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 iSeal

Joined: 10/17/2007
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Unapproachable?
Posted: 5/25/2009 8:58:54 PM
Tis my turn.

I don't know how I come off in my profile. I'm concerned about sounding like a pretentious douche. Anywho, what are your thoughts? Any parts you would remove/change? Any suggestions?
 Beth681

Joined: 5/22/2009
Msg: 2
Unapproachable?
Posted: 5/25/2009 9:02:15 PM
I think your profile is great, with just one exception. ;) I would probably remove the part about the first date cutting wrists and creating art with your own blood LOL. You already told us that you have a dark sense of humor. I don't find it offensive or anything, but I think I would personally like your profile better without that last bit. ;)
 Unfrozen Caveman Lawyer

Joined: 4/14/2009
Msg: 3
Unapproachable?
Posted: 5/25/2009 9:05:25 PM

I'm concerned about sounding like a pretentious douche.


My opinion? No. Not at all.


but most of my enjoyment lies with what I do on the side: being a guerrilla artist.


And from there you skip to an entirely different subject, leaving me hanging and wondering "what is a guerrilla artist?" Yikes, OP, talk about that a bit! Sounds pretty interesting, and I know that at least I want to hear more. There's a good chance that a number of other readers will, too.
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