| Would you like to get to know me better?
Posted: 7/16/2008 4:57:05 PM | Hello and thank you for looking at my posting.
Take a look at my profile and see what you think.
I would love to get to know a man much better.
I live in a small town so it makes it quite difficult to
have a posting that nobody responds to. What you
will find with me is I'am easy to talk and write to,
down to earth, kind and caring.
Give me a chance and see what you think!
Thank you and Have a good day!
JoAnn | |
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| Would you like to get to know me better?
Posted: 7/16/2008 5:07:52 PM | You need a better headline; the one you're using has been done to death. Think of something original that will attract attention.
More pics., you can have up to 8 so get busy... they are key here.
Try switching from long~term to dating for awhile; see if that makes a difference, you can always change it back.
More interests; these are used in searches to are to your advantage.
The about me section should include the following information; using the standard 3 paragraphs;
1) Describes you; personality, qualities... etc.
2) Tells us what you enjoy doing; travel/goals... etc.
3) Describes the type of man you're looking for; his strengths, personality and character traits.
The first date could definitely be better; do you really want to go for a walk in the woods with a man you've never met? Or star gaze at night?
Good luck : ) | |
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| Would you like to get to know me better?
Posted: 7/16/2008 9:05:45 PM | If you separate your interests with a comma, they will turn blue and others can search for you using those words. For imstance, right now you have "festivalsholidays and star gazing," but if you enter them as "festivals, holidays, stargazing," they will be searchable.
What do you mean by "custordian"? Do you mean you care for someone?
You have quite a few typos for such a short profile. Go through and make sure to fix them. Most notably, I saw "some" and "to."
I agree, you need more pics. Lots more.
One last thing, your forum posts show on your profile. I see you have started many "broken hearts" types of threads. Maybe posting on some other kinds of threads would be a good idea. Right now all your potential dates will see that you've had a lot of negative experiences. | |
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