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Posted: 7/4/2009 2:59:27 PM | I didn't think my profile was horrid, but I haven't gotten any messages after my first day back to POF (over a month ago)... So if some kind people could take a peek for me & let me know what I'm doing wrong I'd appreciate it :)
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| Review please
Posted: 7/4/2009 4:28:10 PM | Hi there,
I have taken a look at your profile and my over riding thought is that you will attract a specific type of man, with a specific set of hobbies and maybe there just aren't any who have read your profile yet.
To be honest the first paragraph may well have been written in Russian as I would not have understood the jargon in a million years. Thats's not neccessarily a bad thing as someone who shares your interests would be impressed. However, that opening paragraph alone assures that you wont have a broad range of POF's reading on to the rest.
Men are generally visually aroused so if we dont like the shop window we wont come inside. If you re-arrange the profile so that there is a general paragraph at the top detailing what you are looking for then you might be able to hook more people in.
I have no doubt that somebody will read what you have written and think 'Wow' as you are clearly very outgoing and intelligent, but at the moment you are limiting the number of men that will find out about the real you. All the best. | |
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| Review please
Posted: 7/4/2009 4:42:44 PM | | Thanks Gareth1581... Sorry about the Russian part LOL | |
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