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 Cannonfodder

Joined: 5/7/2007
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Posted: 6/22/2008 1:30:23 PM
Check my profile out and give me feedback, don't worry I can take it!
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 mightyd123

Joined: 3/2/2008
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Posted: 6/22/2008 1:44:12 PM
The grammar in your profile should reflect your years of education so give it a quick proof. Also, give examples of something creative, etc for the first date.

Overall, good profile. Can use a little bit of humor to balance how smart you sound. Your intellecutal pursuits are great but show that you are fun despite all of the intellectual contemplation.
 holigolightly

Joined: 5/19/2008
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Posted: 6/22/2008 1:57:54 PM
Pretty good for the most part. One suggestion is to drop the whole Prefer Not to Say thing. Having that under smoking, drinking etc. leads one to believe that you actually do engage in that kind of behavior. It's better to be up front about it.

Also, there are some instances where better sentence structure would make a difference.

* more pics are better than one :)
 SubSonicBoom

Joined: 3/3/2008
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Posted: 6/24/2008 3:34:25 AM
You should edit your profile to say what you wrote in your other (soon to be deleted) thread, that is if you have the stones to stand by your words.

cannonfodder wrote:

Thread Title: I have looked at too many profiles.

We always read the same profiles, "I am friendly, down to earth, confident, outgoing, honest, loyal, nurturing, considerate, and compassionate" blah blah blah (actual quote)

I want to see a profiles that says:

Angry, uptight, and hate to laugh. Walks on the beach make my toes sandy and you never know when needles wash up. No, I don't believe that you have to capture every single day, Sundays are for either Football or bad T.V.
Sure I like to travel thats why I leave the house, and no I don't volunteer. When I work I want to get paid for it.
As a man I do like my pornography, and any man who says he don't is either lying or homosexual.
Now back to sundays, who the hell wants to get up on sunday morning to go for long walks, I don't... nobody does they're all hung over.
Finally if your profile has "Considering the high volume of emails, I cannot respond to everyone." I will make this easy, DON'T CONTACT ME no man wants what your selling, trust me.

Then what does it matter people only look at the pictures anyways



Hey at least it would get your attention
And please don't correct any of the spelling/grammar mistakes. They really help to say everything necessary for your reader to know the quality of person you are.

- T
 Deuce Light

Joined: 6/17/2008
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Posted: 6/24/2008 6:34:34 AM
Shakakah, you've just been hit by the SubSonic Ugly Bus.
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