| Help here... Posted: 7/9/2009 1:22:26 PM | So some poeple I've been speaking with told me I need a profile review because apparently mine's revolting. It probably explains why I haven't been getting any responses back from any of the messages I've sent out so if anyone could please give me some help on what I should say, or change it would be greatly appreciated.
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| Help here... Posted: 7/9/2009 1:33:13 PM | | I don't inderstand why you are not getting any responses , I just read your profile it's nice , simple and you are a cuttie ! | |
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| Help here... Posted: 7/9/2009 1:38:21 PM | why thankkk you lol. I donno, maybe I need to send out more. | |
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| Help here... Posted: 7/9/2009 1:42:48 PM | As a guy, I would say.
And I know from previous posts you apparently attract guys over thirty...but
It seems that you interests are minimal. You have people in more than 1/2 of your pics...are they past boyfriends/girlfriends. What's going on here?
From what I've seen is when one creates "about me", it's good to actually separate paragraphs with spaces for better readability(umm, yeah I think that's a word).
Your overall content body is lacking a bit of personality and flow I guess you would say.
What is there really to be interested in? You go to college for marketing, like music and politics somewhat.
Interesting thought. You are going to college for marketing. Maybe try "marketing" yourself...and I don't mean this in a bashing or degrading way. | |
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| Help here... Posted: 7/9/2009 2:05:18 PM | Thanks a lot. That did help, but i dont' have any other pictures to put up, I guess I'll have to crop them | |
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| Help here... Posted: 7/9/2009 2:24:45 PM | That or have pictures taken. ;)
Invest the time and energy on your profile that you would on a client's campaign (if you're that far along), and treat it as an exercise that will improve both your dating life, and your marketing acumen.
If you'd give some client the same treatment (why reshoot when we can just stretch what you have), I'm certain they'd find another agency, if yaknowwhatImean ;) | |
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