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Posted: 7/1/2009 11:00:28 PM | Hello, I would really appreciate it if you could give me some advice on my profile. Anything would help. I understand that I shouldn't write a novel, but I feel like I should be as open and upfront as possible.
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Posted: 7/2/2009 5:53:21 PM | | Hello, I have made some changes to my profile and would like some input please. Is there anything you would change? | |
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Posted: 7/2/2009 6:27:29 PM | You call yourself "smilinguy", but you aren't! In your main pic, you look like you just swallowed a lemon, or maybe are about to barf in your mouth a little bit!  | |
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Posted: 7/2/2009 8:16:16 PM | My reaction is that your profile is merely a list in prose format. What you have to say is good, but if you discuss many "I like to's" in one paragraph it is overwhelming.
While you are on the line, so to speak, let me also indicate that, to me, listing too many interests is the equivalent of saying, "I am interested in everything but stopped listing these things when I ran out of time and space." Thus, my suggestion would be to prioritize your interests and list the top 2 or 3 and tell your reader why you are interested in these particular elements.
Good Fishing
Leib | |
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