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Posted: 9/14/2008 3:47:54 PM | The profile, since all I got was "views" and I am not sure if thats a hint or just a regular passerby.
I feel a video introduction wouldn't be a bad idea, but since a picture and few lines are the only gateway to know one here, I think I failed so far.
I have been out of dating since last 5 years as I was rebuilding financially after a bad fall, so not sure if the trend changed or its just a matter of time
Sometimes I feel everything has come to a full stop.
No better way to ask the ladies, what should a guy put in his profile or modify to reflect his compassionate and nice guy personality.
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| Looking to revamp
Posted: 9/14/2008 4:04:29 PM | It is not as much WHAT you so, as HOW you say it OP. Just tell them who you are, paint a picture with words so to speak, what makes you unique?
Check out the profile tips at the top of the page on this forum, I think you will find them very helpful.
Post back to this thread if you want us to take another look.
Best wishes
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| Looking to revamp
Posted: 9/14/2008 4:05:04 PM | First, get some pictures up where you're smiling. Those pictures are not inviting.
The narrative is an okay start. Consolidate what you have in one paragraph. Then add a paragraph on your personality and one on what you like in a woman. It doesn't have to be long. | |
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| Looking to revamp
Posted: 9/14/2008 4:11:19 PM | I suggest you keep only the 1st and 4th pictures.
"and I never realized that all I have been doing so far is working and coming home to chill out." I would remove that. If you making changes in your life, that is only for you to know as far a profiles go.
"I enjoy going to the gym, have long walks and try to be fit" is a little rough, at leas needs a period and "I try to stay fit".
Tell us something interesting about your travels.
Spend more effort describing what you want in a woman, so she knows on what level to attempt to connect with you on.
"A good meal, and a drink with some conversation" is a sentence fragment, the very last thing she will read (hopefully). Make it a complete sentence and inviting | |
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