| What women want??? Posted: 6/22/2009 8:31:46 PM | You need to help me... Ive been doing this for like three weeks with ZERO success.. Go to my profile.. Check it out... Tell me WTF is wrong.. I thought i was at least ok... its me... its real... I dont ****ing write shit just to make myself look better then i really am... I dont have to...... My freind who refererd me to this site is Full of shot!~ He lies all the ****ing time!!! and hes hooking up with girls left and right...
WTF!
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/22/2009 8:40:39 PM | I'm I'm I'm I'm........
"drinking lunch"????
More I'm I'm I'm...
Your friend may be a lying playa, however perhaps he is able to pull off a little humility, and doesn't sound like someone that says this is about me, so what else do you want to know about me, because I am awesome all the way around...
What girl wants to compete with that much self impressiveness????
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/22/2009 8:45:45 PM | Umkay.
So you want some advice? Tough love incoming!
1. Your intro photo is that of you making out with a sheep. Bad idea. 2. You actually have a photo of you curling a weight (and not a very heavy one at that). Bad idea #2. 3. You have yet another Kodac moment set with a Bay Watch theme with you and two other guys (one of which looks like he's wearing a cape). Bad idea #3. 4. LeaRn ThE ProPer uSe of CapItaL LetTeRs. 5. "I have a lot to say about myself!" Ok, so say it.
Oh I give up. ..
Over use of the F bomb isn't going to score you points with da hawt chicks either. | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/22/2009 9:36:58 PM | What he said^^^^^ at first I thought you were kissing your g/f err sheep I didn't go past that pic | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/22/2009 10:49:07 PM | | The answer you seek can be found by gargling with champagne while riding in the back of a pick-up truck. That's how I came to understand women as well as I do. | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 12:14:49 AM | | hmmmmm interesting profile but im not learning anything about u really esp on what u want on a date?.also put a better quality picsssss.change ur pic comment also into somthing nice not "drinking" | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 1:21:57 AM | Sounds like a Jack in the box ..it's all jacked up ..
Do us all a flavor and grow up....it's time to put the boy away and start being a man...k?
and dump the whole crappola on your profile...gals are just shaking their head and sayin ..uh uh uh....
"Its not the size that matters any ways!"..................
...WHAT?????? Your actually putting THIS in your profile???? Ok..wheres the camera?
You need to get serious if you want to get serious with the LADIES......
Seriously....
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 2:46:59 AM | You do specify that you are looking for an "intimate encounter" the bulk of profiles on here, the women clearly specify that, if you have e-mailed anyone for an intimate encounter, then you can't contact them. Dude, your profile is AWFUL....and i foresee you dating a jar of Vaseline for the rest of your life...Geeeeezus....figure it out...
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 10:08:43 AM | Your spelling and grammar suck -- copy your profile into Word and do a spell check and put it back in -- women like those kind of details. Your buddy may lie, but he won't find anyone of quality to stick around for more than a few hours, so do what you think is best for you. Be straightforward, don't be pretentious about your location or stuff, and don't act like a drinker or you'll only get drinkers, and they aint cheap... | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 10:22:03 AM |
Dude, your profile is AWFUL....and i foresee you dating a jar of Vaseline for the rest of your life...Geeeeezus....figure it out...[/qoute]
Ummm I really don't think you're in a position to degrade someone else's profile and dating prospects, chief. Love that effeminate pose of yours in that first pic. | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 10:51:31 AM | Intimate encounter makes you look like a cheap fool. Taking sex and not giving anything back! Not having a profession makes you look like you don't have one and you're lying about something. Get better pics, because you look OK, just need some better pics though. Just not clear like you're trying to hide something.
You're making it sound like you don't really care about people at all. Your date "must not be looking for long term" makes it look like you want to bang em and hang em. Nobody wants to feel used and abused, loved then left . So you are very shallow. Which is fine, you just need someone just like you.
Spelling and grammar is very important. Are you smart enough to keep your job?
Interest in models...I mean if you're not smart enough to spell correctly, without a hot picture, why would a model want to go out with you? For the free champagne? haha
Anyway, if it is at all possible to see yourself better and be able to appreciate that not everyone wants to just have sex with an OK, blurry picture of a guy, good. If not, good luck finding a halfway decent chick who wants to jump, hump and dump. | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 1:44:29 PM | You're pictures and profile need a major overhaul. You also might want to consider calling an escort service. I'm betting that's what your friends doing if he's really "hooking up with girls left and right". | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 3:48:20 PM | sigh.... Do you need us to write it for you?
Here!
