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 Lennie1965
Joined: 6/21/2009
Msg: 1
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I would like for everyon to take a loot and review..
Please take a close look at my pics and let me know about them as well..
I personally think my profile is fairly interesting and catchy..
I have had many many ladies look at my profile.. I think the hook is good but there must be something inside that keeps them from writting.. I have had a few but I would like to get more e-mails.. help me out

thanks
Lennie
 mrwutzizname
Joined: 10/26/2006
Msg: 2
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Posted: 6/27/2009 9:35:50 AM
Lennie,

Right off the bat I'd say you want to get a face picture with you smiling as a primary photo. It's amazing how effective a smiling face is. Next I would completely change the interests section. Sounds rather negative and you should really use that area to list your interests. If you put commas between them they will be searchable so someone looking for what you enjoy will be able to find you in a search. Use the format - interest, interest, interest.
 kazzmere
Joined: 1/26/2009
Msg: 3
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Posted: 6/27/2009 9:39:47 AM
You wrote more about your family (and their various dysfunctions) then you wrote about yourself.
 Mary_1960
Joined: 6/16/2009
Msg: 4
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Posted: 6/27/2009 9:40:51 AM
Lennie,

I'm not a professional profile reviewer, but I am a woman, so I thought I'd take a shot at reviewing your profile. I was immediately confused with your first paragraph:


And it wasn't like those old commercials on television either. Nothing comforting about a woman with a shiny slab of Vicks under her nose coming at you with that Huge Blue Jar. If you’re addicted to Vicks, move on.


What is this supposed to mean?

I also noticed the only "Interests" you list are:


Forever battling the bad impressions created by every weird guy who has ever e-mailed you


Your photographs show a nice looking guy who seems to like to travel a great deal, so I'd list your other interests. Something other people might identify with.

The rest of your profile is VERY honest, maybe a tad too honest for an introduction? This is just a personal observation. Not being a party chick, or a previous drug user, etc. I'd be totally turned off by such honest revelations. Like I said, I'm no professional, and I hope my observations didn't hurt your feelings.

Good Luck!

Mary
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