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 Timotu

Joined: 2/8/2007
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ok, how does this look?
Posted: 7/4/2009 12:23:10 PM
I recently rewrote my profile, and based on responses I'm guessing I did a fair job this time. (hear back about 50% of the time, and I don't send out that many emails). Just curious what other people think of my profile, and if you have any suggestions for improvements.
 johninsd

Joined: 3/2/2009
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Posted: 7/4/2009 3:28:58 PM
In the profile writing tips, it's mentioned that holding a glass doesn't make you look "fun", it tends to make one look juvenile. You should consider a main pic that focuses on your face.

Other than that, you need to write more. Your profile is a sales tool. Women do not search, find pics of guys they think are cute, and email them. Much more likely, you'll send out emails, and they'll use the profile to "check up" on you. They won't be willing to play guessing games... the women with the most attractive pics are going to have no shortage of emails, and they know they can get a date from just about any guy they choose. You need to use your profile to tell them why they should choose you.

Don't worry, the profile is, and should be, a "work in progress". Visit it each day or so, rethink stuff, ad things you've thought of, check back here for more input, etc. I don't think good profiles just spring up... they're developed over time.
 Gareth1581

Joined: 8/19/2007
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ok, how does this look?
Posted: 7/4/2009 3:50:31 PM
If you're getting a 50% response then you're doing very well! We should be asking you for advice and not the other way around!
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