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 Half_Arsed

Joined: 6/9/2008
Msg: 1
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Posted: 6/23/2008 2:58:51 PM
Okay, it's an unoriginal sentiment but I'm new and I'm sure you're all lovely, forgiving people :P

Is my profile up to scratch?
Any advice, thoughts, comments, prolonged insults, etc all muchly appreciated!
 Gwai Jai

Joined: 4/6/2008
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Posted: 6/23/2008 3:55:32 PM
All in all a great profile!
But...................... get rid of the pictures of the homeless guy
 TheWildWhiteRose

Joined: 5/25/2008
Msg: 3
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Posted: 6/23/2008 4:07:44 PM
Hello Half,

here goes my round one.

!. If you are looking for Hang Out, why do you have a date? I am not sure if it is a
British vs Canadian language thing. If Hang Out means dating over there, then leave it.

2. What about the lady? We have absolutely no idea to whom you are speaking.

3. I find the theatre stuff interesting, however I am in a very narrow percentile. (Plus I am a bit old for you...) You are very intelligent, this profile needs a bit of work to get some ladies!

Pictures - for Hang out, your main is probably fine. #1 and 2 are the same, delete 2. #3 is a bit scary until I read the profile. Not sure if you are going to attract or repulse with that one. And this Grannie loves number 4! It's much friendlier and welcoming. I bet you are a bit dashing with a smile!

So take a look at this, and if you like I can say more.

twwr
 OldFashndMntMan

Joined: 6/20/2006
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Posted: 6/24/2008 3:07:34 PM
Rose may not have been sure, but I am, if you have filled out your first date section like you have, you want to date, NOT hang out. You have one of two choices, either remove the "first date" or change what your looking for to "dating". If and when one of those two things happen, I will review your profile. I can not possibly review for TWO things.

Best wishes

OFCB
 athrun_axe

Joined: 5/27/2008
Msg: 5
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Posted: 6/24/2008 3:17:11 PM
Hes looking to Hang Out.

First Date possibly could mean what he would do on a first date. (Does not necessarily means he is looking for a date.)

Your profile is fine. You get kudos for at least having a brain and coming up with a unique subject line.
 Gwai Jai

Joined: 4/6/2008
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Posted: 6/26/2008 6:23:26 PM
Hey dude,

you know i was only joking 'bout the pics right?
 UrsulaMajor

Joined: 6/21/2008
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Posted: 6/26/2008 10:14:21 PM
Most troubling about your profile is the "prefer not to say" for your marital status. The reader assumes you're married or involved and looking to "hang out" with someone -- on the side.
 Half_Arsed

Joined: 6/9/2008
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Posted: 6/27/2008 8:57:16 AM
All taken into consideration, and profile updated accordingly.

Thanks for the advice all!
 geekgirljessica

Joined: 2/24/2008
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Posted: 6/27/2008 11:29:05 AM
I like it. Made me smile.

I couldn't really find anything I didn't like about it.

For a "Hang Out" profile, I think it's right on spot.
 driven4agoodlife

Joined: 6/13/2008
Msg: 10
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Posted: 6/27/2008 11:35:34 AM
I think for a hang out profile it's fine, but that you need more interests in the interests box! If it was me, I'd also mention that it's not a date, since you are looking to hang out... just me though :)

Cheers!

-D4GL
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