| just a thought... Posted: 10/13/2004 8:53:50 AM | how much love does it take- to break the ache in the heart- the fake from the start- as the world falls apart
how many lives get recycled like trash- for fame or for cash- makes me itch like a rash
give me liberty or death- you keep takin my breath- I acknowledge the plight- you keep makin me fight
close your eyes- see me better that way- open your ears- I've got so much to say
what applies to me - can affect you too- look around , pay attention- what I see is 2 true
I can learn from you- you can learn from me- stop meaningless commotion- hate,greed, jealousy | |
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| dominos fall Posted: 10/13/2004 10:57:24 PM | the tightness in my chest... was it the sharing of anothers pain...or overflow of my own?
shallow breath...fear of dying...or frustration of living
puddles running down my face...anguish over how badly people treat one another...or lack of love to cover it up
vision tunneling...a feeble attempt to pretend nothing's wrong...or embarrassed and realizing everyone knows nothing's right
those headaches...outer influenced...or self induced
...if I could only stop thinking | |
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| dominos fall Posted: 10/13/2004 11:14:31 PM | Its so easy to pull the trigger in the night, never knowing the mark it may hit. Ive been around a very long time, I deal with a lot of this. You want freedom, she wants pain, you want life, he wants rain... its all the same.
Tomorrow I will wake up and hear the same request, tomorrow I will drink my coffe, amid the shattered mess. Ya see, it doesnt really matter, I seek only the kindered soul. I dont dode ont the meek, I grow in the strong.
I can take the heart of a princess, and turn it to stone. I can take the heart of a villan and make it all my own. You can never conquor me, you cant make me bend my realm. Im the very one you want, but the one you can never catch.
Im so sorry, what a fool I have been, as usual... allow me to introduce myself....
My name is love! | |
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| dominos fall Posted: 10/13/2004 11:40:11 PM | thank you crossfade...that hit the spot - like a good cup of coffee in the mornin' -or an arrow in the heart of the yearnin' ~ what a mirage in the desert heat, by the deserted heart torn apart~ | |
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| hmmmm... Posted: 10/13/2004 11:45:58 PM | as obvious as I'm new to this...I have to say it's amazing how much of a stress reliever it is. I love this website! Nice to meet u all, and share our "piece of mind"~ Have a great day;-} | |
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| hmmmm... Posted: 10/13/2004 11:49:52 PM | | you too green... if it werent for a severe case of insomnia (late for work again tomorrow... like it matters) I wouldnt even be up. But congrats on joining, and welcome to the dead rhymers society!!! | |
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| hmmmm... Posted: 10/14/2004 7:26:08 PM | hey there~ Yeah, I know about insomnia. I get off work at midnight, sometimes 2AM-then am wide awake. I swear I think I'm turning into a vampire, I rarely see the sun. Where'd the doggie go? Pool looks very inviting tho...... | |
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| hmmmm... Posted: 10/14/2004 9:11:38 PM | | hehe, hey Green, how are ya? I sent the dog out for beer and vittles. But not sure if its worth the time... no insomnia here tonight. Hitting the sack, looking forward to seeing what ya got written in the am. Have a great night. | |
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| another day in paradise Posted: 10/15/2004 5:19:48 PM | the stink of intoxication filling me whole the lack of reality-obsession feeding my soul trim the trees, make room for some air pray to your God,hoping people will care
dust off your daiseys powder your oily nose claim fame in your right its all smellin like a rose
for the high will prosper the low will fade away making room for the next batch to compete another day
give me sense of it all its all I really ask can fairness ever prevail is it such a lowly task? | |
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| slowly he says Posted: 10/16/2004 8:51:37 PM | slowly he says... how i want nothing more than to be in his presence for an hour or more not to steal his eternity but share just a moment one i can call my own our own...yeah i like the sound of that i'm living in a self inflicting fantasy twisting myself inside out but I'm liking the insanity of it all the pleasure my imagination grants me to touch his beautiful face i want to kiss his face... cheeks,forehead,nose,lips ooh,he's got some fine lips his eyes are mystical,whimsical,enchanting looking into them is breaking my heart i want him so much it's amazing what attraction can do to you physically mentally emotionally OK..under these circumstances, it can't be Love I'm crazy about him | |
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| slowly he says Posted: 10/16/2004 10:35:56 PM | Wow... another very, incredible write Green!! Mucho  | |
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| slowly he says Posted: 10/17/2004 3:02:50 AM | | Your most welcome... keep it up, and welcome to the inner misery! Actually, there isnt much misery, but writters are supposed to feel misery and pain, washed down with anguish... I really dont feel that, but .... blah...lol. Welcome to here, I really like your writting style. Catch ya on the flip Green!!!! | |
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| a prayer for the people Posted: 10/21/2004 12:46:23 AM | from start to stumble feeble to fumble designing minds crumble
living on the edge to the powers you will pledge and the skeletons you will dredge
toiling by the hour luxury to empower malediction sour
to the smoothest waters sail but the purest hearts stay frail for the lust of money most hail but can the love of people prevail
amen | |
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| sharp metal objects Posted: 10/21/2004 12:55:09 AM | two silver swords crossed to say "back off" two forked tongues slashing insults toward one another the swords and tongues like parasites infect and feed off of new hosts highly contagious to even the stongest and healthiest the only available antibody is love | |
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| sharp metal objects Posted: 10/21/2004 1:14:56 AM | dead rhymers society
SIGN ME UP ! I VOLUNTEER !
