| | would love to hear commentsPage 1 of 1 | I had a friend look at this, and she gave me some good (I think) advice, but I'd like to hear what people think. I don't intend my profile to scare anyone off, but keep in mind that this is really kinda who I am.
Thanks,
Yoshio
http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=12852868 | |
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Posted: 6/26/2009 6:03:32 PM | Yoshio,
I think I can help you out a bit but let's start with one piece at a time. You have a decent picture but what your really want is a big, toothy smile. The other picture is sideways. You put something in your profile like "who am I?....Get rid of it. You start to describe yourself so you don't need that in there. The working hard part....just say you work, are dedicated, etc. You don't want to put anything negative in your profile. I know I'm being rather general here but honestly, if I see a profile that doesn't have 3 short paragraphs I skip over it. You want to 1) describe yourself 2) what you like to do and 3) what kind of person you are looking for. All in all it's not bad. Just needs some tweaking but I didn't read the whole thing yet. Got any other pictures? | |
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Posted: 6/26/2009 6:04:30 PM | | oh, and try to beef up the interests and definately get rid of all that dead space at the top of the body of your profile. | |
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Posted: 6/26/2009 6:37:34 PM | Your profile sounds good to me. My suggestion would be to describe your occupation. A description of your occupation would make you unique and give you a jumping off point for your subsequent mail
Good Fishing
Leib | |
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Posted: 6/26/2009 6:44:27 PM | ^^^ in addition to these suggestions, you may want to make it easier for women who may want to contact you by deleting these email restrictions:
Must not be looking for Hang Out
Must not be looking for Talk/E-mail
Must not be looking for Friendship
You make it clear in your profile what you're looking for, but sometimes women start at the slower end and may, in fact, be ultimately looking for dating or long term.
(The 'big blank space' is the delay in getting the imeem thingy to pop up. I never click on those.) | |
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