| Profile Review Please
Posted: 7/3/2009 11:16:06 PM | Just wondering if I am doing anything wrong or included too much, too little, what? Also, any general opinion on which should be the display pic? The rest will be set to private images.
Advice is welcome and appreciated.
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| Profile Review Please
Posted: 7/3/2009 11:26:04 PM | everything in your profile looks fine to me.
As far as picture, I'd go with the fourth cuz you're smiling, but you can't tell any detail so I'd recommend redoing it. If you're only going to post one and the rest private you wnat to make sure they can see your face. | |
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| Profile Review Please
Posted: 7/3/2009 11:55:28 PM | The current photo you have now is good.
For Body Type, change this either to Average or Athletic. The photos will vouch for you.
The profile body itself needs a bit of work:
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Hi, I'm Jon.
I enjoy almost anything outdoors, love animals, and enjoy fast cars, exotic food, and interesting people. This is 5 ideas in one sentence. Pick your favourite and add a sentence. Ever driven a Ferarri? What's the fastest you ever drove? Got the ticket to prove it?
Each day I try to spend a little time doing something active, and enjoy working out. It really helps to burn off the stress from clinicals! Great line!
Sushi is a weakness of mine. I love sushi. That and, oddly, while I don't have "a type", I have always found dark eye-liner attractive. That or denim skirts, for some odd reason. Ummm... what does sushi have to do with your 'type'? Two completely different paragraphs, please. And - maybe use the 'exotic' food interest and expand on the sushi idea. What HAVEN'T you tried that you want to?
I am looking to meet someone with similar values to mine, who is honest, polite, intelligent, attractive, and is working towards a goal in life. I don't want to get married next week (or next year), but I am looking for something meaningful just the same. I am also open to friendship as well. If you like what you see here but aren't after a relationship, feel free to say hi. Like I said, I am always interested in interesting people!
so... while you're dating, you're still going to be open to meeting/talking with more women? you're on your own with THAT one, babe!
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Delete the AIM and other address thingies, they're against "The Rules" here and the Mods will spank you in a not-good way if they see it.
You're on 23 Faves already, so obviously you're good looking and have a lot going for you. Good luck! | |
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| Profile Review Please
Posted: 7/4/2009 12:00:05 AM | Okay, it is not too bad.
Pics: The two pics where you are smiling and actually showing teeth are very hard to see. It looks like you have a great smile, but it is hard to really tell. The other two pics are the exact same smile. Not bad, but I think your toothy one is better. No need for a pic with you and the car - you have more to offer than a sleek sports car.
About Me: This is pretty good. You speak briefly about yourself (although you could expand if you wanted to), and you describe what you are looking for.
Overall, it is very positive, upbeat, and worth a second glance (or three).
Best of luck... | |
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| Profile Review Please
Posted: 7/4/2009 12:33:56 AM | My teeth are nice and straight, but when I show them in a smile, it looks so forced.
Thankyou for the great advice!!! *scurrys to updated*
I hope my new display picture is okay? | |
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| Profile Review Please
Posted: 7/6/2009 8:12:26 AM | Hi,
The new pic is interesting, but you should have multiple pics. I would keep just about all of the ones you had up previously (they show you in different situations that simply help).
So I get that you are concerned about your smile seeming forced, try to have friends and family take candid pics. You may be surprised at how a few of you mid sentence or even very serious could turn out to be your new favorites. Women like to see that you can have a good time and either a smile or social setting pic helps to convey this. | |
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| Profile Review Please
Posted: 7/6/2009 8:18:43 AM |
My teeth are nice and straight, but when I show them in a smile, it looks so forced.
Says ... who?
It can be hard to see something about yourself in a positive light. How others see you can be much more forgiving and, in fact, can be highly approving.
Why not let others be the judge, first? A big, broad smile can go a long way. | |
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| Profile Review Please
Posted: 7/6/2009 8:42:31 AM | | Overall, good job Jon. The written portion is pretty well done. There are a few minor tweaks that can make it better, but not a big deal. I would get more & better photos first, that's more important. It seems like yer doing pretty well right? 23 women added you to their favorite. None of them interests you? | |
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