| True Love
Posted: 6/7/2004 5:00:33 PM | My love for you is true,
But when I'm around you I'm blue.
You were born perfect in everyway.
That I dream about you everyday.
In another time.
You could have been mine,
But now you are taken.
Yet not fully awaken.
You are like a radiant beam.
That I've imagined in my wildest dream.
You are the one.
The eternal sun.
You are my dove,
And I'm in love.
The poems I put on here are my own words, and are already published, and copywrited so no copying please!
Mark | |
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| Re: True Love
Posted: 6/15/2004 8:21:18 AM | Cupid was the Roman god of Love, son of Venus and Mercury; and in Greek mythology he was Eros, son of Aphrodite and Hermes. He took as his wife the beautiful mortal maiden Psyche ...on the condition that he would join her only at night so she never saw his face. Their dark nights together were full of love and passion; though Psyche had a fear that her loving husband might also be an ugly monster!
At the urging of her sisters (and her own fears) she hid a knife and candle by their bed one evening before he came. After Cupid fell asleep, Psyche silently stole out of bed and lit the candle. As she held the light up to his face she saw not an evil ugly beast... but a most handsome young man with wings!
In her surprise, she spilled some candle wax on his sleeping face. The hot wax woke Cupid, and he flew away as he cried, "O foolish Psyche! Is it thus you repay my love? But go; return to your sisters whose advice you seem to think preferable to mine! I inflict no punishment on you, other than to leave you forever."
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| Re: True Love
Posted: 6/15/2004 8:28:22 AM | we sometimes let our own insecurity blind us to a True Love which waits before our very eyes! Sometimes we cannot trust our feelings and our souls to sense Love, but insist on seeing it with our eyes!
Love is not in looks - it is in hearts and souls!
the attraction and reaction which occurs when certain people meet., if it's only a sexual attraction then it is Lust (Eros). A spiritual affinity without sexual attraction is Friendship (Agape).
Only when both are present True Love is there.
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| Loving Her
Posted: 6/16/2004 8:38:49 AM | Hello Melina,
That was some pretty deep stuff, and yet I found myself enchanted by your words in a History like way, but tell me what you would get from this poem whos title is the subject of this reply....
Why can't you see?
What you've done to me.
I am to be lost,
And never to be found.
Time, and again.
I have no friend.
So what can I do?
I'm lost without you.
I am here,
And I am there.
I'm here all alone.
Hearing your tone.
She's the one I love.
Now, and forever.
Please hear me now.
Will Jayma Wells be found?
Mark
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| Re: Loving Her
Posted: 6/18/2004 9:26:23 AM | I was lost and alone when HE LEAVE;
My heart broke and bled, but I DREAM AGAIN;
I could do nothing good, but NOW i HAVE JOY OF life
So that I could start over again.
HE took my hand, and He picked me up,
He wiped the tears from my eyes;
He gave me his promise to take me up
To live beyond the skies.
If you're lost and alone, start a new day;
When your heart breaks, open a new door;
You can do nothing good, but somebody is there
so that you can start over again.
Melina | |
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| Re: Loving Her
Posted: 6/18/2004 4:22:17 PM | I chose to live,
I chose to give.
I gave my blood.
To suspend the flood.
The beauty of a flower.
Was enough to supply his power.
He fell from the skies.
To supply his cries.
I know not who I be.
I know not what I see.
In my hands are the keys.
To my future destinies.
He chose me to survive.
The never ending tied.
He gave me the power to move on.
So to them I say "SO LONG"....
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| Escape
Posted: 6/20/2004 5:07:09 PM | I must find a way.
I must make them pay.
All they do is lie.
All I do is cry.
They can't make the time.
They can't solve the crime.
No longer is there no fun.
No longer can they run.
No longer will I frown.
Because soon I will be drowned,
And the light shall cast them down.
What a shame.
Am I to blame?
I've finally failed.
I've been jailed,
And the train has derailed.
Mark | |
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| Lady
Posted: 6/20/2004 6:51:58 PM | This one is for you Melina. I never write poems about people, but for some reason I found myself wanting to write one about you!
I just want to say that this is a first attempt so it may sound goofy, and also I don't want you to think to deeply into it. Like I said.... I just wanted to write a poem about you in a kind friendly gesture.
