, I've updated my text bit too.
Hopefully I'll get some replies now. | |
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| Can somebody take a look?
Posted: 6/23/2008 3:57:15 PM | Great!
Try it out for a few weeks. This may have been all you needed!
If you're still not happy, click on your thread, and it will come up again. Tell us where you'd like some help..
Geez! I really underestimated you with a smile!
You might even consider taking the glum chum pictures off your profile...
And send out lots of emails. Be a flirt without being brash. Experiment!
A lot of ladies won't answer. That's OK, they're really not the ones you wanted to talk to. If you don't make the first move, who's to know you mean it?
Happy fishing! don't forget this is supposed to be fun! | |
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| Can somebody take a look?
Posted: 7/5/2008 5:06:41 PM | (OMG!)
I posted the above without looking at your profile first.
I would never ever in a million years have guessed you were the same guy.
You've done an amazing job. I'm in awe.
Go get'em! | |
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