THE DEAD RHYMERS SOCIETY convened. Lovely... | |
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| lust VS love:which do you prefer? Posted: 10/21/2004 1:33:08 AM | ah lust, yes , let's go there..... tingling skin, heart racing, warm embrace, mind in mind, body as one, just look at that face! licking and sticking,to some it's just sickening but when it's in you- anything else just won't do
now love, take your turn...but try not to burn they are twins, don't you know I've watched them both grow they play and they fight,it's such an awesome sight but many get confused -for with one, they feel used
0ne is less exciting, one is more inviting one would offer you 4ever, the other says hell no, never one can be titalating,inebriating, even excruciating the other mellow and calm, never too hot or cold, mostly warm
One is long lasting, the other only passing one gives in return, the other without asking I suppose the luckiest, would somehow have them both the best of both twins-wrapped up in an oath | |
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| sharp metal objects Posted: 10/21/2004 1:39:59 AM | Well hi there Medic! I thought I was all alone in here.(lol) I usually don't see reponses until the next day. Kinda like looking behind you, and someone's right there! Actually, it's pretty nice~ Hope you're having a great night. I can't believe I'm still up at this hour AGAIN! I didn't hit the bed yesterday until 7:30 AM. Well, c-ya, and nice meeting you | |
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| sharp metal objects Posted: 10/21/2004 4:16:04 AM | | Wow Green... really liked that one!!! Very good... dayum... appearantly I am either gonna have to step it up and start writting with the grown ups in here or simply bow out... very nice! | |
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| sharp metal objects Posted: 10/22/2004 12:57:35 AM | I had other momentous artifacts on here tonight....Somehow thay vanished into oblivion. Probably a good thing anyway.
I need a cover a hot blooded lover a spirit transending into hope never-ending guide me though all this find me the right fish if I am love worthy and not topsy-turvy then please send him my way get me off this d*mn highway | |
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| sharp metal objects Posted: 10/22/2004 1:22:57 AM | THE DEAD RHYMERS SOCIETY
I LOVE IT !!! You're a GREAT POET !
I am now a member of the.... THE DEAD RHYMERS SOCIETY !!!  | |
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| Blessind Dead Rhymers!! Posted: 10/22/2004 1:50:49 AM | | Congrats Medic, welcome to the club. I love this part of my life... this... castle here. I have yet to have someone say that my heart stinks... thats what my words are... as well as every single person on this particular part of the forums. So... I welcome you to the dead rhymers society!!! | |
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| slowly he says Posted: 10/22/2004 8:10:25 PM | i peer into the lake to see if it is me inside i know i want it to be i think, within myself and fight but her smile and talk are just right
I want it, see it, know it I wait ...to feel her sit this moment I am by her side we are together stride for stride
we share the night talk and whisper we laugh and giggle i might have kissed her
it can't be over I just got started oops i think i might have farted my conscience tells me this isn't right I don't care we want just one night
she says things i want to do its just too far to be true my mind is set on finishing school i won't be lured be the jewel
a thought a fantasy a dream a possibility
firm for you firm for me on a track is all I see
doesn't change how i feel i like you and i wish you could be free from the past and from your chains to raom around without your pains
still my friend i hope after this i have been holding in a great big piss keep writing to me because i look forward to feeling your heart and reading your sight | |
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