The color of black looks good on you.
I must say that I'm falling for you.
You're a sexy lady not some little girl,
But through this entire ocean your the radiante pearl.
Your smile so bright.
It fills these caves with light.
No need for a fight.
When its you I dream of at night.
What can I do?
A friend like me shouldn't have thoughts like this about you.
Yet what can I say.
It's here I must stay.
I'm in a bind.
For you've enchanted my mind.
So I'll say it again.
Have a good day my friend.
I hope you like it, and have a good week, and I'll hear from you soon.
Mark
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| Re: Lady
Posted: 6/20/2004 11:25:36 PM | Oh! My friend!
Whether to say!.... It is known from ever then women surrender to such deeds.... I do it more... cuz I have romantic soul... you confuse me.....the first poem for me... I adore the fact that you made it for me.....I adore it!
You have torn from my heart a memory that will be only yours... forever.... Thanks Mark!
Melina
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| Melina
Posted: 6/21/2004 6:24:10 AM | Your Welcome Melina,
I never question another persons words before, but this one had me puzzled!? Did I do a good thing or was it bad, and now that I look back at my poem I could see how I confused you.
I know this is wierd.... Not a lot of people have answers for what they write, and I know I'm going to deep into something that's suppose to be art, but I wouldn't want to tear a memory from your heart when I want that memory to be as much yours as much as it's mine, but anyway here is another for you!
You draw me in.
From your beauty within.
Your Darkened Eyes.
Bring life to the skies.
I have so much to say.
You Brighten my day.
Yet in the end.
I have you to LOVE.... My friend.
This LOVE is very tight.
It has me dream of you at night.
These feelings I have are real for you,
But I don't want to ruin what I'm starting with you.
I want to hold you, and kiss your lips.
I want to feel you over, and hold your hips.
Yet no one can see.
How young are spirits can be.
I can't figure out what to get.
When we've only just met.
I can't believe you've enchanted me.
Blinded now.... Its you I see.
All I want to do is sit here, and write.
About what I feel for you! Does that seem right.
I know that seems strange since we hardly know another,
But your all that's on my mind, and surely no other.
I know your my friend,
But I feel something more.
Its like some kind of trend,
And it could leave me poor.
Yet I would give it all up.
Just to be with you.
So before others interrupt.
Melina I LOVE YOU!!!!
I guess that's what I get for going to deep into the Art Of Poetry, but that's the most Emotional, and Honest Poem I ever wrote. I never thought I could write something so true, but I don't want this to ruin the friend status I'm trying to develope with you, but I don't know.
I know it may seem wierd, but when I stare at your pictures (In a friendly way) its like I've seen you before in another life time perhaps (If you believe in reincarnation), and I was compelled to write about you.
Anyway. I hope you enjoy this poem whose title is your name, and I'll continue to read the poems you put here, and in your post as well. I'll hear from you soon FRIEND....
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| Re: Melina
Posted: 6/22/2004 9:19:04 AM | .. if a day you dont find anymore
my track close to you
don't fear
I won't be distant
maybe I'm gathering narcissuses and jasmines
for weaving them on my hair...
If a day
You dont see me close to you
than cry on my body
because only the death
can separate me from this dream
born as a lukewarm day
of spring end .
Melina
thanks my Musa....
Ps: your Musa is doing very very good....Operation.... | |
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| Revenge
Posted: 6/23/2004 10:21:03 AM | No longer a game.
I've felt the pain,
And its them I blame.
I no longer care,
But why is it fair,
And why can't I bare?
I need my knife.
So I can take this life.
I will play my card.
Because this is my yard.
They have lost control.
Of the technology they stole.
They sit there to cheer.
As they drink from their beer.
No longer shall I cry.
Because tonight they die.
Mark | |
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| Path
Posted: 6/25/2004 12:14:51 PM | This will mostly be the last time I post, but so everyone knows. This Poem effects no one on here. Its just something I wrote awhile ago when I stating publishing my stuff.
Going left,
And going right.
Going up,
And going down.
No matter which way I turn.
I watch them drown.
So why should I help?
When they done this to themselves.
I shed no tears.
I hardly care.
