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Posted: 5/3/2009 9:09:14 PM | Hey, I'm new to this and would appreciate some constructive feedback on my profile. Let me know what you think.
Thanks!
edit: I gotta fill the 200 character minimum for this post lol............................ | |
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Posted: 5/3/2009 9:53:24 PM | Hi, Brian -
You're cute - great smile - cool photos - and employed!
The bad news? Profile body is only half done. You're asking someone to email you, but give them only basic drive-by information.
Look at all the cool things you've done - What did you love best about Amsterdam? Favourite thing at the pyramids? Are you a decent golfer? Teach me? Where do you snowboard? Write a picture to engage your viewer's mind.
I thought the intro was amusing - have a laugh at the expense of the site, but it worked.
Break up the big paragraph into smaller ones so you can expand on the ideas and incorporate your sense of humour. I bet you have a great writing style and can put the meat on the bones here. Rewrite and repost back to this thread so we can tell you what a great job you did! | |
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Posted: 5/3/2009 10:03:36 PM | Your headline:
Love all, trust a few
Haha, now there's a headline, YGF-worthy, even. :)
OP, you've summed up the pinnacle of man, like a modified Maslow's peak, in just 5 words. | |
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Posted: 5/7/2009 8:45:43 PM | | Thanks for the feedback! I've expanded my profile a little more. Let me know what you think. | |
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Posted: 5/7/2009 9:02:48 PM |
(yes... I still have a job :)
** Delete - We know from your stats. It sounds defensive.
Other than that your profile is terrific!!
There is plenty of information and things to talk about to break the ice.
Good luck in your search. | |
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Posted: 8/23/2009 9:59:34 PM | Redid my profile, let me know what you think. Should I add/remove any pics? Is there enough info?
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Posted: 8/27/2009 6:54:20 PM | bump. Let me try this again :)
looking for some feedback on my latest profile. Should I lose any pics? add more? pick a different main? Is it too long?
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Posted: 8/28/2009 2:16:33 PM | Gonna try one last time : ) if you have some time take a peek at my new profile an let me know what you think.
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Posted: 8/28/2009 2:31:34 PM | | I think it's a very good profile, I'm sure the ladies nearby will like it! Good luck! | |
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