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 meandthensome
Joined: 10/13/2006
Msg: 1
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I have some song lyrics, and fun things on my profile to break up the monotony of talking about myself. I was kinda trying to show what I was like rather just tell what I'm like. does it come off as being playful or is it distracting? I don't have ADD but I think I might come off that way.
 Yevgeny
Joined: 3/15/2008
Msg: 2
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is it a little too random
Posted: 9/28/2008 1:57:39 PM
English major, eh? You do come across that way. And, yes, it is a bit too random. Very well written, and very well expressed in everything that you said. Just not sure it needs to be said.

But, you should do well. Not a lot of people your age who are that mature. You might want to open up the age range a bit. While the conventional arrangement is that women are more mature than men at your age, and so look for older men, I think you would connect well with someone up to 30.

Clean up the grammar a bit. I won't pretend to see everything (not a native English speaker), but I see some things that you should've caught. E.g, "If you message me. I'll message you back." is not meant to be two sentences.
 meandthensome
Joined: 10/13/2006
Msg: 3
is it a little too random
Posted: 9/28/2008 3:01:00 PM
good point, I was a bit lazy with some of it, too much 'net lingo on the brain. I didn't open up the age range because of personal preference, through I am mature for my age I'm not looking for the seriousness that might go with a relationship with a 30 y/o.
 OldFashndMntMan
Joined: 6/20/2006
Msg: 4
is it a little too random
Posted: 9/28/2008 5:22:58 PM

I'm not looking for the seriousness that might go with a relationship with a 30 y/o.


The keyword is MIGHT, open up your restrictions and sort them yourself, don't be lazy.

Best wishes

OFMM
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