| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/5/2008 5:47:07 PM | This is cribbed from the WritersCafe site but I think it would do as well here:
I'll start a Cinquain (a piece written in 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllables)
Then the next person will take the last line of that piece for their first line....
and so on and so on...
Disgust
Flattering not
posturing dictator
atrocities assailing us
Dub' ya
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/5/2008 7:13:00 PM | Dub ya
a prating knave;
and dub ya a willing
slave; nae dub ya a poet, nor
a bard.  | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/5/2008 7:31:36 PM | A Bard
in the writing
syllables and vowings
adding consistant beating breath
Poetic.... | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/5/2008 7:45:11 PM | Poetic....
stylistic
articulating few
consistently penning delight
scribble | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/5/2008 7:48:39 PM | Poets
Gather fondly
Joyfully expressing
Themselves enraptured in delight
Tonight | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/6/2008 3:57:27 AM | tonight
spirit resting
floating beyond my dreams
into the atmosphere unseen
drifting
(love cinquains...and the title of your thread is brilliant!!) | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/6/2008 5:04:40 AM | drifting
in inner space
the sun shines in my eyes
while my heart cries from last night's dream
wake up | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/6/2008 7:52:08 AM | wake up
bedbugs don't bite
slumber precedes coffee
enlivened a new day approaches
weekend
Thanks for droppin in you guys rock...  | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/6/2008 4:35:58 PM | i don't
understand why
when people are herded
they cannot see what is ahead
blinded | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/6/2008 6:43:54 PM | Blinded.
The priest approached
with his steel, and I was
compelled to stand; my last sight, the
bright knife. | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/6/2008 6:52:00 PM | (sorry i screw up, up there...let me try to make amends!!)
bright knife
circumcision
2 week old grandson cried
at the traditional practice
now healed
(sweet lil' pumpkin....) | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/6/2008 10:09:54 PM | now healed
they once told me
discovering madness
dripped everywhere about the room
prophet
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/6/2008 11:08:23 PM | prophet
visionary
foretelling the future
tarot reading on the solstice
new year | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/7/2008 7:35:30 AM | new year
bringing new cheer
frolicking and joyous
libations, carousing and beer
party
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/7/2008 7:40:36 AM | Party
renewing daze
confetti shimmering
counting seconds to resolute
New Life!!!!
 
(btw, thanks for not mention'n my faux paux up there........lol) | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/7/2008 12:30:11 PM | New Life!!!!
in front of your
eyes, all you have to do
is realize that you have been
blinded..
(Its cool I totally followed you and didn't even catch it...I'm just happy that you showed up and tried, who cares what you write....hahahahehee)
Rock out with your pencils out.... | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/7/2008 3:17:55 PM | Blinded
Revisited
Transforming sound to sight
World measured in sound
Listen
Lurve this thread. gonna be coming here for my regular poetic outspewing and haiku and cinquaines a lot more often :)
Hi there ......... | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/7/2008 6:41:32 PM | listen...
you stand the line
wondering all the time
because my eyes wont give answers
you know | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/7/2008 8:30:13 PM | you know
without words shared
feelings blare drums in heart
trumpets serenade all angels
for love | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/7/2008 10:13:16 PM | for love
what would you do
most would do anything
for love, how far must you travel
the world | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/8/2008 5:28:53 AM | the world
holding a pond
axis of steel bending
Sir come referencing playful hearts
Weightless
(heehee......DUDE........lol big kisses!!!! TY) | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/8/2008 6:45:12 AM | weightless
my mind, my heart
floats to oblivion
wandering so playfully for...
ever | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/8/2008 8:15:03 AM | Ever--
Mighty lever--
Absolute zero, and
infinity; trying to see
Never. | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/8/2008 8:47:06 AM | Never,
Almost never,
Almost never again,
Almost never again I swear,
Falsehood | |
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| Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/8/2008 11:06:16 AM | Falsehood
the one just down
the road, Ain't so bad, but over
in my hood, you had better not close
your eyes
peace all....thanks for love Hammy....
WeR1,Scarlett, Walsti, Tropical, GB Kev thanks for throwing in...
and of course Rosie my dearest you know you are always welcome in my house...
...it's my duty to honor that booty...
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