| Could I do anything different
Posted: 6/30/2009 11:21:47 AM | This isn't too bad, but here are my suggestions:
All of your pictures seem to be self shot. If possible, see if you can add one or two pictures that were taken by other people (of you). This isn't critical.
You have a good amount of interests listed, and all your profile data seems in order.
I noticed a lot of grammar inconsistencies and one sentence paragraphs in the about me section however. I think this could stand to be cleaned up. At the very least, correct the letters that need to be upper case at the start of the sentences, upper case your 'I's, and so on.
Again, this is fairly decent. Good job. | |
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