| ftw! what yall think?
Posted: 6/28/2009 8:04:42 PM | | do you like mine? is it arousing and/or homoerotic? what would you change if anything? any ideas would be nice. would like to connect with lots of different types of woman...................that's mostly it. thanks | |
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| ftw! what yall think?
Posted: 6/29/2009 7:27:56 AM | A few more interests will help.
i work and go to school - So you should know that the word "I" is always capitalized.
i am from europe - What country are you from?
some might find this to be vague but i'm not looking to write my autobiography just yet. - You should write a few specifics so that we can get a sense of who you are.
if you would like to know anything, anything at all, feel free to ask. - Delete. Women already know this.
First Date: that depends on many things - Come up with something fun and creative here.
Write a paragraph about the woman you'd like to meet. | |
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| ftw! what yall think?
Posted: 6/29/2009 7:33:02 AM | | thanks for the input! i will heed your words and come back when it is revised. | |
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| ftw! what yall think?
Posted: 6/29/2009 8:04:04 AM | | I don't like the opening paragraph. You're very busy but you've got time to meet new people .... sounds condescending. It also sounds as if you're still going to be on here even when you've found a girlfriend. And what exactly do you mean by not being a weak person? You make it sound as if your'e aggressive, assertive and like your own way - but I don't think you mean that. | |
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| ftw! what yall think?
Posted: 6/29/2009 8:10:30 AM | i wanted to send a message that i'm not on POF all day and that i have ambition.
perhaps i am too ambiguous?
i don't know why you would say that i will still be here? do i come across as a player?
i mean that i am kind but not a pushover. do chicks like pushovers? | |
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