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 AllNightmareLong

Joined: 9/23/2008
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does my profile come off as too cheesy?
Posted: 6/30/2009 2:47:23 PM
I have always tried to put a little humour in my profile so people don't think I am boring and too serious. but i am curious to know if i have over done it and came off as cheesy and trying too hard. let me know what you think guys.
 You go first

Joined: 5/1/2008
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does my profile come off as too cheesy?
Posted: 6/30/2009 6:32:06 PM
Not bad humour-wise. The neverending lists of music and movies needs a good trim. Top 3 maybe?

You want to finish off with a short description of who you are hoping to meet, using positive language only. However - as you have that you're Looking For: Hangout, it may not be an issue because the majority of the limited number of available girls here are Looking For: Dating.

First date idea a movie? Do you want to sit in the dark with a stranger not talking for 2 hours? Try again :)
 Roy12781

Joined: 1/21/2009
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does my profile come off as too cheesy?
Posted: 7/2/2009 4:12:31 PM
You might want to clean it up a bit grammatically, too. But hey, if you're on two member's favorites list you're already doing better than a lot of us are.
 wildquempel2001

Joined: 5/20/2009
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does my profile come off as too cheesy?
Posted: 7/2/2009 8:16:37 PM
Your profession says Chef (kind of) I reccommend you put Restuarant Kitchen Manager..that's pretty much what you are. Or just put Chef and you can explain if someone ask.


My Name is Kyle. People Tend to like me becasue I'm Polite and Rarely late.


why are Tend, Polite and Rarely capitalized?? you really don't need to put that your rarely ever late. Maybe in your headline instead of "That dog has a puffy tail" you could put "polite guy looking for friends" or something along those lines.

The rest is okay I guess...just needs to be spell checked definitely.

As for your long list of movies and music...I didn't even read that ...I saw how long it was and said F that..

You may wanna shorten to your fav. band or your prefer genre of music and movies.

Such as rock music and comedy movies
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