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Posted: 6/22/2008 6:10:57 PM | is my profile ok ? i think its short , upbeat , lighthearted , and gives a description of me .
i know ive not said anything about the person i'd like to meet, thats because i havnt got any criteria to be met , if i get chatting to someone i like , i'll want to get to know them better ..
as for my pics ..hmm well yes they could be better lol but i hate my pic being taken and these are the best i have lol
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Posted: 6/22/2008 6:14:55 PM | That pic of the guy in the motorcycle suit on the playground equipment...
That's not you is it... didn't think so. Delete.
I'll come back later to rip apart the rest of your profile... | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 7:45:09 PM | Capitalization, grammer, and punctuation all need work.
Do the comedians on comedy central tell you when to laugh? I didn't think so, neither should you tell us. Loose any and all LOL , haha, tehe, hehe, etc. It is important your humor stand alone.
You have not told us WHO you are, or described the woman you seek.
Go to "profile tips" follow the guidelines given, then post back to this thread and we will help you tweek it.
Best wishes
OFCB | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 7:50:04 PM | | you need a picture of you smiling..get rid of the playground pic it's useless. | |
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Posted: 6/22/2008 8:59:10 PM | And please upload a higher resolution version of the kilt pic, as it is not.
HTH | |
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