| ALRIGHT!! I guess i need some help
Posted: 7/3/2009 10:12:53 AM | I honestly thought my profile was pretty good,but now I am starting to wonder.
So let me have it! Any and all critisism or suggestions will be appreciated.
Atleast this way it will look like people are visiting my profile...LOL | |
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| ALRIGHT!! I guess i need some help
Posted: 7/3/2009 10:50:56 AM | | Nothing wrong with your profile simplman. I read that you are down to earth and sweet. Your suggestions for a first date sure beat the usual go for a coffee. You sound like you are eager to please and open to trying new things. It's all good. | |
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| ALRIGHT!! I guess i need some help
Posted: 7/3/2009 11:13:44 AM | I've read a few threads here, I've found that editing to be a subject matter that appears again and again! Capitalize, punctuation, and visual aids in your writing appearently help. Instead of just saying "going for a walk", discribe what that walk may be like or where exactly you would like to walk, in the park, the zoo, stopping for ice cream...you probably get it by now. Also, be very sure of who you are and what you want, avoid being wishy-washy about the above. Not being a control freak, but being confident helps!
Hope this helps.
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| ALRIGHT!! I guess i need some help
Posted: 7/3/2009 11:41:27 PM | While you're in Edit mode, add some spaces between the paragraphs to make it easier to read. (punctuation, capitalization, spellcheck.... augh!)
A lot of women have "Must not Smoke" as a dealbreaker. If you are trying to quit, mention it. If not, be prepared for a longer wait.
You do have some things going for you - you're employed and seem to have a decent sense of humour. That's a good start! If you're concerned about how you may be coming across when you send an introductory email, feel free to use my profile as a test and send me a practise email for further review. No charge.
Good luck! | |
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