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| Profile help - Constructive Criticism, please!
Posted: 6/15/2009 9:26:55 PM | I'd like some constructive criticism concerning my profile. My only real experience describing myself is on social networking sites, and those descriptions are really only to have something on my profile, since I only expect people I already know to look at my profile.
Anything I should add or take away? Is the size decent and are my pictures good? All that and more would be very appreciated. | |
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| Profile help - Constructive Criticism, please!
Posted: 6/15/2009 10:01:41 PM | | You're pics are good, clear and show you having fun...happy pics:) The description is probably a bit wordy. Just depends on who is reading it, but most woman are going to only read about half of it....then look at you're job and kid status. That's just our nature, we can't help it:) You're job status makes it seem as though you don't have a direction, a job jumper of sorts. But I read you're whole description, so I was able to understand that you are more of a freelance worker/writer type and probably do those other jobs to pay the bills....not necessarily you're "career" You might want to put something like "entrepreneur" in that section, just looks better. Overall, you're profile is fine, you'll do fine on POF. Happy Dating:P | |
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| Profile help - Constructive Criticism, please!
Posted: 6/15/2009 11:33:22 PM | Thanks for the help there. I was wondering if my description of me was too long. I wasn't sure what to write, 'cause I'm complex. I figured just a bunch of points describing me would be more effective than the ambiguous approach.
Any other opinions? | |
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