| Tired of rewriting my profile.
Posted: 6/21/2009 4:09:50 PM | | I have written and re written my profile at least a dozen times to no avail. I would greatly appreciate any imput anyone has as long as the points are valid. If you are going to give me an opinion based on irrelevant observations please keep your opinion to yourself. | |
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| Tired of rewriting my profile.
Posted: 6/21/2009 4:33:51 PM | Well, I'll be honest... it sounds like you are coming across as desperate and forceful. You can be the nicest guy in the world (and the most beautiful) but if you come across that way, no woman will want you. I'm not saying you ARE (are you most likely far from it), it just sounds like you are coming ACROSS that way.
Try toning it down a little and not telling women that you are re-writing your profile over and over again letting (to get their attention). I really like how you wrote in there how you don't have kids because you haven't found the right woman who you want to be the mother of you kids and how you don't do drugs, etc... that is something you should leave in there. Keep what is YOU in there. Be yourself.
Another thing that will DEFINITELY push someone away is the way it ended... it was ended on a bad note. You sounded like such a nice guy up until the end. At that point I put a guard up as I was reading the end because you were being a jerk and bashing women and you were seeming very insecure about who you were. Yes, you could have hard feelings (we all do when we get rejected), but when you throw them out there (especially on your profile), it doesn't look good. Take that out as well. When you see someone doesn't write back and just deletes your email, move on. You don't want her anyway. She would be a waste of your time. As for who you were (physically), who cares what you look like. I've dated guys in my past who weren't the cuted men around, but they were secure in themselves, and it SHOWED. That's why women liked them. If your words reflect what's in your heart and not what's in your head, maybe that will help.
As I said before, you sound very nice in your profile. Putting the pics of the dog up is a bonus too! Try what I said and see what it does 
 good luck! | |
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| Tired of rewriting my profile.
Posted: 6/21/2009 6:17:00 PM | Hi. I don't think it's what you've written in your profile, I think it's your pictures. Have someone (not you) take some photos of yourself in an outdoor setting. Is there a garden, park or just some nice trees or a lake not too far? Early evening before the sun sets would be a good time. I think the right photos will make a huge difference. Take a bunch and choose 2 or 3.
Also, I would recommend removing the pictures of your dog. If you want to have a picture with both you and your dog, that's fine. Initially, you just want to draw attention to yourself.
Lastly, I would chose another screen name to something more positive or even neutral.
Good luck! | |
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| Tired of rewriting my profile.
Posted: 7/21/2009 2:06:18 PM | Ok....I redid almost everything. Would some of you be so kind as to re evaluate my profile?
Thanks | |
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