Because what happens to them.
Is good, and fair.
I'd do it myself.
If it makes me happy.
To bad for them.
Their not my friends.
Mark. | |
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| Confusion
Posted: 7/8/2004 6:28:35 PM | They have more deeds.
While I require my needs.
Others choose to feed.
While I suffer, and bleed.
Others could have you,
But really is that so true?
Others may cry,
But really we all die!
Can you really make a crime.
When you know its you that will do time.
Really.... Can you get so far.
In that rusty crusty car.
Will you really have to pay.
When its you.... That saved the day.
Flying high just like a Christmas Dove.
Can you tell her? That your in Love? | |
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| ?????
Posted: 7/11/2004 7:03:37 PM | The Kind
That Bind
That Blind
That Find
This Mind
Can Never,
And Ever
Become Clever.
Its Done
The One
Can Stun
This Fun. | |
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Asoka
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Joined: 7/15/2004
Msg: 16 | |
| Re: True Love
Posted: 7/17/2004 1:18:44 AM | | Wow,you're pretty good at poetry Operations.I'm impressed. | |
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Asoka
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Joined: 7/15/2004
Msg: 17 | |
| True Love Never Dies.
Posted: 7/17/2004 1:27:44 AM | When I 'm with you my heart beats.
I can't let go,it's out of my hands
This has gotta be love I'm feeling
Tell me you feel this way too.
Cause I know I can be true,
if you just say you love me.
I'll hold on forever
Cause I know true love never ends.
I know God had a plan
For you and me to be
I'm on my knees begging you come to me.
The thought of you rottening on my brain
It's driving me insane.
Without you I feel pain.
Let it be you and me.
I'll hold on forever
Cause I know you and me were meant to be
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Asoka
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Joined: 7/15/2004
Msg: 18 | |
| What I'll do for you.
Posted: 7/17/2004 1:41:32 AM | Roses are red
Violets are blue
And I want to be with no one but you.
If I was a bear I'd give you a hug
If I was dog I'd roller over for you
I'm neither I'm just a man who knows love when he sees it so I'll give you my heart in a beat.
And if you want I'll even rub your feet.
What the hell I'll give you a hug,because I'm a romantic
And for no reason at all I'll give you a kiss
I'll be there for you without a huss.
I know you're mine
So I'll be sure to make you feel just fine
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Asoka
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Joined: 7/15/2004
Msg: 19 | |
| Tell me if you care
Posted: 7/17/2004 2:03:58 AM | Tell me you love me and I'll be Mr.Happy
Tell me you don't care and I'll feel Sappy
Hold me tight
Make me feel right
I'll forever be your big teddy bear
Look me in the eyes and tell me you really don't care
and I'll leave you alone I swear
If you want it to be
It will be you and me
Make up your mind
I only have one life to be with someone true that I can find
Tell me you love me and I'll be Mr.Happy
Tell me you don't care and I'll feel Sappy
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Asoka
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Joined: 7/15/2004
Msg: 20 | |
| Women win
Posted: 7/17/2004 2:13:30 AM | Don't bother to argue with women you'll never win
When they do they'll bring you to a hault
That's just life,guys it's not our fault
If you don't just let them win in a fight
You know you won't be getting any tonight.
Women are born winners,sad but true
So just tell them you love them
You'll make their day and they will tell you that they love you too.
What's better then love from you two
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| Re: Women win
Posted: 7/17/2004 3:28:02 AM | | Don't you have any friends? | |
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Asoka
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Joined: 7/15/2004
Msg: 22 | |
| Re: Women win
Posted: 7/17/2004 4:19:19 AM | "Don't you have any friends?"
If you are asking me that the answer is yes,I have friends.Why?
T | |
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| Re: Women win
Posted: 7/17/2004 4:54:34 AM | | Never mind. Message went here by accident. | |
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| Re: Women win
Posted: 7/23/2004 5:57:46 AM | | in regards to the first poem it was good | |
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| Re: Women win
Posted: 7/23/2004 6:06:53 PM | Well it was the very first poem I wrote. Though my insprirations were fading I think I have found a new one, and hopefully I'll have some better poems for publishing as usual.
You were talking about the very first poem on here right Dawson???? | |
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