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 kingcars

Joined: 7/1/2008
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Posted: 7/6/2008 9:18:14 PM
I've been here a few days, have had a little bit of success so I guess I'm doing something right. But there's always room for improvement, so blast away! (and yes, I'm aware of my lack of pictures, I plan to take some new ones soon)
 anotheramy

Joined: 2/26/2008
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Posted: 7/7/2008 4:24:08 AM

I'm a simple, straight forward person.
I'm a nice guy
I'm also casual, laid back
I'm very open minded and easy going.


These phrases are all over used and should be avoided whenever possible. You have to have more interesting things to say about yourself than to use boring phrases like these.
 kingcars

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Posted: 7/7/2008 9:44:24 AM
Ok thanks, I'll find a better, more interesting way to describe myself.
 kingcars

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Posted: 7/8/2008 7:59:12 PM
I did some edits to my profile, tell me what you all think. I'm still trying to figure out how to better word some stuff though. Thanks!
 Banterista

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Posted: 7/8/2008 8:54:15 PM
I think you have a good start, and your writing style is quite above average so that's an advantage right there.

Recommend you read the Profile Writing Tips for ideas on how to build on what you already have, and add some more pictures.

http://forums.plentyoffish.com/datingPosts1262627.aspx

Good luck.
 kingcars

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Posted: 7/8/2008 9:33:06 PM
Thank you very much. I plan to take some new pictures here soon.
 kingcars

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Posted: 7/8/2008 9:51:15 PM
Just made a few small edits to help elaborate some important parts of my hobbies and personality.
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