Your main pic is too far away. I would swap in #4 until I could get a good head shot.
Right off the bat, go in and capitalize all of the "I"s referring to yourself.
I am honest, i have never cheated on a girl.
I AM one of the nice guys.
Delete. Nobody says, "I'm a liar, I'm a player, I'm a bad guy" Stating this stuff is redundant, and it makes people wonder why you felt the need to start talking about how "honest" you are.
I work hard and relax with even more seriousness.
Huh? If you were subcontinent-India or Chinese, fresh off of the boat, this could be forgiven. But you aren't, so this is bizarre and confusing.
I am a night owl and actually dont like sleeping much.
That's... weird. You're getting people to start asking questions, but not the kind that you want to be asked.
Yes i am a nerd and i game, but alot else.
Again with the strange language usage. Referring to yourself as a "nerd" in this context is negative. And gaming is not going to be any kind of an interest for 99%+ of the women here.
[note: i have already taken around 200 pictures of the coast the last month so if you ever want scenic pics just ask]
Delete. Save that for later.
After that i wont have the time because i have joined the Air Force and will be going to boot camp this fall.
If you "won't have time", why are you here? Joining the Air Force is laudable. But where are you going to be stationed? No, not where do you think you'll be stationed... if it isn't in writing, guess what? You're gonna be traveling, my friend
And my crystal ball says sand and heat are a likely part of your near-term future.
I have an Associate's degree in Hospitality Restaurant Management, tho i fear i wont use it.
I wish there was a head-shaking smiley.
Why do you "fear you won't use" this degree? On second thought... just delete this.
The site asks what i am looking for..Yes it is mostly dating, but i also want, hanging out, an email buddy, possible long term, and new friends
I think that, after you address the issues of where you're going to be after Basic, you need to pick one goal, set that in your profile, delete that sentence, and you might very well find some of the other stuff. Assuming you stick with Dating, you really need to write a paragraph about who you're looking for. What qualities does she have, what does she like to do, etc.