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Posted: 7/6/2008 10:42:29 PM | | So I have been on this site for probably about a year now. So far I have had 1 person message me and been fairly ignored by the few I have tried to contact. I do know my biggest problem is a disinterested in girls who only have outdoor interests. ( my luck im near boulder, tons of that type round here.) The other issue I can see is just the lack of people in my area on this site. Aside from that if I could have a hard core review, that would be grand. I wont take anything personal of course, I'm very analytical so the more the better. Oh and no I'm really not interested in any out doorsy kinda things, I'm in college to be an engineer after all.. | |
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Posted: 7/6/2008 11:40:37 PM | Delete the blank lines at the top of your profile. The first few lines show up in a search and you're making it look like your profile is blank.
Dress up, grab your camera and take some new photos. Your photo isn't terrible but it is not good either.
Grammar is your friend. Try getting a friend with good English skills to help you rewrite your profile. If you can't post back and we will help you with it.
Tell us about yourself. What do you care about? You need more than what you are studying and where. You need to show us what makes you special and right now it isn't noticeable.
What type of girl are you looking for?
Your first date section doesn't exist. Fix this but don't say you'd like to go to coffee shop. | |
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Posted: 7/7/2008 1:46:00 AM | I think you don't have all you browser plug ins, the first thing on the profile is a music player, there is no empty space I can find.
Unfortunately I'm about 2 semesters ahead in college English, compared to my friends, and I don't want to have family proofread this =)
Aye, thanks for the advice. | |
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Posted: 7/7/2008 2:19:43 AM | Very good advice, islandwonder!
Stop making excuses L4ance and go for it! | |
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Posted: 7/7/2008 2:45:11 AM | Alright I re-edited my profile. I usually avoid "over" geeking it. Now I could add a picture, or link of that case I mentioned...
http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v334/greenlance/?action=view¤t=Picture116.jpg
http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v334/greenlance/?action=view¤t=032.jpg
I'm sorry if there's massive typos. I'm sure I'll be shaking my head in the morning ( as its 4 am here hehe) | |
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Posted: 7/7/2008 9:08:08 PM | | Much better. If you don't want to weed out the less technical girls you might want to explain some of your references (LAN parties, magma, amine). I still suggest some more pictures as well. | |
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Posted: 7/8/2008 11:58:30 AM | | Do you think I should include those photos? The ones I linked at the top. | |
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