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| [Insert original way of saying 'Please review my profile' here] :P Posted: 6/23/2008 4:07:44 PM | Hello Half,
here goes my round one.
!. If you are looking for Hang Out, why do you have a date? I am not sure if it is a British vs Canadian language thing. If Hang Out means dating over there, then leave it.
2. What about the lady? We have absolutely no idea to whom you are speaking.
3. I find the theatre stuff interesting, however I am in a very narrow percentile. (Plus I am a bit old for you...) You are very intelligent, this profile needs a bit of work to get some ladies!
Pictures - for Hang out, your main is probably fine. #1 and 2 are the same, delete 2. #3 is a bit scary until I read the profile. Not sure if you are going to attract or repulse with that one. And this Grannie loves number 4! It's much friendlier and welcoming. I bet you are a bit dashing with a smile!
So take a look at this, and if you like I can say more.
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| [Insert original way of saying 'Please review my profile' here] :P Posted: 6/24/2008 3:07:34 PM | Rose may not have been sure, but I am, if you have filled out your first date section like you have, you want to date, NOT hang out. You have one of two choices, either remove the "first date" or change what your looking for to "dating". If and when one of those two things happen, I will review your profile. I can not possibly review for TWO things.
Best wishes
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| [Insert original way of saying 'Please review my profile' here] :P Posted: 6/24/2008 3:17:11 PM | Hes looking to Hang Out.
First Date possibly could mean what he would do on a first date. (Does not necessarily means he is looking for a date.)
Your profile is fine. You get kudos for at least having a brain and coming up with a unique subject line. | |
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