Hey! Its! Thanks for checking out my Profile.!
No need to thank someone for reading your profile. Get rid of that line.
I think Im kinda cheating living this good so young
What the hell does that mean? It's rhetorical - don't answer. Get rid of it, it's cheesy and lame.
I Just moved to a pretty wealthy neighborhood Across the Bay from Down Town San diego.
Really? We're not impressed you live in a wealthy neighborhood. Change this line. No one cares that you just moved.
Im still in...
Still in what? Love with your sheep?
I love running on the beach and beach volley ball
Change this.
I enjoy time alone but it dosnt bother me f im sharing the time with a girl who shares my interest...
Really? So as long as she shares in your interest she's good to go, if not she's stuck on the couch watching TV while you're out doing your thing? That's what you are implying with this statement. Change it.
So... Write me... You Could the one Im looking for!
Again, really? How about YOU could be the one SHE is looking for?
STOP MISUSING CAPTIAL LETTERS.
Something like this would be a HUGE improvement:
I spend a great deal of my free time at the beach and enjoy a good game of vollyball. I take my job very serious and am always working toward advancing my postion within the company; however, I do make time for fun!
At this point in my life I am not looking for a serious relationship. What I am looking for is someone to spend time with: going to dinner, the movies, spending time on the beach together, and (insert whatever else you like to do here).
If you're interested in getting to know me better or would like to chat feel free to send me a message :-) | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 3:58:42 PM | ^^^^^^^^^^Yeah there ya go what he said... Sheesh, for someone that is living it up so good, you'd think you lived in a bubble with no contact with the outer world... can't help but wonder by all that you've written if you were an only child, OR the baby of the family...Only boy???
Sighhh, you still don't get it... Unless you want a gold digger to shag who the hell cares that you live in the wealthy part of town??? I mean really do you need to post a profile for "sugar daddies"???
Next, just looking for an activity partner, hmmm and what does that mean exactly??? In other words instead of the Hey! Its!*************** perhaps you may want to describe what kind of "activity partner" you are looking for...
Sighhhh
What women want... Not someone that thinks of them as a mere object for the guys own self gratification, whether it to be to pretend to impress people by the good looking woman on his arm, or for the guys sexual pleasure... | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 5:08:42 PM | Three weeks? Wow. you must be hideous and completely unlikeable.
Seriously my friend, to find the person who may be the most important person you ever meet is going to take a little while. You cannot rush love.
Sitting bay side and drinking chmagne
Fix the profile, yours sounds rushed, pretentious and thoroughly boring. Chmagne? Is that like smegma???? Ewwwww | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/23/2009 6:01:14 PM | The guy I'm dating to get off all of the other dating sites he's still on after all this time excl. dating me. There's no reason for it. I'm not on any, but this won chking the forum page out. It's not eright. Yeah I'm hurt and pi$$ed offffff. Men!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 6/24/2009 12:15:19 AM | | most say they want a nice guy, but seem to pick the bad boy lol | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 7/4/2009 12:22:21 PM | 1) Start by composing a coherent, fully formed thought and expressing it clearly in a sentence. I did not find one example of this in your profile.
2) Stop ... using ... so ... many ... ellipses (3 dots, to you). It makes you seem like you have ADD.
3) Try revealing something about yourself that would make you appear as a bright, interesting, attractive person and one who is interested in others. Your profile makes you seem self-possessed. | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 7/4/2009 12:44:44 PM |
Intimate encounter makes you look like a cheap fool. Taking sex and not giving anything back! That's what a hooker would say. It comes from thinking of sex as something to buy and sell or trade, instead of as something to enjoy together. You could look at it the other way around: Giving sex and not asking anything in return. The reality is that when two people have sex and they both enjoy the experience, suddenly there is no harm done. | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 7/4/2009 1:54:42 PM | | i agree with shaken they say they want an nice guy.they also say they want the truth,i'll give you a hint only thing the truth gets you is where i am single.an no i didnt cheat on my girl other way around thank you | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 7/4/2009 1:56:44 PM | | they also want truth but it hasnt gotten me anywhere man so do what ever you do best an be yourself in the end that all you can be is true to yourself.sounds cliche but in the end you can accept where your going an life an actually understand what it is you want | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 7/4/2009 3:05:04 PM | from your profile
I enjoy time alone but it dosnt bother me f im sharing the time with a girl who shares my interest...
Gee willakers I wanna spend my time with someone like that. | |
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| What women want??? Posted: 7/4/2009 4:11:58 PM | sorry to say but is all about you, you, and more you. have you ever been told that you give the impression that you are all into yourself friend.
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